VN Ren'Py Lust Storm [Ep.3 va1.3.3] [Volcano Games/Lust Storm]

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Lust Storm on Steam :FacePalm:

How can anyone who reads english be stupid enough to buy this on Stream?
I don't care about choices; I care about immersion. The art and animation are great, but the dialogue is SO BAD!!! :FacePalm:
With a moderately good English writer, this game could be awesome.

I have a theory:
This is part of Russia's propaganda program to drive English speakers crazy. :LOL:
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Rarely ever is.

I would still like a clone of some however since some games are never going to be finished, get to her route, or do something interesting with her.
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Lust Storm on Steam :FacePalm:

How can anyone who reads english be stupid enough to buy this on Stream?
I don't care about choices; I care about immersion. The art and animation are great, but the dialogue is SO BAD!!! :FacePalm:
With a moderately good English writer, this game could be awesome.

I have a theory:
This is part of Russia's propaganda program to drive English speakers crazy. :LOL:
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He's a good pony boy! ;)
This reply is 100% serious.
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The MC is being called "the player" throughout this update. I like it cuz it reminds me of a backstabbing fat piece of shit who used to call the MC "playa". Rest in pieces Big S.
 
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This reply is 100% serious.
All good points. And very well said.

We form our opinions mainly through life experience and cultural immersion. To an English speaker, this is poor dialogue with very nice images. Much of my frustration is the juxtaposition of good art and poor dialogue/grammar. I feel the same amount of time should be put into both. AVNs are getting better in that regard. AI editors are a big factor in that.

Like many others, this industry is a numbers game. If you have 2 million customers of AVNs (guesstimate) and 10% of them buy your game, you have 200,000 buyers. At 1 buck a pop (Low#) = $200,000. There are supposedly that many registered users here.
That's why there is so much of this coming out.
 
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All good points. And very well said.

We form our opinions mainly through life experience and cultural immersion. To an English speaker, this is poor dialogue with very nice images. Much of my frustration is the juxtaposition of good art and poor dialogue/grammar. I feel the same amount of time should be put into both. AVNs are getting better in that regard. AI editors are a big factor in that.

Like many others, this industry is a numbers game. If you have 2 million customers of AVNs (guesstimate) and 10% of them buy your game, you have 200,000 buyers. At 1 buck a pop = $200,000. There are supposedly that many registered users here.
That's why there is so much of this coming out.
I totally agree with you; I believe that the same amount of time SHOULD be put into both too.
But it is what it is, and most people don't think that way, nor are they capable of appreciating the correctness of a language which is not their own. They will keep forking out a few bucks here and there for some wank material.

BTW, on the topic of cultural immersion, earlier this year there was someone complaining in the RSSU thread (see my signature) that the English was very bad. That game is set in the Perestroika era USSR, and I thought that user's comment was funny because for me the characters' questionable English made total sense in this case and I always found it comical. I told him to picture them in his head talking with a heavy Russian accent for better immersion :LOL:
 

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I totally agree with you; I believe that the same amount of time SHOULD be put into both too.
But it is what it is, and most people don't think that way, nor are they capable of appreciating the correctness of a language which is not their own. They will keep forking out a few bucks here and there for some wank material.
Very true. It's a numbers game. ;)

BTW, on the topic of immersion, earlier this year there was someone complaining in the RSSU thread (see my signature) that the English was very bad. That game is set in the Perestroika era USSR, and I thought that user's comment was funny because for me the characters' questionable English made total sense in this case and I always found it comical. I told him to picture them in his head talking with a heavy Russian accent for better immersion. :LOL:
Haha, yeah, I know that game. I couldn't get into it for the same reason. The English was just off enough to annoy me.
Great renders and art. A lot of research must have gone into it. The motorcycle was awesome, all the vehicles were.

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I'll give that game another look.
 
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I'm not sure what to make out of this. With two releases (original plus this update to ep2 1.0.3) I'm still at a loss. Here's my reasoning:
  1. The writing seems scattered with bad English grammar making it a hell of an experience. We have present tense and past tense in the same sentence and whilst that's possible, we're talking about having the two different verbs action with the same subject. I first thought it was someone who used an online translator to translate from their native language to English but I'm thinking this might not be the case. If it is, then even their grammar in their native tongue is horrible.
  2. Bad spelling adds to the drama so you've left guessing completely removing you from the immersion the story plot suggests.
  3. A forced sexual scene appearing as a dream. I'm guessing it's to prevent persons from running away that look for action by the 2nd update. To be honest, that scene is totally uncalled for as there's actually no build-up or justification for it. I know it's an ADULT visual novel but persons forget AVN's are NOVELS with adult content added. So, where's the story? If I want just sex-scenes, there are various ways to get it without having to look for an AVN. I come for the story first, adult scenes second, not the other way around.
  4. Patchy dialogue - The conversation between the MC and the two females seems forced for lack of a better term. There's not enough information to suggest he's an introvert or one who's shy or has no experience with women. Remember, you're thrown straight into the story after the prologue with the two females, Elizabeth and Lily going on the hike then camping. So you're made to guess what kind of character the MC is in a vacuum. He clamours about his dad, barely anything about himself.
  5. The two females are nicely done in terms of graphics. Kudos for that. But what's wrong with the MC's dead fish eyes? It looks like some living dead eyes, seriously.
The setting is a good one and it can bring about a real good story but the delivery thus far, it's horrible. I'd suggest a re-write of the script to fix the dialogue and getting someone to volunteer to proof read, someone who ACTUALLY knows English.
 
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When I checked the file, I noticed that the scene where the protagonist does XX on the bed after taking a shower, as well as the scene where someone secretly watches and XX, were both missing.
In the game, the scene just ends after the protagonist finishes showering.
 

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Lust Storm [Ep.2 va1.0.3] [Volcano Games/Lust Storm] - Android Port

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