Thanks for that feedback. It's good to know where I need to make a difference in things. To suit her character as an advanced, hyper-intelligent AI, I wanted her language to be harder to keep up with. But, I also get that maybe I've leaned a little too hard into this. I'll keep this in mind for her dialogues going forward. I want to continue keeping her dialogues as having a unique feel, one that characterizes her hyper intelligence, but I'll also try to keep in mind a need to draw the line in some instances.
MCs answer on Carol. Hahaha,was that "for me"?