It is OK. Dialogues should open characters more than flat phrases :fuck me: or :do you wonna fuck me:
It was my first game and I understand how bad it is. Anyway there are many fans of this storytelling and they like my works.
As I said before my games are created not for all. We have strong community on patreon with coins, site and big piece of additional content like slots, auctions, busters of collectional cards, unique badges and many-many more.
But anyway thank you for you big and constructive critic