VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lyla's Curse [v0.1.52] [Voodoo Monkey]

[baneini]

One thing about world building is that when a guys just hang around with no pants and his dick visible to everyone, possibly masturbating, it's really bad world building. There's no standards of whats acceptable in society that the player can assume exist. It's too out there to immerse the player and go "oh no she has to do sexual favors and that's really unusual and degrading".
Instead it's:
"Ofc shes going to suck a dick, this is a bizarro porno land, shes probably going to hang up a portrait of herself sucking a hobo dwarfs dick in her house for her grandchildren to witness", does the corruption tag even apply, it's more like a story about Lyla conforming to the norm of this society.

 

[Umaru-chan]

Surprised how good this is, looking forward to more!

 

[YakuzaZzz]

It's the " Mammal " part of our brains at work. Unless you are pretty Unconscious , you turn on the tv, there's a volleyball game between Myanmar and Brunei, and before you know it, you think, "go, Brunei ". Another reason why i don't touch Female MC games, is because they're written , mostly by Men who don't have a fucking clue how Women think. Men are pretty visual and oriented to things. And that's how most these women appear. They see a cock, and react like Men do. Ok, somewhere in the Universe, you can find a Woman like that, but the overwhelming majority is more interested in people than things, are not eye-to-genital , but imagination and touch oriented. Men fall in love with their eyes, Women fall in love with their ears. Well, at least until Post Modernism catches up with them.

Lol its a fiction game i think that saying .. when its a female Mc .... its not actually a how women think .. im pretty sure its safe to say its just "IMAGINATION" and nothing has been taking seriously ... its a dumb statement .... its like saying oh yeah ill make a game about magic school "with a puppet socket that talks and make it really serious and make her think like a real women" was the objective here ... Plus this isn't a Romance VN so its safe to say that you're argument is very hollow .... many games have been made by Female Dev ... where the female MC is just a complete slut where she walks around and let people shit in her mouth "yes scat" so basically you're just judging it by its book and placing "well when a male makes a female MC that's not how women act in real life well duh are you fucking dumb "its a fiction game" "ITS NOT REAL" you people should stop playing these games and treat it like its real life 'ITS A GAME" and a porn on top of that "hardcore sex and comedic one are mostly present in these games" not some vanilla bullshit you find in everyday life of an Average Joe or Jessica putted simply ... because they want to make the game interesting and not boring i mean ... go read some of these Erotic books that women's have written maybe you'll change the idea of how women is really shown coming from the point of view of a "real women" ... plus saying things like "Men fall in love with their eyes, Women fall in love with their ears" you have no fucking clue about what you're talking ... stop trying to play the know it all guy you know nothing my dude .....

 

[Umaru-chan]

Hmm, i'm starting to think I like games that break the fourth wall/characters realizing they are in a game and brushing it off. Like the MC of this game saying "Under construction? Voodoo monkey is lazy!"

 

[VoodooMonkey]

It's surprising how difficult it is to try and justify all of the weird stuff going on in the story. Like when I wanted to have Lylas roommate (Stephen) jerking off in the room, I actually have a full story written as to why that scene makes sense in this world. I.E: Stephen and Lyla are roommates in the dormatory. The school dorms have a couple floors that allow this and the rooms have special accommodations for that, like the curtains that can be pulled dividing the room when each one is changing or would want privacy. Those who choose to be assigned to a coed dorm get access to a much larger room as well, since Lyla and Stephen have been friends for awhile, she felt comfortable sharing one with him. Stephen has a slight disorder, whenever he gets nervous, he basically just starts masturbating and can barely control it.

It took Lyla a long time to accept this but she's an understanding woman and eventually just tries to take things in stride.

I may not have done the best job conveying stuff like that but I try

 

[Sinndallas]

It's surprising how difficult it is to try and justify all of the weird stuff going on in the story. Like when I wanted to have Lylas roommate (Stephen) jerking off in the room, I actually have a full story written as to why that scene makes sense in this world. I.E: Stephen and Lyla are roommates in the dormatory. The school dorms have a couple floors that allow this and the rooms have special accommodations for that, like the curtains that can be pulled dividing the room when each one is changing or would want privacy. Those who choose to be assigned to a coed dorm get access to a much larger room as well, since Lyla and Stephen have been friends for awhile, she felt comfortable sharing one with him. Stephen has a slight disorder, whenever he gets nervous, he basically just starts masturbating and can barely control it.

It took Lyla a long time to accept this but she's an understanding woman and eventually just tries to take things in stride.

I may not have done the best job conveying stuff like that but I try

I haven't played the newest version, only the original release, but I actually remember that being pretty clear in the story as to why it was happening and that isn't really a "normal world" event but something that might be "normal" between the characters due to their history etc.

 

[Ysike]

When will be the new version? I am really curious about it

 

[nemero]

nice game thanks

 

[Gomly1980]

Started off really well.

You get a choice to be a slut or punch some guy in the face and I thought to myself "finally, a game where the MC isn't a moronic whore" ..... then you get to town and she turns into a moronic whore flashing her tits.....

One day ... I hold out hope for a game with a decent female MC that doesn't turn into a cum bucket after 5 minutes.

It's a shame when it starts off so well.

 

[Umaru-chan]

Any news on updates for this game?

 

[VoodooMonkey]

Hey Umaru-chan and Ysike, sorry for taking so long to respond. I'm still working on the next update content and hope to get it out to everyone soon. Don't have a set date yet but I'm still head down trying to get it finished. I ran into a snag that took a long time to figure out until I decided to just pull it from this update to figure it out in the next update so I lost some time.

I am thankful though for everyone being patient while I continue to work on it
The picture attached is a small animation test testing out some boob shaking ^_^

 

[Umaru-chan]

One month later update?

 

[tombfall]

One month later update?

There's supposed to be a release this weekend according to his latest patreon post. Not sure what time zone the dev is in though.

 

[philphil020]

May we have 1.27 link please?

 

[Ysike]

After feedback from patreons, he will post it. May the force of waiting be with you...

 

[Gulman]

1.27 link please

 

[N7]

updated op

 

[Krazi]

link for v0.1.30

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[xephion]

link for v0.1.30

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link already down

 

[GandiIV]

For instance, during the blowjob scene, her face needs to look pretty. Right now the blowjob looks more like it would hurt than feel good, and her nose is all angular in an unappealing way.

Still trying to figure out how the hell could a blowjob " feel good " for the person who does it... Come on you have a dick forcing its way down your throat do you really think it would feel good ?! Of course it must hurt more than it feels good !

I KNOW it's just a game, but still, I must be the only male here who find a woman who looks like she enjoys way too much giving head ( even in games ) totally unappealing.