Ren'Py Lunar's Chosen [Ep.2 v0.4.3 Public] [PTGames]
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- Oct 31, 2018
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When she does get her custom suit from Katie's company we'll probably be there to help test it but she's not gonna become one of the main girls, as a matter of fact, I think we have met all the main girls the game's gonna get til the end.
- Aug 18, 2018
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She doesn't have to be a main LI, just show up a bit more. Have a photo shoot or become a regular at the club or something.
- Sep 17, 2018
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I did, no idea how I managed that, thank you!
Maybe, we'll see. Might show up for a photoshoot, but no plans for any other scenes with her.
- Oct 5, 2017
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I would recommend replacing the ifs with elifs, and having an else at the end saying something like 'Error: Unknown progress value: 24' or something, that would make it much easier to spot similar errors in future.
- Sep 17, 2018
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It's been on my to do list for a while. Maybe I'll actually get round to it for V0.21
I do wish MC had been turned back into a woman to join the girls on the girls' night out.
I think I'm soft locked. The computer hints for all characters, except Amber's, say "I should continue the other characters storylines". Amber's says "I should wait for Amber to check out that photostudio. I should look for more photoshoot opportunities with the other girls while I wait for Amber."
But I'm not getting any more photoshoot opportunities. Tried speaking with all of the characters and none of them give me the option. I unlocked Amy's first 4 shoots, Claire's first 3, Katie's first 3, Serena's first 3, Amber's first 2.
Any help?
But I'm not getting any more photoshoot opportunities. Tried speaking with all of the characters and none of them give me the option. I unlocked Amy's first 4 shoots, Claire's first 3, Katie's first 3, Serena's first 3, Amber's first 2.
Any help?
- Oct 5, 2017
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I'm not the biggest fan of the being turned into a woman parts, but that does sound like an awful lot of fun.
- Sep 17, 2018
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You're missing at least one with Katie. Talk to her again on Sunday evening and ask her to model nude.
Played the game for a bit; waffled a bit about whether to give my impressions or not - I will, but try not to take them to personally,'cause unfortunately I haven't got much positive to say.
It's a porn game and porn game setups especially with this sort of protagonist tends to be kinda lazy, but this one takes the cake. Does he have some deep connection to the moon? Perhaps an astronomy fan that for years observed and obsessed with it? Is there some karmic payment for a past deed? Some wacky situation he accidentally gets involved in? No, absolutely nothing, it's just "oh, I'm vaguely tired so I'll just, uh, be in the middle of this lawn here and suddenly gain superpowers". And that's the exciting opening to a world of magic ...
And of course conveniently there's a girl around that right away starts helping out; leaving aside his childhood friend being infinitely supportive (despite him being a creepy perv, of course). But, okay, it's just setting up the story, maybe once it gets going a bit ... ? Naw, again, nothing. All the female characters are just waiting to be helpful little sex friends for the protagonist, none of them require any sort of effort on his part ("oh you're vaguely nice and only want me to model for free for you, how could I not absolutely love you?"); let alone does it have anything much to do with his superpowers. I mean, one early point is literally "this girl has a secret she's thinking about right now!" - which the plot doesn't resolve via, I don't know, perhaps using the MC's literal mind reading ability? Naw, just go to her friend who readily blurts out her roommate's biggest secret to some guy she vaguely knows because she thinks that's a great idea. Instead the mind reading ability is used for amazingly deep insights like "she's sunning by the pool so maybe I should bring some sunscreen".
Sandbox started out very narrow, then got a little bit better as time gets on, but doesn't seem to keep developing that way. It's largely linear so for the most part feels like a waste of time. It's just going around triggering the next event; there's no deeper mechanics or much of additional non-story content you can visit or that's there for any immersive purpose or that'd otherwise justify the sandbox environment. Not having to ie grind stats and automatically earning money per week I applaud, but this might as well have been a VN.
Visuals I thought were okay though nothing that stands out (difficult to do that, granted, I think this level is fine, generally speaking). Prose per se is okay too; sometimes a bit too rushed but compared to some other games at least it feels like actual people talking to each other (most of the time anyway) and isn't riddled with a thousand grammar and proofreading mistakes.
That's about it. I guess I should have taken a closer look at the reviews because despite a decent rating it seems these observations aren't exactly new. Oh well. I think I'll go a little bit further just to see, but doubt it's going to change much overall.
It's a porn game and porn game setups especially with this sort of protagonist tends to be kinda lazy, but this one takes the cake. Does he have some deep connection to the moon? Perhaps an astronomy fan that for years observed and obsessed with it? Is there some karmic payment for a past deed? Some wacky situation he accidentally gets involved in? No, absolutely nothing, it's just "oh, I'm vaguely tired so I'll just, uh, be in the middle of this lawn here and suddenly gain superpowers". And that's the exciting opening to a world of magic ...
And of course conveniently there's a girl around that right away starts helping out; leaving aside his childhood friend being infinitely supportive (despite him being a creepy perv, of course). But, okay, it's just setting up the story, maybe once it gets going a bit ... ? Naw, again, nothing. All the female characters are just waiting to be helpful little sex friends for the protagonist, none of them require any sort of effort on his part ("oh you're vaguely nice and only want me to model for free for you, how could I not absolutely love you?"); let alone does it have anything much to do with his superpowers. I mean, one early point is literally "this girl has a secret she's thinking about right now!" - which the plot doesn't resolve via, I don't know, perhaps using the MC's literal mind reading ability? Naw, just go to her friend who readily blurts out her roommate's biggest secret to some guy she vaguely knows because she thinks that's a great idea. Instead the mind reading ability is used for amazingly deep insights like "she's sunning by the pool so maybe I should bring some sunscreen".
Sandbox started out very narrow, then got a little bit better as time gets on, but doesn't seem to keep developing that way. It's largely linear so for the most part feels like a waste of time. It's just going around triggering the next event; there's no deeper mechanics or much of additional non-story content you can visit or that's there for any immersive purpose or that'd otherwise justify the sandbox environment. Not having to ie grind stats and automatically earning money per week I applaud, but this might as well have been a VN.
Visuals I thought were okay though nothing that stands out (difficult to do that, granted, I think this level is fine, generally speaking). Prose per se is okay too; sometimes a bit too rushed but compared to some other games at least it feels like actual people talking to each other (most of the time anyway) and isn't riddled with a thousand grammar and proofreading mistakes.
That's about it. I guess I should have taken a closer look at the reviews because despite a decent rating it seems these observations aren't exactly new. Oh well. I think I'll go a little bit further just to see, but doubt it's going to change much overall.
- Sep 17, 2018
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All fair points, but some I feel need addressing as they're not entirely accurate imo.
As for the sunscreen, as I said, he can only read what they're thinking about right as he's reading their mind. As you say, someone wanting sunscreen while sunbathing seems pretty fitting does it not?
That all said, thank you for the feedback, please don't feel like I'm telling you that you're wrong with your opinions, just hoping to provide a bit of an explanation. Feedback like this is incredibly useful, I love negative feedback when it's constructive because it gives me things to work on and lets me know areas I can improve. So thank you for taking the time to write it and for being constructive with it
It's explained that Lunar picks people at random, because she thinks it'll be fun. There's no need for any connection to her to be chosen by her. As for napping in the park, personally I don't find that unusual. People lay down on the grass and relax in parks all the time. Although in this case, he didn't nap, so much as pass out. It's also not a coincidence that the player meets the people he meets, she might be nudging things a little...
The story pretty clearly spells out that his powers are limited at the start to only being able to work when people are relaxed and even then, only being able to read what they're thinking about at that exact moment. There's a whole scene where you do try to use your powers to find out her secret, but she's only thinking about whether to tell you or not, not what the secret actually is. As for her roommate telling you, does it really seem that odd? Claire doesn't think Amy has anything to hide or be ashamed about and she see's the player is also researching magic and suspects he may be able to help Amy in some way. So her telling the player fits her character.
As for the sunscreen, as I said, he can only read what they're thinking about right as he's reading their mind. As you say, someone wanting sunscreen while sunbathing seems pretty fitting does it not?
The latest update added five more repeatable events to the sandbox, with more being added every update. There are also additional optional scenes available, such as the storyline with Vee, and secret images to find. I admit, there should be more to a sandbox, but the game is a work in progress. More will get added overtime. Unfortunately the early game would require a complete rework to flesh out as I was new to this and didn't really know what I was doing when I started, which is reflected in how bare bones the early game is.
You should see the game before my wonderful community reports grammar mistakes and typos. I have them to thank for there being so few, without them it'd be horrendous
That all said, thank you for the feedback, please don't feel like I'm telling you that you're wrong with your opinions, just hoping to provide a bit of an explanation. Feedback like this is incredibly useful, I love negative feedback when it's constructive because it gives me things to work on and lets me know areas I can improve. So thank you for taking the time to write it and for being constructive with it
I have a problem, claire already gave me her address, but her house does not appear and I unlocked all the photos, but amber does not send me the email of the photography place
- Sep 17, 2018
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I was able to fix it, it's that I was using the nav to go to the different places and I forgot to use the car, because of it I couldn't go to Claire's house
Damn I feel dumb now. I thought I'd spoken with her on every day at every time point already but apparently I hadn't. Cheers!
Pretty sure I've more or less reached the end of current content, looking forward to more. I would review but in my head this is easily a 2 or 3 star but in my heart its 4 or 5. Few games manage to be so mind numbingly infuriating and also endearing. I can see this one turning into an all time great once the content gets fully fleshed out and maybe a rework of the begining.
More non-futa meg plz.
More non-futa meg plz.
- Nov 20, 2018
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I got an odd bug; I don't know what it is, but the game says to let you know, PTGames. I'm including my save just before this in case you need it. Basically, I visited Imry's house for the first time and then tried to go back home (to Katie's place). When I arrive in the garage, this message appears:
I didn't see this reported yet, so you probably should know. I have no idea whether anyone else has gotten this, but from searching this thread it at least didn't look like anybody here had.
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- Sep 17, 2018
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Found the issue, should now be fixed for next update, thanks