VN Ren'Py Abandoned Luxury Escorts [v0.2 BETA] [Fireblade185]

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Fireblade185

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-- MC is like 40yo ( its honestly about time he get kicked away lol)

-- TYRANNOBUILDER ! you warned...

-- punch face MC

-- MC fuck dad gf, get catch by dad... would expect dad to kill him... but nope he just throw him away from home. that would be realist and nice... if the dad didnt give the MC some money before kicking it out (WTF?)

-- Monologue only...

-- porn happen very very fast .. jesus the peace of the game is... well its very fast.

everything you guys want... nice renders, quick sex, incest, and all the standards blablabla...

the story honestly make sens for half a minute, then went pornfest.

-- too much monologue :(

see nude on bed, see nude on bathroom... this game is like a concentration of all the kinks we see overused around.

i give the point that its long... even too long for me as its only monologue... and its serious pornfest, litteraly.

guess that mean tons of patrons in less than a wekk... GG dev.

my honest opinion... now, excuse me, i just move on and wont be back here. the game is nice, but too pornfest to me, the monologue make me boring and too much porn kill the porn.
Man this game is something else... I love it, the renders are beautiful, the plot is unusual and intriguing, i hope the Dev will continue the way he started.
decided to try it since macadam gave it such a high recommendation :p good god..that was the singular most stupid piece of trash to ever taint my harddrive..ima hafta go Amish and give up porn again..
i just give my honest opinion... i am not attacking anybody. but meanwhile, i m not gonna say its great and all, when its not.
like i say, game isnt bad in idea. but too much monologue make it boring for me. and all the point i mentionned.

i have no idea who is the dev, never hear of him/her.

wouldnt say the story is here for me, it went pornfest way to fast and in a weird wtf way.

if i wanted to be even more hard on my comment, i would simply have say :
" this game is exactly like if the dev wanted to milk the maximum money out of the overused overpopular tropes around by mixing them all in one game without doing anything much outside of this."

well here, i say it... i m a bad person ? XD
Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying don't speak your mind, I'm just saying try to be mindful of the dev behind it, they took there time to make it and you don't know what it'll do to him/her on a mental level, it could crush there spirit.

I don't mean to sound like a dick, I used to be a therapist and I've seen far to many people end up in my chair because of the slightest thing said on the internet, some are crazy like this one kid who was suicidal because some critic said something bad about a musician she liked, people these days just don't have the same spirit and heart the older generatons have. Although I don't know how old most devs are these days :p
if you cant take critic, then better not make game. that's my point of view :p.
its obvious that not everybody will enjoy, cant please everybody.
if someone can not take critic or hard things, then better avoid doing anything like this. even more on the internet where trolls or else love to lurk XD
(i bet most devs todays are pretty young.. barely reached the 20. they are no way soo many devs will pop out with such child'ish dialogs and be like 30-40yo. i dont target anybody... just saying, we all have seen the classic story that feel like writted by a 12yo XD)

Ooooook! So... :sneaky:
After reading the comments (and, I gotta say, I'm quite impressed by the number so far, after all, it's just a beta...) I decided it would be a good thing and a sign of respect to point out some things...

1st - Thank you all for taking the time to share your oppinion, be it that it's good, bad or a piece of trash. An oppinion, no matter how harsh or praising it is, remains an oppinion and, through the years I've learned that, if you have enough brain cells, you can take it in a constructive way... So, thanks again, everyone!(y)

2nd - As odd as it may seem, the whole point of making this game was to be "something else", and by that I also mean getting impressions like "going pornfest fast and weird in a wtf way" (so, thanks Macadam :)) or "wtf is this game all about". Honestly, I didn't expect so much love and hate in the same time for this short... first chapter of the three planned in the introduction... I've always wanted to make something that either you like very very much, or hate from the bottom of your guts. Controversy and diametrally opposed opinions imply that you have hit a very wide range of target audience and youre work will be quoted either with "that is how you should do it" or "please don't make crap like this".

3rd - (AND THIS IS IMPORTANT) I've always had a life philosophy: do what you like and love, and, in the long run, people who like and love the same thing as you, will follow and be there for you. The ones that don't... well... they will be around you just to... "see if you've changed" the way they would want you to... You know.... Just like with Apple... a lot of people hate it... but most of them "would't mind" to "test" an expensive Iphone... "just to see if it worths the price". So... back to the topic... I am making this game by my own liking... I am making the game I WANT TO PLAY, and, if someone else likes it, than... that means I've hit my target. I'm not making something to please everyone, I'm making something to please the people who like the same things I do. Will I be short on audience? Maybe... But, can I be sure that those few will always eagerly await the next release? Trust me, YES! And that makes me happy! :)

P.S.: Thanks, CellStudios for the support and don't worry, I wont get suicidal thoughts from the critics :)
P.S. 2: Macadam, I'm agree, at least to some point: if you don't have the guts to take the critics, then wank alone to your creations... but... you can't know if you have the guts if you don't make something public and get opinions, be them praising, good, bad or harsh. ;)

4th - Please don't take what I will say as a critic, it's just I can't pass it... So... "too much porn"... in a porn game? I gotta say, it put a big smile on my face. It's like saying there is to much porn in... well... porn! 99.99% of porn movies/clips have... you know... porn in them... So... is that a bad thing? Anyway, it put a big smile... It still does :p... Which brings me to...

5th - ABOUT THE GAME:
a) technically, it's not yet a game, it's just the first out of three parts of the presentation. You know, introduction to the characters and stuff, get to know a little about each one of them...
b) IT WILL HAVE PORN.... A LOT... both in the presentation and, later, in the main story, BEEEECAAAUSE I've played tons of games in which I click like an idiot for two hours (after waiting two months for an update) just to see a nipple or an ass through the keyhole... I'm not into teasing like that... So, expect pussy right in your face veeeery veeeeeeery..... VERY OFTEN!:devilish:
c) The MC looks like a douche because I wanted him to look like that (the peasant hair too...). And he's a novice in everything. The intention is to evolve him, not the other charachters. They already know very well what their doing... Oh, and... 40?! Really! I mean... Jason Momoa is 40... and I think he looks a liiiiiiitle older than the MC... Anyway, perception and taste... So, no more argue here...:)
d) It's gonna be quite a long story (with a lot of porn, of course), oriented towards an RPG style... So.. no bad endings, just shorter if you are not prepared well enough... Anyway, It's a long way but... I'm not rushing things...
e) TYRANOBUILDER.... well... let's put it this way: you don't MAKE the game, you PLAY the game... You double click the .exe, you click to advance, click to make decisions, save, load, quit... So... it matters the engine beeeecause!? :unsure: If I want to build something, my main focus is on renders, storytelling and interaction... If I spend 3 weeks on rendering and a month in coding just to get a basic conversation... I'm not quite productive, right? DnD works better for me...:)
f) last but not least... RENDERS... well... they are not the best and surely not the worst... And they differ because were made while testing DAZ... BTW... I started working in it at the end of november... So... what you see now is the current stage in my progress of learning the software... The quality will improve over time, until I'll get them to look the way I want... (the game is still in Beta, remember?)

WHY am I doing this? Simple: because, like I said, I want to make the game I WANT TO PLAY... And if i doit just for my own fun, without seeing the good, the bad and the ugly after I share it, I'll get bored and stop working on it... I don't do this for a living... It's just a hobby... But a hobby I wanna keep for as much time as possible...:cool:

So, in conclusion, Thanks, see you around next release and...
as always, hope to please your eyes soon!

Fireblade185;)
 
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sure you make the game like YOu want :D, its your game after all.
i just share my opinion about it. be rude or not, its my ow opinion, doesnt reflect everybody opinion (and, let's be honest, nobody give a shit about my opinion anyway XD)?
the dude, definitly look in late 30/early 40 to me... i mean, he look older than me and i m 34 :O. 'i doubt i look younger than my age LOL)

just like i say, its not my kind of game. i mean, i like the idea, but porn happen too fast and without much sens....

why would his own mom and family will jump on him for sex just like that ? what's the poit of that ? if they are "escaort",... dude, escort are litteraly gold eater woman, they cost horribly high price for 5 minutes talking with them. i highly doubt they will just ump like this on anybody (and even less faily membern whon in the same way, didnt see alots as the father doesnt like "theses bitches".)

i warned for tyrannobuilder because i know many peoples doesnt like. i personnaly dont care, but well.. each their own.


like you say, you make the game for yourself. just not my taste for reasons i mentionned.

did i was rude and all ? well.. honestly i dont care lol, i m french after all, ad not affraid toshare my opinion via my big mouth XD

i hope you take my opinion very badly, so that way you get pissed and you'll work even better in the game .... that's a way to motivate a dev to do "even better" XD

soo yeah, sharing my thougths, goodl ck with your project... and i bet you'll gonna have lots of support. you obviously nailed some of the most popular kinks around, no doubt success is closer than you think .


and yes.. too much porn in a porn game is a thing. if i wanted to just fap and fap again, i owuld simply watch a video and use my both hands. trust me, too much porn in a porn game can kill the game. true fact . peoples want to play... not watching a porn movie XD
 

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so much engrish -_-... (just wake up from bed. my excuses for this xD)
 

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sure you make the game like YOu want :D, its your game after all.
i just share my opinion about it. be rude or not, its my ow opinion, doesnt reflect everybody opinion (and, let's be honest, nobody give a shit about my opinion anyway XD)?
the dude, definitly look in late 30/early 40 to me... i mean, he look older than me and i m 34 :O. 'i doubt i look younger than my age LOL)

just like i say, its not my kind of game. i mean, i like the idea, but porn happen too fast and without much sens....

why would his own mom and family will jump on him for sex just like that ? what's the poit of that ? if they are "escaort",... dude, escort are litteraly gold eater woman, they cost horribly high price for 5 minutes talking with them. i highly doubt they will just ump like this on anybody (and even less faily membern whon in the same way, didnt see alots as the father doesnt like "theses bitches".)

i warned for tyrannobuilder because i know many peoples doesnt like. i personnaly dont care, but well.. each their own.


like you say, you make the game for yourself. just not my taste for reasons i mentionned.

did i was rude and all ? well.. honestly i dont care lol, i m french after all, ad not affraid toshare my opinion via my big mouth XD

i hope you take my opinion very badly, so that way you get pissed and you'll work even better in the game .... that's a way to motivate a dev to do "even better" XD

soo yeah, sharing my thougths, goodl ck with your project... and i bet you'll gonna have lots of support. you obviously nailed some of the most popular kinks around, no doubt success is closer than you think .


and yes.. too much porn in a porn game is a thing. if i wanted to just fap and fap again, i owuld simply watch a video and use my both hands. trust me, too much porn in a porn game can kill the game. true fact . peoples want to play... not watching a porn movie XD
:) Well, I gave a shit about your opinion, so don't be upset ;). I'm not trying to convince anyone to like what I like. That would be the opposite to the way I think and act (life philosophy, remember). About being rude? Let's be honest... everyone has his own way of expressing themselves... This is yours and I respect that. Oh, and I won't take your oppinion badly and get pissed... My goal is to improve in every way so, although you have a different taste, I still consider your opinion as support. Just expressed.... well... differently. So thanks! (y) Last but not least, when I said A LOT of porn... I meant it for a porn game... It will be ballanced enough so anyone can play, enjoy and... yeah... use both hands ;)
 

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I never grew up.. midlife crisises done and still have my bikes. Fireblade and RC51Sp1... love em...

No, but when I was younger, it was my dream ride... :) Then, I got old enough to put to ease my two-wheel dreams and sit confortably on four... But, who knows... Maybe when I'll have my middle age crisis... :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
 

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I must say that this is the most promising game I've seen in a long time! Beautiful graphic and an exciting story. If MC later on will service the girls when they take on clients (a type of pimp) it will land as number 1" on my list of games. Keep up the good work! :):):):):)
 

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I must say that this is the most promising game I've seen in a long time! Beautiful graphic and an exciting story. If MC later on will service the girls when they take on clients (a type of pimp) it will land as number 1" on my list of games. Keep up the good work! :):):):):)
Well... I do have big plans for him ;)... From the beginning, I didn't want to make Alex the overused barely legal kid with a huge dick and a small brain who just wants to fuck everything on two legs, using cheap tricks, magic potions, blackmail or ancient spells. He's a normal guy who had bad luck with girls... As for the female encounters... I didn't want them to be the typical "OMG my son/brother/nephew/cousin has a huge dick... shoud I give him a blowjob?... Nooo!... It's immoral..." then land on his cock because... reasons (tricks, magic potions, ancient spells, corruption...). Don't get me wrong, I like that too... But, wouldn't it be nice to see how things evolve in a more grounded scenario, with a guy, in this case, Alex, ending up in the same house with three hot women who play men like toys for a living and know EXACTLY what he wants? And, for reasons that will be unveilled later, they care about him... and also give him a taste of what he desires? No magic, blackmail and corruption are usless... no "oh, I'm horny and there is only my son's dick in the house... What should I do..." kind of story... I think it can be quite fun and enjoyable... But, time will tell...:)
 

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Well... I do have big plans for him ;)... From the beginning, I didn't want to make Alex the overused barely legal kid with a huge dick and a small brain who just wants to fuck everything on two legs, using cheap tricks, magic potions, blackmail or ancient spells. He's a normal guy who had bad luck with girls... As for the female encounters... I didn't want them to be the typical "OMG my son/brother/nephew/cousin has a huge dick... shoud I give him a blowjob?... Nooo!... It's immoral..." then land on his cock because... reasons (tricks, magic potions, ancient spells, corruption...). Don't get me wrong, I like that too... But, wouldn't it be nice to see how things evolve in a more grounded scenario, with a guy, in this case, Alex, ending up in the same house with three hot women who play men like toys for a living and know EXACTLY what he wants? And, for reasons that will be unveilled later, they care about him... and also give him a taste of what he desires? No magic, blackmail and corruption are usless... no "oh, I'm horny and there is only my son's dick in the house... What should I do..." kind of story... I think it can be quite fun and enjoyable... But, time will tell...:)
Aaand.. that's exactly why i wrote "the story is intriguing", becouse of the multitude of chances for the MC to become, from the aforementioned "pimp-like" to beeing himself an escort for ladies (yes, i mean man-whore). To me, it seems like the DEV has the whole story in his head, maybe not in full detail, but still everything till the end-endings.
About the engine: i myself don't really like tyrrano, it takes an eternity to load at the beginning and i don't like to not having the rollback option and also the impossibility of saving when choices are shown, becouse that means much more saves during the gameplay, but the choice is on the DEV.
 

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Well... I do have big plans for him ;)... From the beginning, I didn't want to make Alex the overused barely legal kid with a huge dick and a small brain who just wants to fuck everything on two legs, using cheap tricks, magic potions, blackmail or ancient spells. He's a normal guy who had bad luck with girls... As for the female encounters... I didn't want them to be the typical "OMG my son/brother/nephew/cousin has a huge dick... shoud I give him a blowjob?... Nooo!... It's immoral..." then land on his cock because... reasons (tricks, magic potions, ancient spells, corruption...). Don't get me wrong, I like that too... But, wouldn't it be nice to see how things evolve in a more grounded scenario, with a guy, in this case, Alex, ending up in the same house with three hot women who play men like toys for a living and know EXACTLY what he wants? And, for reasons that will be unveilled later, they care about him... and also give him a taste of what he desires? No magic, blackmail and corruption are usless... no "oh, I'm horny and there is only my son's dick in the house... What should I do..." kind of story... I think it can be quite fun and enjoyable... But, time will tell...:)
I absolutely agree with you. I'm so tired of these games where MC gets humiliated by bullies, type NTR. Much better MC can be involved in there business. If you then can include in the storyline the girls point of view when they go out partying or visiting clients it would ne great :) I am a Petron to you now ;)
 

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I absolutely agree with you. I'm so tired of these games where MC gets humiliated by bullies, type NTR. Much better MC can be involved in there business. If you then can include in the storyline the girls point of view when they go out partying or visiting clients it would ne great :) I am a Petron to you now ;)
I saw. Thank you for your support! :) (y) And, yeah... All I can say now is that the story will be complex... You won't ge to know the characters just from Alex's perspective...
 

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okay. just friendly advice.

change your patreon... seriously.

if its stay like this, i give ya 3 days before you get in troubles with patreon staff XD.

nudity is NOT allowed on public post and must be behind patrons only lock post. its stupid, but it is how patreon rules the thing .

be careful and change your stuff quickly to avoid troubles :D
 

Fireblade185

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okay. just friendly advice.

change your patreon... seriously.

if its stay like this, i give ya 3 days before you get in troubles with patreon staff XD.

nudity is NOT allowed on public post and must be behind patrons only lock post. its stupid, but it is how patreon rules the thing .

be careful and change your stuff quickly to avoid troubles :D
Thanks. Already working on it... Youre the second to give me the same advice... It happens... I'm new to this stuf... :)
 

macadam

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Thanks. Already working on it... Youre the second to give me the same advice... It happens... I'm new to this stuf... :)
yeah, its kind of stupid in a sens because you must login to patreon and accept that you are adult to access patreon page that content adult is flagged.... but still nede to hide stuff.

patreon logic lol
 

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Tried this beta release with mixed feeling, but after some time with this title im more than interested in further updates. What made me confudes was surroudings. Rather to say lack of it. On first scene or second there should be sky or something but it was white fasade or somtehign that want to be a building. It was distracting. Girls are hot as hell and i've waited long to see such beauties. Monolog...talking like twisted. I can understand that this is just a beta and introduction, so no big halo about that...for now. I wish you all the best and thanks for your work. Waiting for next episode;)
 
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Aaaaaaand... Introducing.... JUDY!!!!

For those who paid a little attention during the first part of the introduction, she's an exeptional pole dancer. And, same as her sister Lisa, Judy is a sweet redhead who, for the same (still) unknown reasons, is kind with Alex and happy everytime she sees him...
I mean... just look at that sweet sweet smile she throws at him when he is walking by the room where she's practicing....
Judy_Pole_Dance_2.png

She is in the middle of her training session and our shy character want's to bail, so he wont have to repeat what happened with Lisa... But, Judy, as always... has other plans...

Judy_Pole_Dance_4.png

By the look in her eyes, she wants to play... :devilish::devilish::devilish:

And, this time, she will give Alex the chance to choose how the story will unfold...
So... will he be bold, or will he behave? No matter the choice, he won't regret... At least, in some cases... not that much...:sneaky:.
Decisions... decisions...

Coming soon!:cool:

I absolutely agree with you. I'm so tired of these games where MC gets humiliated by bullies, type NTR. Much better MC can be involved in there business. If you then can include in the storyline the girls point of view when they go out partying or visiting clients it would ne great :) I am a Petron to you now ;)
Tried this beta release with mixed feeling, but after some time with this title im more than interested in further updates. What made me confudes was surroudings. Rather to say lack of it. On first scene or second there should be sky or something but it was white fasade or somtehign that want to be a building. It was distracting. Girls are hot as hell and i've waited long to see such beauties. Monolog...talking like twisted. I can understand that this is just a beta and introduction, so no big halo about that...for now. I wish you all the best and thanks for your work. Waiting for next episode;)
 
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