HolyFish

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What is your game version? Ai will ask you to go to the museum herself, there shouldn't be any other choices.
 

Weewe

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I don't know why people uploaded this game here ( Unless it's the dev who posted and I'm being stupid ). I don't think it's fair to judge this game as a porn game since ... It's not really a porn game. It's a visual novel with a mind control theme and the story is actually quite nice. Judging it because it lacks porn is like judging a fish on its ability to climb a tree, the game gets so much hate here for wrong reasons but if I remember correctly, it's really well received on other sites.
It's like saying, since this is a porn site these opinions are not valid just because.I find this game on tfgamesite so and thinking pretty much the same thing as reviewer above Also a lot of people actually gave positive feedback in the initial stages of development, given that this is a small developer EVN means that from the beginning it is quite a reactionary product itself.
 

Weewe

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Sorry man, Netori is still NTR
Netorare Netori and Cheating itself is quite different let me explain
or else we'll get to the point where authors like the author of Classroom of the Elite use ntr in his works when that's not the case and as well as the most popular japanese novel nsfw, which begin with a netori and become more lighthearted to read as story progresses In terms of popularity it as the all-time 1 18 + novel on syosetu .

and as another example

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Weewe

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That is a lot of stuff, I don't think I have the time to check them out right now. If you don't mind, can you summarize what you like about those games please?
It mostly about reference material
For example Selebus using as reference for his work SCA-Ji works Which include one of the top tier or one of the best denpa ever made VN
素晴らしき日々~不連続存在~
Subarashiki Hibi ~Furenzoku Sonzai~
Wonderful Everyday ~Diskontinuierliches Dasein~
Another example

uses references that he defines as necessary for his work which he wrote in his documents and described the entire development process of the game not to mention the fact that for the game it is strongly open development process which can be observed unlike the game itself which is better not to run so seeing how much the developer invested allowed to make this game one of the most invested on the patreon made on the rpg maker
 
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Weewe

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That is a lot of stuff, I don't think I have the time to check them out right now. If you don't mind, can you summarize what you like about those games please?
This has already been summarized, and not just by me.Some explanation posted just a little down
 

BlasKyau

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I wrote him between the lines that it's normal to have a different opinion, but instead of just not liking it, he could have given a more criticism and the answer well I saw it. Like WTF
I still don't know what's wrong with me liking the game the way it is.

Blaskyau is innocent here, I already planned to add the ability to avoid all the NSFW stuff in the future ( In case people discover I used to make porn game after I'm done with my other game mentioned above). What he said just let me decide to add that stuff right now.
And don't worry, having the option to avoid sex won't hurt the porn side of the game at all, it's just an extra option.
As I said, if in the future there is a romance with the LIs, I will have in the same game two things that I love: avoiding non-consensual mind control sex scenes and a harem with romance. I don't see why this can offend anyone.

Netorare Netori and Cheating itself is quite different let me explain
or else we'll get to the point where authors like the author of Classroom of the Elite use ntr in his works when that's not the case and as well as the most popular japanese novel nsfw, which begin with a netori and become more lighthearted to read as story progresses

and as another example

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I don't like Netorare (someone stealing the MC's girlfriend, to say it quickly) at all. And unless the MC steals an asshole's girlfriend, the Netori (if I remember correctly it's the MC stealing someone's girlfriend) doesn't excite me either.

If I get the definitions right, I don't think netorare would be a good inclusion in this game. However, I suppose that Netori would be possible and I suppose that many players would appreciate it.
 

Weewe

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I still don't know what's wrong with me liking the game the way it is.
It never stated as this. And i not a case one and once again
For example in NTR game I want only play pure route not because i dislike antagonist but because his existence is one joke in fiction.I even write many comments about this.I just played that game because it has some elements of akuti and brainwashing but personally find myself wanting beating antagonist with simple punch on max level
 
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Weewe

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If I get the definitions right, I don't think netorare would be a good inclusion in this game. However, I suppose that Netori would be possible and I suppose that many players would appreciate it.
one more point just because you have a rival to a girl's heart does not mean that it is a netori or you could end up thinking that a harem in itself is one big netorase /netori/netorare and is not something good from a moral point of view. In one VNDB in one visual novel it stated that visual novel is netorase just because is has harem.....so
It doesn't matter whether a cat is white or black, as long as it catches mice"
 
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Weewe

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Ngl, I am in this for the money as well, to use the Patreon money from this game to fund my real passion project. I plan to use this game as a way to practice my writing, story structuring, pacing, and dialogue ( As you may have noticed, I suck at all of those). But now, I actually got invested in the story of this game and want to make it as good as possible, but my writing skill is still crapbasket, the part where Eri accidentally falls to trigger a sex scene is the weakest point of the story so far and I cringe so hard writing that.

As you can see, many games based on koikatsu are having trouble even achieving $50 in funding and are experiencing problems for years. I'm just saying.
if you do a lot of things right more people will pay attention to the work if not, no one will even come to the thread
 

HolyFish

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Just made a server, you guys can discuss the game here. Let's avoid spamming this thread too much.
 
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BlasKyau

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It never stated as this. And i not a case one and once again
For example in NTR game I want only play pure route not because i dislike antagonist but because his existence is one joke in fiction.I even write many comments about this.I just played that game because it has some elements of akuti and brainwashing but personally find myself wanting beating antagonist with simple punch on max level
I maybe misunderstood some parts of your messages. English isn't my first language, so sometimes I tend not to understand what people are saying very well.

one more point just because you have a rival to a girl's heart does not mean that it is a netori or you could end up thinking that a harem in itself is one big netorase /netori/netorare and is not something good from a moral point of view. In one VNDB in one visual novel it stated that visual novel is netorase just because is has harem.....so
It doesn't matter whether a cat is white or black, as long as it catches mice"
Thanks for the info.
 

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That is a lot of stuff, I don't think I have the time to check them out right now. If you don't mind, can you summarize what you like about those games please?

Sorry man, Netori is still NTR

Yeah, I'm currently trying to add various form of mind control, adding the same stuff to the game over and over again would get boring really fast.

I don't know why people uploaded this game here ( Unless it's the dev who posted and I'm being stupid ). I don't think it's fair to judge this game as a porn game since ... It's not really a porn game. It's a visual novel with a mind control theme and the story is actually quite nice. Judging it because it lacks porn is like judging a fish on its ability to climb a tree, the game gets so much hate here for wrong reasons but if I remember correctly, it's really well received on other sites.
You know something funny there is actually a fish that climb trees and he is very good at it. It is called Climbing Perch.
 
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