the whole dialogues are just BAD.. not just broken english but they read like a 12 year old wrote the script between individuals.. there are conversations with words in there in just the current S3 Prologue that no real person would say if having a conversation.. best eg i can say it just that it feels wooden at times.. Its frustrating as there are long chapters of the dialogue that seem fine and you get into the flow of the script and story only to meet the slip back into broken english and wooden speech
Offering specific examples would probably be of a much greater help then just responding to their request for such with more generalized complaints.