Hello.
The sumary and samples made me come. And the result is too short to really assess the game.
The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is simple and easy to follow.
The artistic side is fine.
The protagonist decided to change his environment for college, where he'll meet new people and something more may happen.
The characters are interesting. While the athletic crowd seem awful, Greg was nice at the gym. The MC is neutral enough to be shaped by our playthrough (not sure if what happens in the teacher's room was necessary).
The story is limited to meeting different people, a single choice for an intellectual or athletic path (more are needed to make it a game and not a kinetic one, not that it's bad either way, it's just completely different; also, I hope intelligence and sports won't always be mutually exclusive) and the first issue he encounters.
The artistic side isn't that bad. It made me think of Living in Kanazawa. It would have been better to have the photos as is but I've seen worse either with that filter or 3dcg/2dcg/pixel art, even ai cg. I can't really talk about sex scenes since it's limited to a blowjob in a dream.
There are as many women as men. So it could lead to many possibilities (group sex, bi playthrough, sissification), though it's too early to know what and it piqued my curiosity.
The english still needs some work. But more importantly, it's important to be careful about the names and staying consistent with them. You should avoid abbreviations (like this one
). Also, there's a difference between ' and ". You should also differentiate speech and thought (it's not always done), otherwise it can be confusing. When there's a long sentence, it can cover the options at the bottom (like this
), so you need to take that into consideration.
The dialog with Timmy on day 3 should be different, depending on if we stayed with him or not the second day. I understand you made it neutral enough to reduce your work but it feels off, particularly if we go to the gym.
I didn't try your other games since I have a hard time playing as a woman but this one could become interesting, depending on where you want it to go.
Good continuation.