Ren'Py Lunar's Chosen [Ep.2 v0.6 Public] [PTGames]

[Krynh]

One sentence review:

The better version of Personal Trainer. Oddly many simularities but a lot more enjoyable.

 

[lemonfreak]

One sentence review:

The better version of Personal Trainer. Oddly many simularities.

Crucial difference, only one of them is enjoyable.

 

[Krynh]

Crucial difference, only one of them is enjoyable.

Oh yes should have clarified

 

[Master of Puppets]

One sentence review:

The better version of Personal Trainer. Oddly many simularities but a lot more enjoyable.

That's two sentences.

 

[throwawayman777]

Lewd Patcher's been down for a while now. Any other sources for the patch or can someone share it?

 

[AceOfNiagara]

Lewd Patcher's been down for a while now. Any other sources for the patch or can someone share it?

Try the alternate site for patches

You must be registered to see the links

or use the one I've attached.
Be sure to unzip and then drop into the Lunar Chosen*\game folder.

 

[throwawayman777]

Try the alternate site for patches

You must be registered to see the links

or use the one I've attached.
Be sure to unzip and then drop into the Lunar Chosen*\game folder.

Much appreciated. Thanks for the info as well.

 

[BGRW2020]

Really would be nice if the MC had a little more control / choice with Kate, not being so open and not wearing that BDSM crap outfits, she could just as easily deliver them to Claires sick club without the bull (at least give readers a choice here) I'm not sure how many men would like their women displayed like that in public

 

[BGRW2020]

This is quite the rant. I'll address a couple of points.

Lunar is a goddess, she just wants to be entertained. Giving the MC super powers would be boring. Giving him a minor power and seeing what happens is much more interesting for her.

A lot of characters are futa because Patrons wanted them to be. There are still plenty of full female characters and if you get sick of futa's, toggle them off. I presume the "Giving 4% of your audience 20% of the known characters" is meaning that only 4% of the audience want futa characters? In which case that number is horribly inaccurate. I'm all for debating things, but not when people just start making up numbers.

This is a story about a character just learning about the magical world and realising that a huge chunk of what he considered normal was actually just an illusion. Suddenly where he only saw human's before, there's magical creatures everywhere that he just couldn't see. This is a world where magic and technology exist capable of transforming people, do you really think people wouldn't experiment and have fun?

As for the small breasts and small ass, none of the main characters are like that because in rendered media it's incredibly difficult to convey age on petite characters. Many of them end up looking like children and frankly I'm not interested in having any character that could even be slightly considered child like in my game. The only real way to offset this is by bulking them up a bit.

Actually I also don't like the Futa content so much - I did turn it off , but I do like the magical characters etc.... just want the total choice to go the route I want and protect my girls from the sick club you have so forwardly placed in the game - Claire isn;t even sexy, but I didn't mind helping her - I just don't want to be involved with her club

 

[PTGames]

Actually I also don't like the Futa content so much - I did turn it off , but I do like the magical characters etc.... just want the total choice to go the route I want and protect my girls from the sick club you have so forwardly placed in the game - Claire isn;t even sexy, but I didn't mind helping her - I just don't want to be involved with her club

If you dislike some content, that's fine, but please refrain from insulting it just because YOU dislike it.

And while I would love to offer choices about every bit of content in the game, the dev work that would create would be far to much for me to do. As you say, the club features prominently in the game, if you dislike it that much, maybe this game just isn't for you.

Not to mention I've never once put any hint at the MC having any control over what the girls do in the game (other than, ironically, Claire who likes being dominated). At most he supports them in what THEY want to do, so him controlling whether Katie wears the outfit to the club or not would be extremely out of character for both of them.

 

[BGRW2020]

If you dislike some content, that's fine, but please refrain from insulting it just because YOU dislike it.

And while I would love to offer choices about every bit of content in the game, the dev work that would create would be far to much for me to do. As you say, the club features prominently in the game, if you dislike it that much, maybe this game just isn't for you.

Not to mention I've never once put any hint at the MC having any control over what the girls do in the game (other than, ironically, Claire who likes being dominated). At most he supports them in what THEY want to do, so him controlling whether Katie wears the outfit to the club or not would be extremely out of character for both of them.

Actually I would say Katie is completely out of character - she was the shy one that the MC fell in love with as she also did with him she was the one who asked him the opinions on her new clothing lines - so she would never normally walk around as a slut and he surely would not agree to it either - People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs.
Your game started out really nice but you are way to leaning on the perverted in the last couple of updates - sorry to see that happen

 

[Tavi13]

Actually I would say Katie is completely out of character - she was the shy one that the MC fell in love with as she also did with him she was the one who asked him the opinions on her new clothing lines - so she would never normally walk around as a slut and he surely would not agree to it either - People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs.
Your game started out really nice but you are way to leaning on the perverted in the last couple of updates - sorry to see that happen

Are you really trying to tell the dev that they don't understand the personality of the character(s) that they created? Wow.

In my experience it is usually those shy, quiet types that turn out to be the biggest freaks. Since you seem to be unaware of this; there are a large number of consenting adults, in loving relationships, that "dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs" in real life. It is a large enough number that there are entire industries that have been built around, and cater to, the lifestyle. Everything from clothing & "toy" lines, to literal clubs.

At this point I am pretty sure that the dev knows what their characters personalities/fetishes/desires/etc are, and will continue to write the story the way they want. Might want to decide if this isn't your thing.

 

[Aioto]

Actually I would say Katie is completely out of character - she was the shy one that the MC fell in love with as she also did with him she was the one who asked him the opinions on her new clothing lines - so she would never normally walk around as a slut and he surely would not agree to it either - People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs.
Your game started out really nice but you are way to leaning on the perverted in the last couple of updates - sorry to see that happen

Katie, shy? Really?

 

[faradhii]

Are you really trying to tell the dev that they don't understand the personality of the character(s) that they created? Wow.

In my experience it is usually those shy, quiet types that turn out to be the biggest freaks. Since you seem to be unaware of this; there are a large number of consenting adults, in loving relationships, that "dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs" in real life. It is a large enough number that there are entire industries that have been built around, and cater to, the lifestyle. Everything from clothing & "toy" lines, to literal clubs.

At this point I am pretty sure that the dev knows what their characters personalities/fetishes/desires/etc are, and will continue to write the story the way they want. Might want to decide if this isn't your thing.

I see by your tags of Love of Magic and MNF that you too are a man of taste and discernment

 

[PTGames]

Actually I would say Katie is completely out of character - she was the shy one that the MC fell in love with as she also did with him she was the one who asked him the opinions on her new clothing lines - so she would never normally walk around as a slut and he surely would not agree to it either - People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs.
Your game started out really nice but you are way to leaning on the perverted in the last couple of updates - sorry to see that happen

Katie's never been shy and she definitely enjoys being slutty. One of her kinks is being called/referring to herself as a slut.



She asks MC about the clothing line because she values his opinion, not because she's shy about anyone else seeing it. She has an entire company that makes sex toys, why would she be shy about anything sexual when that's her entire business?

"People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs."

They really do. That's actually a big part of the fetish community you just described.

As I said, if you dislike the direction the game is going, then I'm sorry, but the game may not be for you anymore. It seems you've put your own values on the characters that just do not exist within the game.

 

[BGRW2020]

Katie's never been shy and she definitely enjoys being slutty. One of her kinks is being called/referring to herself as a slut.

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She asks MC about the clothing line because she values his opinion, not because she's shy about anyone else seeing it. She has an entire company that makes sex toys, why would she be shy about anything sexual when that's her entire business?

"People that love each other protect each other and don't dawn masks so they won't be recognized in clubs."

They really do. That's actually a big part of the fetish community you just described.

As I said, if you dislike the direction the game is going, then I'm sorry, but the game may not be for you anymore. It seems you've put your own values on the characters that just do not exist within the game.

And that is why we have people who like fetishes - because they have no real love and Katie was shy - she would not even discuss what she did for a living until the MC brought it out of her - please don't make her a degenerate - it would be nice if you had some normal people in this story

 

[lemonfreak]

And that is why we have people who like fetishes - because they have no real love and Katie was shy - she would not even discuss what she did for a living until the MC brought it out of her - please don't make her a degenerate - it would be nice if you had some normal people in this story

This says nothing about the characters and everything about you

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

And that is why we have people who like fetishes - because they have no real love and Katie was shy - she would not even discuss what she did for a living until the MC brought it out of her - please don't make her a degenerate - it would be nice if you had some normal people in this story

That is not what "being shy" means, she simply choose not to tell Alec what her job was until she felt confortable that he wasn't a prude.

 

[PTGames]

And that is why we have people who like fetishes - because they have no real love

That's just not true and actually insulting to a lot of people. Please don't make such comments when you're clearly extremely ignorant on the subject.

and Katie was shy - she would not even discuss what she did for a living until the MC brought it out of her - please don't make her a degenerate - it would be nice if you had some normal people in this story

She wasn't shy about it, she just wasn't sure how he would react to her knowing she was rich. That's even said in the story.

People who have a fetish aren't degenerates, they ARE normal people. If you're going to use my game as an excuse to insult people just because they like something you dislike, please never play my game again.

 

[Tavi13]

And that is why we have people who like fetishes - because they have no real love

You clearly have absolutely no idea what you are talking about, and I actually kind of feel bad for you.

Katie was shy - she would not even discuss what she did for a living until the MC brought it out of her - please don't make her a degenerate -

I think you are confusing shy with cautious. She runs a company that makes sex toys, not really a conversation opener because of people that think there is something wrong with doing so. Almost anyone that works in any type of sex related industry tend to keep it to themselves (at least at first) because of judgemental idiots that think there is something wrong with it. Ironically; these judgemental idiots also tend to be their best customers...go figure.

it would be nice if you had some normal people in this story

Every person in this story is completely normal, sorry if the world we live in contains more types of personalities than you are comfortable with.