Wow! Thank you for taking not only the time to play but catching all these spelling mistakes means a ton! This is my first time writing something this long haha and the passages make it tough to spell check, truly you're the MVP! As of right now I didn't include the penultimate happy ending although it is written... haha, In my head I'd like to do a second LDR that opens up the world a bit after you figure out Thursday, possibly proving a nice chapter end. But before that I wanted to get feedback on the style of "big story beats with little repayable stories sprinkled in."
Oh and the "worst case Ontario" is a reference to a show called "Trailer Park Boys", of course when I wrote it in I even said to myself, how many people will catch this haha.
Thanks again! It really does mean a lot to me! The corrections are made, I think I just need to wait for the Dev rank now so I can freely change the DL's to the new v0.11
Woosh. Yep, totally missed that reference. Though now I'll likely check it out.
Quite welcome regarding the typos, a small price to pay for the amusement factor.
No idea how long you've been plugging at this creation, but it was a pleasant surprise to find it, much like Mike, lengthy and taking its time to admire assorted (plot) curves. For a ".011" version, no less.
I suppose it bears repeating, I very much enjoyed how free and brazen the protagonist, family and the 'romance' was on display here. The MC is quite reasonably sized, has an ass of legend, clearly enjoying both sides of the fence, and has the support of the fam that only grows wilder as the story progresses.
Sharing scenes, one on one, top and bottom, wake up sex, even the tribe getting way more handsy amongst eachother by the 'end', as the lewdness continues to build. That's some solid smut.
And not a single @#!@ing cock cage in sight. It's a Christmas miracle!
Random suggestions, probably not this games speed or worth the trouble:
Since you're exploring sci fi themes and other weirdness, perhaps a way to go next beyond, or even approaching Thursday is some body transformation elements. MC decides to go all in on appearance to tease and appease Mike and the rest of her tribe, gaining some girls of her own (I apologize for nothing, yes, flat can be justice, I just like bewbs).
Maybe goes out in high, lewd society with the Mom being showed off (and likely shared) as she starts teaching the MC how to run a big corporation, wheeling and dealing.
The sister decides to strike out into the pron industry, dragging the MC along for fun and profit, etc.
Mike... I'm not sure. There's a weird bit in the game where he's drunk and sloshed, where the writing almost states he doesn't just want to be with the MC, he wants to BE the MC, signifying some potential gender bending smut on the horizon, but that may just be the late night or text being wonky.
Plus it'd almost be a shame to mess with the beefcake. Almost.
Anyway. Had fun. Thanks for writing the thing, haha.