It wasn't bad for what it was, however it would have been better if the following 2 things were implimented:
1) Lose the orc crap... Just make it a black chick everyone knows where this was going no need to bring in fantasy creatures. In fact 4chan always calls blacks and migrants orcs anways so it's using right wing lingo for a left wing game.
2) Choices... Gotta have choices. Kinetic Novels suck because it doesn't feel like a game and feels like a book. Here are some choices that could have been put in for example:
-Refuse to date her (gameover)
-Refuse to the raceplay (gameover)
-Push her hard enough to say "Zug-Zug" Then choose to keep going, or stop
-Try to fuck the orc girls mom
-Try to fuck the orc girls grandma
-Share the orc slave with others
-Sell the orc slave into actual slavery
-Make the orc slave abort her baby... repeatadly making her kill or own quadrorcs (1/4 orcs)
-Fight with the grandma
-Give her anal anyways when she says no anal
-Choke her to death (gameover)
-Cheat on her with a human
-Marry her or not
-Do some public stuff with the orc slave
-ect ect ect
The greatest irony of this "game" is that it totally is for an NPC. Don't think for yourself at all. Obey, Obey, Obey just go with the flow. With no freedom to choose anything it's not very good. This is the type of game that REALLY needed choices.
It's not a game. It's a visual novel. Different products. Asking for decisions in a visual novel is like asking for a motor in a bicycle. A bicycle is a thing and a motorcycle is a different one. Adding decisions to a visual novel just because wouldn't improve the product, IMO. I prefer a game to a visual novel, but I also prefer a good visual novel to a bad game with decisions that at the end mean nothing.
It would be better this visual novel if it were more realistic? Black girl instead of orcs? Well, I don't know. Maybe. But, sadly, in this fucking XXI century world of political correctness, a game with a black girl telling a white boy that she wants to be his slave, be called "<removed>", whipped, etc. by him would be... conflictive. Again, sadly. Political correctness and SJW postulates are a fucking tyranny right now and I understand that the devs prefer to avoid problems and self-censor. Anyway, the orc thing is funny. I like it, even if I'm not into Warhammer, Lord of the Rings and etc.
PD. I have written in my comment that thing that in the US. is called euphemistically "the N world" and the forum has deleted automatically the word and put "removed" instead. Yes, political correctness is a tyranny even in a porn pirate forum. Indeed I understand the devs and the self-censor. This very game with a black girl instead an orc girl probably would be banned even here.