I bought both games in steam to support the author.
First game was amazing, story telling was good, scenes were top gun. But then I tried to play the second game.
We are supposed to play a Not-Harry Potter character with a difficult life at home that comes to a magic learning school.
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Bear in the Night I am not attacking you keep in mind I enjoyed immensely your 1st one, and I couldn't care for the story for the 2nd)
My Pet peeves are :
1) the names that the MC calls the girls. Aren't we supposed to be someone that values his girls a bit more?
2) how easy the girls are. All the girls, even the teachers act as if they are starved for attention.
3) the story diluted so much it is not even worth following anymore.
Some of the fixes I can suggest is limit the number of romance-able characters, you have way too many, you don't limit the choices and this makes you "forced" to include the romance for all of them. Clean the MC's vocabulary a bit and try to make the game have some more actual choices.