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Deathlore421

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Love the ending with Yumi, guessing it has something to do with Donald? Just seems like merger drama waiting to happen lol. Godspeeed dev.
 

Serenswan

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Jul 4, 2018
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Oh wow, just for my birthday! You shouldn't have!

First time playing, I like it so far; this is honestly kind of my ideal for these types of games where the characters have, well, character but the writing isn't overwrought or tedious. Scenes happen at a good pace.

Now for some nitpicking.
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And outside of the nitpicking I can't get the Tiffany gallery to unlock. It says I have 24 out of 25 and I have no idea what I'm missing, seeing as how I've now gone through a couple different times and hit all the choices I can.

edit: Well, I was originally just going to leave it at that but apparently I'd rather troubleshoot porn games than get actual work done.
I dug into the game and the reason the Tiffany gallery won't unlock is that ch2_tsv13 is listed as part of the gallery and in movies.rpy but never actually triggered anywhere in hscenes.rpy, so it never gets seen.

Anyway, my work here is done and I look forward to future content!
 

raybae

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Oh wow, just for my birthday! You shouldn't have!

First time playing, I like it so far; this is honestly kind of my ideal for these types of games where the characters have, well, character but the writing isn't overwrought or tedious. Scenes happen at a good pace.

Now for some nitpicking.
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And outside of the nitpicking I can't get the Tiffany gallery to unlock. It says I have 24 out of 25 and I have no idea what I'm missing, seeing as how I've now gone through a couple different times and hit all the choices I can.

edit: Well, I was originally just going to leave it at that but apparently I'd rather troubleshoot porn games than get actual work done.
I dug into the game and the reason the Tiffany gallery won't unlock is that ch2_tsv13 is listed as part of the gallery and in movies.rpy but never actually triggered anywhere in hscenes.rpy, so it never gets seen.

Anyway, my work here is done and I look forward to future content!
I'll look into the issues you mentioned. The logic behind the 'water bottle' was that the MC ran to catch the train and got really thirsty, but I get why that would feel weired to a lot of people.
 

Serenswan

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I understood that part of the logic, but unless this train ride was 6 hours long most people would just deal with it until they got to their destination. Like I said, not a big deal it just jumped out at me.

One thing I forgot to add under my nitpicks section is I found the choice of music for the Tiffany sex scene a little too somber. It is music I would associate with more serious scenes as opposed to a good fucking.

But like I also said, overall I did enjoy this quite a bit and am looking forward to more.
 
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raybae

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Tiffany gallery won't unlock is that ch2_tsv13 is listed as part of the gallery and in movies.rpy but never actually triggered anywhere in hscenes.rpy
I forgot I had removed that animation from hscenes because it didn't look very good but now I realize I forgot to remove it from the gallery setup. This will be fixed in the next update
 

DrWho8248

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This is a harem game, where the endgame is the MC (you) trying to get with as many girls as possible. But I want to make a harem game where the girls are not just another toy for you play with. I want the girls in my game to have real stories, real emotions, real ambitions and motivations, real struggles and hardships. You can be a part of their journey, influence their life in positive or negative ways.
When Play Harem Hotel... You get a need EXP for it :)
Or you can leave them alone and their journey will still have a natural progression without you.
And who is real in F95 do it? O_O
This game will be a linear visual novel with some branching depending on player choices.
If game not need for RePlay more 3+ times i ma ok with it...
 

DrWho8248

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I have the core story prepared for number of future projects, here are some of them:
No, Godnes F*** No! Lets wait when at least 1 game be have 50% done, only when you can start another projrect, ok?
 

MrFriendly

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The lack of choices in this game is... odd. Obviously there are choices but at the same time there are moments as I'm playing through where I would expect to be given a decision to make and yet the dev decided what the MC would do already.

The water bottle scene is one rather bizarre example, who drinks from a random stranger's water bottle? If they were in the middle of a desert I'd understand. That is one spot where I would have expected a choice like: "Ask for a drink?" or "Just chat" or "Ignore her". And I would also expect that she could respond in some manner that shows she thinks it is odd that the MC asked for a drink.

The lack of choices is especially noticeable on Saturday with Laura at her house. Staying to watch the movie is automatically decided as is staying in the guest room. Both feel like perfect spots to allow the player to decide to go home and end the day yet no choice is given. The MC literally lives next door and yet because it is raining he is incapable of leaving (is he water soluble?). He even borrows someone else's clothing so he can sleep in the guest room, which is just weird since he lives next door, isn't drunk, and could just go home. It is also incredibly awkward for her to proposition the MC for sex when her children are home (IRL I expect there are very few single parents that will have their first night of sex with a new partner when their children are home and could interrupt them/walk in/hear them). I was hoping for an option to say no for now, not no forever.

In this update there are two opportunities to have sex which I decided against because they are awkwardly presented. Fucking someone that the MC just met - the daughter of a powerful man, a woman who will be a business partner, and could use that information against the MC seems like a bad idea. And the idea of fucking Laura when her kids are home, one already hates the MC, and they could be discovered/caught also seems like a bad idea. I hope that going forward we won't end up constantly blueballing the MC because the sex is always presented in a way that makes it seem dumb to do it.
 

Valmora

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I truely REALLY like this one... BTW ! You have some places of wrong actor dialogue throughout this thing, you need to go back through and check that you have the right actor saying the correct lines as well as some minor grammar screw-ups...
 
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raybae

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I truely REALLY like this one... BTW ! You have some places of wrong actor dialogue throughout this thing, you need to go back through and check that you have the right actor saying the correct lines as well as some minor grammar screw-ups...
Thank you! Another comment mentioned this too. I will look into it
 

Petering

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I enjoyed this. I did notice some of the mistakes mentioned above but overall it's a good start. I am not really sure how much choice matters yet, but I hope to see more content. You would think a tech company would have good security though haha.
 
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Valmora

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English is my third language, so I make a lot of mistakes. I hope people will excuse that for now. I will try to hire proofreaders once I start getting a bit more support for the game.
Well it's minor proofreading, im sure some one would love to do it, i do it for Lukes Way... But i would sugest getting an american to do it for you, as your english style is more that direction rather that the british englis direction... and no, i don't get paid to do text overview and crrections, i do it to help the novelist, as its just some light reading and fixing, it's not the same as if someone helps with animation or renders or the whole programming part...
 
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