So far so good, story is interesting and with likeable characters, Mc being orphan leaves the door open for a nice incest tag but I could be wrong. Only three issues:
1- The uh ah got to go, sounds dumb.
2- Fix the albino dick, seriously I'll would be scare shitless if I have that.
3- Not a issue in the dev per se but in honey select models, the hands and feet are disproportioned, there's an option to change that in the character creation, would be nice if that is fixed because it looks really bad.
Aside from that the branches are nice since not only they add more scenes and a possible LI but they add more to the story so the reader gets more involved, not many VN have pull that off so respect, keeping an eye on this one.