Davner

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Jan 30, 2018
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From what I played so far this game suffers from a lot of tell dont show. Why am I being dumped so much info at once? Where the mystery to some of these characters? Sophie has anxiety? You tell us after our second time meeting her. The narrator tells too much info at once. Its actually hard to play with it being so bad like this.
 
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Tinkel Studios

Developer of "Lustful College" and "Golden Veil"
Game Developer
May 13, 2018
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From what I played so far this game suffers from a lot of tell dont show. Why am I being dumped so much info at once? Where the mystery to some of these characters? Sophie has anxiety? You tell us after our second time meeting her. The narrator tells too much info at once. Its actually hard to play with it being so bad like this.
It’s never easy to satisfy everyone, as people look for different things. I’m sorry to hear that, but my creative approach naturally evolves alongside my development process. For my second project, I intend to explore a different storytelling style. That said, I’ll continue with this approach for Lustful College. There are still many characters and many stories waiting to be told.
 
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