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Joey's Conscience

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Always the "reviews" take things out of context so much and just call it bad writing, that I don't even feel like responding anymore, because instead of well-intentioned comments, it feels full of aggressiveness... I don't know... I hope I'm not being too prejudiced (although I feel that way).

What I want to say i; I even feel that many want LP to be A or B, or to look like this or that game.... No one would like to be told that your work should be like Juan's or Josh's, just because you like Juan or Josh better.... That's why I don't feel it as constructive criticism, but as a different point of view, and that's fine. I always take the time to read feedback and improve as much as possible, but as long as the vision is the same or at least the player has taken the trouble to understand that vision and not just compare and demand. Because that becomes a destructive criticism instead of being constructive, if a dev listens to all that and seeks to please everyone, the game loses its focus and instead of pleasing everyone, it ends up losing itself. Yes, maybe in terms of money raised it would be better, but I wouldn't feel comfortable trying to please everyone instead of having fun doing what I do.

It is assumed in the game universe that a person should have a "neutral personality", then by splitting a person into an alter and their reflection, you have two extremes of their personality. This is shown in the game with Mary and Maxy's personalities, which are exaggerated opposites, for example. I find it an interesting concept, as LP characters are not designed to be likable, they are opposite extremes of a personality and I know it's hard to empathize with them all (Impossible even for me, I have to admit that I have my favorites and others not so much hahaha ), they are exaggerated and sometimes shocking, but for me, it's what gives personality to the story and I like it that way.

LP is as much of a sandbox as a GTA game, there's a story with multiple outcomes and a lot of optional content. I would have loved to make an RPG with a mute protagonist and only dialogue options and hundreds of story changes and variations (like Fallout New Vegas), but it was too ambitious for my first game, and it wouldn't be as meaningful an ending as I want for LP.

Finally... Sasha isn't supposed to be someone trustworthy.... She's not supposed to be someone nice, nor does she meet any requirements to be a Waifu.... Her interactions are frustrating as she is someone who is manipulative and a liar..... You don't even know if what he says is true (You can assume it's all true, but how do you know? Just because a stranger tells you things you'll believe everything?

I don't know, Sasha for me has been a character that has given me a strange perspective as a writer, as she has been polarizing.... They always say that she's "very well written" or that "she's a mess of a character", honestly as a content creator I must admit it's been a fun experience xD

But I don't know, Lucky Paradox for me is an experiment.... It wasn't thought for a massive audience or to please the majority... It's written as if it were an encyclopedia and demands a lot from the player to connect the dots in a coherent way. It can be a frustrating experience, I accept that.... but to say it's bad writing? I just idk... Maybe you don't like the style, but that doesn't mean it's wrong, it's just different.

Well long post, sorry lol

tl:dr: Welp xD
Just pay no mind to him. Calling your writing "bad", specially in the context of porn games is just laughable, seriously. When the person comes in complaining about Yui and Maxy's immediate attraction to the MC, both of which are explained by the story, and says a character is badly written simply because she's not trustworthy, you know to just shrug it off.

You're creating something that's not as easily digestible as the stuff ppl are used to in here. But that's also what makes it special. For what it's worth, Ive played dozens of games on this site, including several of the highest rated, and most popular. Your game comfortably stands among the best. Keep doing what you're doing, can't wait to see what's to come.
 

Orion626

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Dec 30, 2021
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I started playing Lucky Paradox 0.7.01 and its fantastic so far. I wanted a reality check in case i have done something incorrect, but the story progress seams to have stalled on all the girls. i am on day 79, all of the girls story progress are instructing me to wait or in the case of Sasha, to progress the main story (spend more time with Prim). All the events for each girl, is either work in progress or event unavailable. Did i miss something or do simply need to power through each day until something triggers?

My apologies if this has already been addressed in this thread. If so, let me know and i can hunt the resolution down. thanks!
 

MasterWizard1

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Jul 31, 2019
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I started playing Lucky Paradox 0.7.01 and its fantastic so far. I wanted a reality check in case i have done something incorrect, but the story progress seams to have stalled on all the girls. i am on day 79, all of the girls story progress are instructing me to wait or in the case of Sasha, to progress the main story (spend more time with Prim). All the events for each girl, is either work in progress or event unavailable. Did i miss something or do simply need to power through each day until something triggers?

My apologies if this has already been addressed in this thread. If so, let me know and i can hunt the resolution down. thanks!
Yeah if it says "Work in progress" then for that activity like for example charisma training with Prim, Guitar lessons with Maxy, or the main story then that is it for the current version. If it says "unavailable" means that you need to progress their story more to unlock it. If it tells you to wait then it might take a couple in game days to trigger
 

Orion626

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Dec 30, 2021
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Yeah if it says "Work in progress" then for that activity like for example charisma training with Prim, Guitar lessons with Maxy, or the main story then that is it for the current version. If it says "unavailable" means that you need to progress their story more to unlock it. If it tells you to wait then it might take a couple in game days to trigger
Thank you for the reality check.

OK, get this. So at the end of each day I always chose to the "sleep with Prim" option at nighttime, because why not. It wasn't until I decided to sleep in my room did I finally get a trigger to progress Charlotte's story line finally.
 

Halbyn

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Dec 8, 2021
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Thanks for the 7.0 android port, its much appreciated.
But please consider changing the menu to the bottom of the screen. Even turning it off leaves a floating arrow thats really distracting.
 

PandaSuky

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Jul 25, 2019
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Can someone help me please i did all i could do wjth yui and charlotte but i have 1 missing scene from both like Yui 5th scene and 7th charlotte scene
 

MasterWizard1

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Jul 31, 2019
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Can someone help me please i did all i could do wjth yui and charlotte but i have 1 missing scene from both like Yui 5th scene and 7th charlotte scene
The yui one is on the beach. Visit her there at noon and choose her activity. The charlotte one is a shower scene. Check the mornings to see if she is in there
 
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jynkkyacco

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Aug 1, 2017
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Is my game or save fucked? I can only see these two when i click the heart icon and i can't progress because im unsure if the content ended or i am not doing something. Last thing that happened was the Primrose cake scene and after that Sasha talked and gave me 500 dollars.
 

Alfre4u

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Is my game or save fucked? I can only see these two when i click the heart icon and i can't progress because im unsure if the content ended or i am not doing something. Last thing that happened was the Primrose cake scene and after that Sasha talked and gave me 500 dollars.
Not positive but I think ya a version made your save no longer work properly I would say.

IDK do not take my word, but a couple times this "Saves No longer work" has happened/been said during the making of this, and looks like that would be likely the case here.
 

Ashenthorn

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Stawer : ETA on the v7.0 Mac build?
I have no problem running the PC version using the Mac Ren'Py SDK, but other users might not know how.
Normally, I'd just build the Mac version and upload it, but 4.25GB is a little large. Screen Shot 2022-01-14 at 11.12.31 AM.png
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