Stawer:
For what it's worth, I just got back into LP after that big revamp a couple of versions ago where all the saves got nuked. It's still a very nice piece of work overall, though I'm way more invested in all the Dragon girls than I am in Anton and the Fireflies.
One thing that's bothering me, though, in case you haven't been told this already:
When you have sex with Yui before turning in for the night, she'll say "I love you" and your character will say "So do I, Yui."
I'm guessing this is a translation issue. It would be more appropriate to put "I love you too, Yui," or words to that effect. "So do I" is more like, "Yeah, I love me too." It makes the MC look like a complete douchenozzle, which generally isn't his deal.