Hey,
Bear in the Night, when the MC reads the note slipped under his door (in this latest release), it reads, "
I'm glad the phantom I put on you failed", but then the MC's thoughts read, "
Pissed on me?". The first text you had is correct; the MC's thoughts should use the same verb ("
Put on me?").
Additionally, I've noticed
you sometimes use "Ow!", like when the masked man is taking the MC above the first floor. The word you want in English is "Hey!" in these cases; "ow!" is an expression of pain.
I don't normally worry about errors with text here and there for developers whose first language, but this is kind of a bigger mistake, so I figured you'd want to know. BTW, is the game still in Episode 2? I don't actually care per se, but I'm curious.