VN Ren'Py Completed Maid to Please [v0.18.1] [GamesMtP]

[anothernameonthewall]

MC goes from semi decent but kinda likeable to full blown super predator, hyper manipulator, uber creep, borderline sexual assault scumbag at mach 10. i swear after a point i dont think he says more then 2 lines without lying to or manipulating somebody. MC has so many red flags you could use this game as a teaching tool for tips on what type of people to avoid[mc].

Spoiler: lets also not forget

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the girls are in serious trouble

 

[GamesMtP]

MC goes from semi decent but kinda likeable to full blown super predator, hyper manipulator, uber creep, borderline sexual assault scumbag at mach 10. i swear after a point i dont think he says more then 2 lines without lying to or manipulating somebody. MC has so many red flags you could use this game as a teaching tool for tips on what type of people to avoid[mc].

Just be honest, man. You're just jealous he's got a bigger weiner than you.

 

[gregers]

MC goes from semi decent but kinda likeable to full blown super predator, hyper manipulator, uber creep, borderline sexual assault scumbag at mach 10. i swear after a point i dont think he says more then 2 lines without lying to or manipulating somebody. MC has so many red flags you could use this game as a teaching tool for tips on what type of people to avoid[mc].

Spoiler: lets also not forget

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the girls are in serious trouble

You could just say he's a cop but yeah, more red flags than a Chinese giftshop.

 

[anothernameonthewall]

Just be honest, man. You're just jealous he's got a bigger weiner than you.

nah dude, his dick looks like an infected sea cucumber. i'm fine not having that swinging between legs.

 

[Skep-tiker]

Dammit. And here i thougt it was a false positive completed, or maybe season 1 ending.. kinda sad

 

[Sordy]

Downloaded this game from the Vikingfile link for Windows/Linux and it came with maleware. Be careful guys.

 

[GamesMtP]

nah dude, his dick looks like an infected sea cucumber. i'm fine not having that swinging between legs.

You dodged the troll attempt. Good job on not taking the bait.

 

[LordNero]

MC goes from semi decent but kinda likeable to full blown super predator, hyper manipulator, uber creep, borderline sexual assault scumbag at mach 10. i swear after a point i dont think he says more then 2 lines without lying to or manipulating somebody. MC has so many red flags you could use this game as a teaching tool for tips on what type of people to avoid[mc].

Spoiler: lets also not forget

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the girls are in serious trouble

I just started the game, don't know the story yet, but I bursted laughing as soon as I saw him fully. Met some girls that dated this type of guy IRL, and not one had positive things to say
I can almost tell from his face, his personality, so I guess the Dev nailed it? Just came here to see what people say about the MC.

 

[Phegor]

Honestly, after seeing all of this:

I know this might be taboo to many people here, but try cutting down on the number of girls in future VNs. Instead, give each LI much more screentime, and thus draw their storylines to a more graceful conclusion.

100% agreed, plus have a story outline ready BEFORE releasing anything. Don't make it up as you go.

 

[JJ1960]

Just be honest, man. You're just jealous he's got a bigger weiner than you.

I'm jealous that he's got Chris and I don't.

 

[edgebravesteam]

Downloaded this game from the Vikingfile link for Windows/Linux and it came with maleware. Be careful guys.

Bob69 sorry if you aren't the proper one to tag, but just putting this out there. i haven't confirmed it or not, just based off what this user said so i'm not downloading anything from this thread

 

[Dunking_Donuts]

You dodged the troll attempt. Good job on not taking the bait.

I have a question for the author: what will be your next game, who will be the hero or heroine in your game, and what kind of new game will you have, and another question: are you thinking of releasing it on Steam?

 

[Bob69]

Bob69 sorry if you aren't the proper one to tag, but just putting this out there. i haven't confirmed it or not, just based off what this user said so i'm not downloading anything from this thread

There is no Virus. ShitDefender is full aggro again.. flagging everything.

 

[Mauser45]

I loved the game. "Loved"

I did NOT love the ending, and it drastically reduced my liking of the game

This is it? After everything? Not really sure I'd be interest in this dev's future games after this, in all honesty

 

[GamesMtP]

I have a question for the author: what will be your next game, who will be the hero or heroine in your game, and what kind of new game will you have, and another question: are you thinking of releasing it on Steam?

Homie, them's a bucket-full of questions.

I made a first post on Patreon/SubscribeStar. It's public but I don't want to paste it all here, it's kind of off-topic for a Maid to Please thread.

About Steam, I'm undecided. It seems to be a lot of work and I'm not sure if there's any real sale potential.

 

[Bloodguard]

About Steam, I'm undecided. It seems to be a lot of work and I'm not sure if there's any real sale potential.

Well, there is definitely potential. Freshwomen and Being a DIK have made millions off Steam, but for smaller productions it all about getting people to wishlist then review the game. Some games don't even recoup the hundred bucks it costs to list them, so there is potential to fail as well.
Discord or Patreon seem pretty key to smaller games success on Steam.

 

[Luigi.Mangione]

What I don’t understand is if the author was planning to end this for some time, as people have said, why was there 0 attempt to actually implement any kind of ending or epilogue?

 

[Luigi.Mangione]

COMPLETION! … by abandonment.

 

[MagicMan753]

I think the dev focused on the wrong thing to end it. Cause let's be real, there is no hope for act 2, when he says he might or maybe, pretty much means no, otherwise he would of straight up confirmed it.

The ending should of been focused on Beth and MC. Spending a little time together, she reveals she is pregnant. And another sweet moment or two, which would set up hope for the future, but also be a nice ending, if nothing else comes, instead of what we got which felt like a very much bigger cliffhanger and very much a non-ending.

Also, seen some people mention Steam, just forget that. Unless you plan on actually making season 2, just forget it, cause with this current ending, it just a bad idea, and would piss people off.

But yeah, very disappointing for such a great game. Many girls Forgotten and lacked content, ending focused on wrong thing, and some other things. This game deserved better.

 

[Elyñar]

I think the dev focused on the wrong thing to end it. Cause let's be real, there is no hope for act 2, no matter when he says he might, otherwise he would of straight up confirmed it.

The ending should of been focused on Beth and MC. Spending a little time together, she reveals she is pregnant. And another sweet moment or two, which would set up hope for the future, but also be a nice ending, if nothing else comes, instead of what we got which felt like a very much bigger cliffhanger and non-ending.

Also, seen some people mention Steam, just forget that. Unless you plan on actually making season 2, just forget it, cause with this current ending, it just a bad idea, and would piss people off.

But yeah, very disappointing for such a great game. Many girls Forgotten and lacked content, ending focused on wrong thing, and some other things. This game deserved better.

He is not the first developer who do the same, make a rush season final and request complete tag to avoid abandoned tag.