Great story but some inconsistencies are killing me smalls.
-MC supposedly graduated top of his class such a succesful young man, about to become CEO of a high tech company, yet doesnt know shit about cybersecurity. He is not even a boomer like me.
-MC is always bitter about not having a father even if he talks like a tsundere "mHHhm i dont want a father anyways mmhhMH" he is salty about it. YET as soon as he learns he has a 9-10 years old daughter from a one night stand, as soon as things get complicated, he fucks off. And his justfication is null and void to me. If she is my daughter i wanna be a part of her life dude. No matter what. Doesnt mean i wanna make Bianca divorce that cuck and take her hand myself. fuck no. I just want my biological daugher. He is already simping enough women with kids.What pisses me off is, how you handled that situation and didnt even give me a dialogue option for that.
-Again supposedly super smart giga brain MC cant figure shit by himself and has to consult this and that hoe in everychance he gets, because reasons(?), so we can fade to black. Seriously man you need to cut down those to minimum.
Outside of these everything is topnotch. Loving it so far, can't wait to see his face
Keep up the good work chief, you are doing great.
P.S proofreading is on point, mostly, almost %99. you fucked it at leaving(living) and some you your etc. not terribly important just saying because i love you xoxo