Ren'Py Lust Academy [S4 v4.3.1d] [Bear in the Night]

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Bear in the Night

Bear in the Night

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cleanfeel said:
In the spirit of constructive feedback, here's mine:

If 10 people say a scene looks bad, don't redo it. It's not worth it. A game of this type is a medium to tell a story. Making a particular scene better animated, better lighting, different word in dialog, etc is a waste of development time. Spelling mistakes, sure. Spend 5 minutes fixing it max. New dialog, new scene, new animations, new cum stains? Fuck no.

I believe developers who spend months remastering the game because when I started I didn't know what I was doing!" is purely trolling and milking for more money. Be more like Eva Kiss. Eva Kiss just makes another game and improves upon the first, not go back and redo her earlier works.
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M...thanks for your feedback :)
Here is yes and no. If something is completely bad, it's better to redo the things (if we have enough resources for that and it won't significantly reduce development speed), because it can be a game-stopper for a large group.
 
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Is the new content for S2 only in sandbox mode? I didn't think the changelog was clear on that.

Bear in the Night said:
The same question is above. Can you provide more feedback about S3, why do you think it's "crappy"?
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First I'll say renders are really good and animations are great!! As far as season 3 for me personally, I didn't think introducing new characters was necessary. At this point I'm locked in on who I want to spend time with, and basically zipping through those I don't. That said I don't know how much longer this will be and I typically assume by this point it's starting to wind down a bit and getting close to the finish so bringing in several new characters just slows development. Overall I'm still a big fan, the story isn't so boring and dragging on to the point that I feel the need to run through dialogue and I'm not usually into the magic/fantasy type games so that's an accomplishment in itself.
 
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I can't get any of the unseen scenes from 2 or 3 working even with the gallery unlockers and mods - any suggestions for what I may be doing wrong?
 
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The blue haired girl is borring as fuck... who in her right mind join a school of sorcery to spend all her days locked up in her room playing video games.

I'm a gamer/geek too but i don't have magic, she prefer to play sorcerer in an mmo to have the higehst dps when she can have it irl that doesn't make sens (And how is she not expelled spending all her afternoon playing video games when 1st years have potion classroom in the afternoon???).
 
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Lorion2k20

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Changelog - Season 2 1.12.1d said:
Majorly rewritten and proofread dialogues
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Fooled me with this one. ;)

Theres still obvious stuff like "(It seems to be a difficult book. I'll go and help her.)" in there. Amelie is carrying a heavy book in this scene. Same event: "Would you be me, if I told you, that ..." where be should be believe (and maybe interpunction, no native english speaker myself).

And overall super cringy dialogues:

Molly afterparty scene:

MC: Yeah!
MC: Molly...
MC: Yes, yes, yes!
MC: And one more time!

...while shes blowing him.

Molly: I'm already flowing with impatience.
MC: That's great!
MC: What a beautiful ass you have!
Molly: I have an ass and you have me, ha-ha!
MC: Its about that.
...
MC: I'm about to cum!
MC: What a buzz!
MC: Now I'm trembling myself.
Molly: Yeah!
MC: And one more time!
MC: There we go ...
Molly: MC...
MC: You are my wonderful...
Molly: Wow! That was really cool.

Is this supposed to turn you on? Quite the opposite.

And I remember when it finally got serious with Sabrina... the awkward and cringy dialogue with baby here and babe there ruined the whole experience for me. :(

But don't get me wrong. Overall I really like the game. The girls are cute and hot, the main- and sidestories are interesting enough. I like the sandbox and minigames. But those super badly written dialogues (grammar and content wise) are a huge turn off!

So *please* find at least a sufficiently educated native english speaker to do the proofreading to get rid of the bad translation. Best would obviously be a experienced native english writer.

Cause at the moment the bad translation and writing pulls the game way down even though it could be one of the best porn games (in my opinion at least).
 
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Bear in the Night

Bear in the Night

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Lorion2k20 said:
Fooled me with this one. ;)

Theres still obvious stuff like "(It seems to be a difficult book. I'll go and help her.)" in there. Amelie is carrying a heavy book in this scene. Same event: "Would you be me, if I told you, that ..." where be should be believe (and maybe interpunction, no native english speaker myself).

And overall super cringy dialogues:

Molly afterparty scene:

MC: Yeah!
MC: Molly...
MC: Yes, yes, yes!
MC: And one more time!

...while shes blowing him.

Molly: I'm already flowing with impatience.
MC: That's great!
MC: What a beautiful ass you have!
Molly: I have an ass and you have me, ha-ha!
MC: Its about that.
...
MC: I'm about to cum!
MC: What a buzz!
MC: Now I'm trembling myself.
Molly: Yeah!
MC: And one more time!
MC: There we go ...
Molly: MC...
MC: You are my wonderful...
Molly: Wow! That was really cool.

Is this supposed to turn you on? Quite the opposite.

And I remember when it finally got serious with Sabrina... the awkward and cringy dialogue with baby here and babe there ruined the whole experience for me. :(

But don't get me wrong. Overall I really like the game. The girls are cute and hot, the main- and sidestories are interesting enough. I like the sandbox and minigames. But those super badly written dialogues (grammar and content wise) are a huge turn off!

So *please* find at least a sufficiently educated native english speaker to do the proofreading to get rid of the bad translation. Best would obviously be a experienced native english writer.

Cause at the moment the bad translation and writing pulls the game way down even though it could be one of the best porn games (in my opinion at least).
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What about S3? (so far I know 3.4.1 still has not been proofread, but the previous versions are)
Talking about S2 we did a massive proofreading, but maybe it's about 70% of the game, so there are still some ...bad dialogues
 
Solomon Grundy

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cynsaur said:
so is straight content avoidable or not?
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No, at least I don't think so. Pretty sure at least some sexy times is required with Leona. And anyway, even if you could skip all the straight sex in the game, you'd be missing about 98% of the sex there is to be had, sooooo not sure it would be worth it.
 
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henrysab

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Someone remind me when theres content with victoria. Ain't played this game for a year and aint nothing for her at all. So much yapping. Good job tho dev game is clean tho.
 
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