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As I said, it could have been worse, but that doesn't make me like it. In fact, after watching it, I kept the one where I kept the MC in class and ignored Dream.
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I did the same. Like I said, the (apparently) sweet and shy pink girl that could not hold eye contact in our first interactions turned into a whorish nimpho (and kinda masculine too) out of nowhere. Hard pass.
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I can see what both side's mean when it come to the dream situation and i understand hell i can agree with them. but for me i am just going to add her to my harem mainly because just like with the angel and devil path for Charlotte and Sophie i am waiting for the update where mc becomes more assertive or more of a dom. Because once mc become a dom i am going dom the hell out of every female in the game Especially charlotte because my god she need someone put her in her place( but not like before the rework even i who likes bdsm can say that was going to far 
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) .I feel you... But in this game, it was not it. If the story had a slower development, maybe? For this, I prefer when the women fall into the bratty category, like Sophie hehe. So, no Charlotte for me.I can see what both side's mean when it come to the dream situation and i understand hell i can agree with them. but for me i am just going to add her to my harem mainly because just like with the angel and devil path for Charlotte and Sophie i am waiting for the update where mc becomes more assertive or more of a dom. Because once mc become a dom i am going dom the hell out of every female in the game Especially charlotte because my god she need someone put her in her place( but not like before the rework even i who likes bdsm can say that was going to far
Agree totally i can respect that and for me when ever a harem game comes out and it Actually allows the player to get every girl like Eruption Imminent( well not exactly but all the main girls are on all three paths while the side girls are locked on Different paths like lexi( a Natural sub) and Isabella( a bratty milf) are on the dom path). Just like with gta i just let Loose.
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I just played the game for the first time at v0.38 and wanted to share some thoughts that might help as feedback since the Dev is pretty active. Story is decent, choices matter, models look good (though body types are similar), and animations are pretty nice. No sex sounds and there are long periods of silence. I also listed some issues from small (1) to what really bothered me (5).
1) Prostitute scene at the club references Dream's locker room scene as if Dream gave the MC a blowjob, but she only gave him a handjob.
2) Clicking on the stripper in the club the MC mentions going to see her, but there’s no interaction available.
3) The MC is skinny and he's got a skinny dick. Both Anna and Emma's dildos seem bigger than him, so I wonder if their reaction might end up being awkward when they get scenes.
4) The Replay Gallery doesn’t use the custom MC name I typed, which makes it almost useless for me. I’d rather save before all scenes manually to keep my chosen name than use the gallery.
5) The whole "improve myself and not be a loser anymore" dialogue, only for him to lose his virginity by getting raped in his sleep in a 5 seconds scene without him even knowing it happened... Extremely disappointing.
Don't mean to sound harsh. Best of luck with your project, Dev.
1) Prostitute scene at the club references Dream's locker room scene as if Dream gave the MC a blowjob, but she only gave him a handjob.
2) Clicking on the stripper in the club the MC mentions going to see her, but there’s no interaction available.
3) The MC is skinny and he's got a skinny dick. Both Anna and Emma's dildos seem bigger than him, so I wonder if their reaction might end up being awkward when they get scenes.
4) The Replay Gallery doesn’t use the custom MC name I typed, which makes it almost useless for me. I’d rather save before all scenes manually to keep my chosen name than use the gallery.
5) The whole "improve myself and not be a loser anymore" dialogue, only for him to lose his virginity by getting raped in his sleep in a 5 seconds scene without him even knowing it happened... Extremely disappointing.
Don't mean to sound harsh. Best of luck with your project, Dev.
Thanks for good comment matey. That's what I want all the time. I'm a human after all and I made a lot mistakes, I can miss things, or I can write pretty bad scenario too. People are really bully about these things. I'm working alone and doing every single thing by myself. So I'll deal with every issue you said. I'll try to fix gallery name bug. Also other ones too. TYSM!
+ If you want to rate the game feel free! 5 star is pretty important at that moment. It's up to you of course.
(These fixes will be available when v0.39 is out.)
Good news! I think I fix the issue about Gallery name!
Another good new, I fix the prostitue scene.
Here is the new dialogues:
"(Damn it!)"
"(My first blowjob...)"
"(Can I even compare her with Dream?)"
"(I don't think so.)"
"(One is an expert and the other is a normal girl.)"
"(At least as far as I know.)"
Clicking on the stripper in the club interaction bug fixed. No more clickable object.
About Kiera's scene which is taking MC's virginity. He doesn't know what just happened. So we can act like nothing happened haha.
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I'm glad you were able to correct some of this stuff and so soon, so great work. Truly.
As for this one...
I'm sorry, I might come across as rude at one point or another, but I need to talk about this because what you just said sounds so tone-deaf to me. I can't just act like it didn't happen. This is a big deal. That scene is undeniably rape and no amount of previous attraction between them changes that. Your response is very disappointing.
This moment undermines the MC’s arc of self-improvement you just started. If him getting beat up was "lame", this is traumatic and right after he expressed his desire to grow and stop being seen as a "loser." While being abused obviously doesn’t make him a loser, the decision to just gloss over it hurts the story in multiple ways. If we are supposed to act like it didn't happen, then why even make that scene? It will have no meaning, no consequences, nothing will come out of it.
Kiera’s actions destroy her character. She was fun and likable, but this makes her downright irredeemable for me. Even if she was still a bit drunk it’s no excuse. This scene made me hate Kiera. First character in this game I actually hate, which is such a shame because I didn't want to hate her, but this scene forced my hand.
The MC might not know, but as a player it’s impossible to "act like nothing happened" when the MC’s first time, which could have been meaningful and special, becomes a traumatic event swept under the rug. This could have been an opportunity to explore the MC’s response to abuse and to a serious breach of trust while connecting it to his growth. Players could then choose if they want to still pursue Kiera and forgive her (which would need a lot of work to redeem Kiera, it would be a huge part of her story for many updates) or close her path and have the MC hate Kiera for breaking his trust and abusing him, helping his growth of standing up for himself (which would be the normal response). It’s really disappointing. I was worried about how the next update was going to handle this, but I thought it would at least be treated as a serious heavy moment and give more depth to the story, even though I wish that scene just never happened in the first place.
Ultimately, it's your game and your story, but I just can't agree with this decision. These are just my thoughts, so I hope my perspective helps you at least understand why this feels so wrong and maybe you'll see it differently. Take care.
Nah nah, you understand me wrong. At the future, Kiera will tell everything to the MC and as you said, you'll able to forgive her or cut the contact with her. That's up to player. I'm just trying to say it happened and we can't do anything about it for now...
So you actually wrote the exact scenario that will happen in the future here haha.
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Oh, that's a big relief then! I did interpret your words very differently, it sounded like it would be brushed aside. I'm glad this will be adressed and there will be a choice for the player.
Maybe next update could show a hint of Kiera's guilt? This is a very sensitive subject, so there should be a big emotional impact. Please take some time to carefully think on how you'll balance accountability and forgiveness regarding Kiera in the future, because even on the forgiven route it shouldn't just be something they move past, it should leave a mark and affect their dynamic going forward. All the best to you!
- Jun 26, 2018
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was convinced that that scene was a dream of the MC...
Certainly if it's not a dream, then I don't care how sorry she is in the future, that she asks for forgiveness in whatever way, because the truth is that there is no way that my MC has any kind of relationship with her. And forgiving her is also basically impossible.
This is also a possibility. The truth is i didn't decide the future of the scene. But making that scene a dream is a very sensible idea. Because yes, it can be a bit disappointing to lose your virginity so easily.
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To be honest I feel the same way. I can’t see myself pursuing Kiera’s path in my main save either. It's a heavy subject and that degree of broken trust is beyond hard to earn back. I don’t think there’s a way to write a "forgiven" route that feels both believable and satisfying. It would require incredible nuance and genuine accountability, no downplaying it. A redemption arc would have to be long and complex, showing real effort to rebuild trust. Even then, their dynamic would never go back to normal. They don't have much of a normal to go back to, this is the real foundation of their relationship.
As I said previously, MC rejecting her and this being another step on his journey of self improvement feels like the normal route. That being said, I am willing to see how it plays out and give the dev a chance to write a compelling arc, which is why I will do a separate save where I forgive her, but my main save is pretty much set in stone.
I really appreciate that you're open to considering different approaches. Making it a dream could help avoid the heavy implications and drama, but players tend to dislike "dream scenes", because they effectively don't matter to the story. I also want to be clear that my feedback wasn’t meant to stifle your creativity or anything. I just wanted to share my perspective and voice my thoughts on why it bothererd me.
It’s your story. All any of us can do is trust you to decide what you think it's best for it.
Having a choice is great regardless.
Not only MC virginity, but you'll also save Kiera from the trashcan, honestly. Sorry for the bluntness, but I got to be real with this one.
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been awhile gave it another shot i see you reworked it def flowing much better then the last time i played it
I'm glad you're here mister. Have fun and welcome to the club.
+ If you like the game please give me 5 stars haha.
I want the game to be at least 4.5 stars