PTGames I really like the game. The character renders are great, the lore is interesting, and as a lover of sandbox, you did a good job with it (also little to no bugs). Really looking forward to seeing what you do with the lore.
If I may offer some minor criticism on the writing though. The weaker element is the dialogue with the girls. It's very -um- vanilla? For some reason, the MC is such a smooth talker that he can get in their pants with little work. Also, they're starting to get kind of repetitive.
Girl says she is not hot, MC says yes you are, girl says o nvm I am hot, how do you do that? MC: I'm just that good. Girl: wow so modest.
I dunno I guess it wouldn't make that big of a difference if there was some conflict but at the moment everything just works out perfectly for MC and he has no problems of his own. I know people will kill him for his power but it just doesn't feel threatening.
Regardless, it's still a very well made game and I look forward to it's future. (I hope MC utilizes his mind reading power more later)
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Also a minor bug on my end: the 4th photoshoot with Claire got automatically unlocked after submitting the 3rd shoot.