Of course.
Some things that actually feel bad or are bad:
1) You over use the word "baby"
2) Girls after Season 1 become so easy it is not even fun
3) MC reacts to various girls that we saw in S1, as well as if we saw them for the first time.
4) You try to add elaborate words where they are not needed. Keep it simple. Simple is not necessarily bad.
Lastly, I believe you added so many characters, and you want us to be able to romance them, but you are going the wrong way. Practically at this point if it is female and our character says hi it is almost instantly sex
there is also the factor that in season 1 Audrey took the MC to the brick house (more like a small castle) and showed him her Succubus form as well as had s.e.x. in her Succubus form with Stone Statues around them.
Yet he acted like he had never been there before, Even though in Season 3 he had just taken June there.
Also in Season 2 Elijah tells the MC about the pocket demeton and takes him into the forest and through the portal into the the pocket demeton where there is the ruins of a old stone building, telling the MC he can go there anytime he wants.
yet the MC never goes there again in Season 2.
But here we are in Season 3 and Elijah tells the MC about the portal to the pocket demeton in Molly's Cafe, and the MC had never heard about it before.
And last but not least The Moonwalk tincture, Audrey tell's the MC about it in Season 1, they have s.e.x using it after the first time the MC tried having s.e.x and he was a limp duck.
And yet here it is, in Season 3 Audrey tells the MC about The Moonwalk tincture as if he never knew it was for having sex and stuff with succubus and other stuff and he just happened to know how to make it.
I am honestly surprised that they didn't make it that the MC had to learn all over again how to make it.