- Jun 24, 2019
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Just finished, i enjoyed the play/story im looking forwoard to any updates
More, this is a imagined violence...Lol it is only game. Looks like politicans who speak - violence comes from PC games.
Show please all errors and I will fix itOther than a LOT of grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors; after the situation with Vou is taken care of, when you are looking at Cassie's dress there is a screen that has the caption in Cyrillic script.
Also, later on at the college when Celine arrives, after we finished talking about Kelly's problem I knew about Spider without either one telling me his name or any information about Celine's actual problem. It seemed to have skipped some screens.
Well, just off the top of my head, without going through the game from the start- you regularly commit a very common error in punctuation. In English, apostrophes (') are used to indicate possession (John's shirt, the dog's bone, etc.) or for contractions (don't, can't). But the Internet Generation believes that plurals are MADE by adding an apostrophe. (It's called a "grocers' apostrophe". I've found it in books as early as the 1950s; including one by Isaac Asimov, who should have known better.) Plurals in English are extremely simple- you either add '-s', or if the word ends in '-s' already, you add '-es', if the word ends in 'y' you change the 'y' to an 'i' and add '-es'. That's IT! (Words like 'mouse'/'mice', etc. are loan words from other languages. BTW, what I just used is NOT an apostrophe, but a 'single quote'. Unfortunately, the keyboard does not distinguish and uses the same symbol for both.) There is not a SINGLE plural in English that's properly formed by an apostrophe.Show please all errors and I will fix itThank you
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