VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    Ai Shoujo Fan

    Making Memories 0.8

    I definitely would not download this again. The English is so horrible. I couldn't make any sense of the dialogue or the choices. If your choices were King or Prince a million different times, what would you choose? Such weird choices. I wasn't even sure if they meant King or Prince, of if they meant Queen and Princess since a lot of non English speakers get the gender wrong on some nouns and pronouns. The only reason why I am giving this game two stars is because it has a ton of content - chapters and renders. And the renders look good. There isn't very much sex, but if you can understand and enjoy the dialogue you might be in it for the story. It's just not for me. Also, since this game has a million choices and they probably all impact your relationship status, someone should make a walkthrough mod.
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    whizwart

    Ok, this is rough, not because it's bad, but because you can see the good struggling to get out.

    The Good:

    -Gorgeous art that appears original with good touches of Latin/Spanish influences. Visual treat,

    -Latino cast. I know, I sound like I'm trying to push something, but I'm coming from a writing/story angle. Having the cast all Latino opens up some story features you don't normally have. It's a nice change from "Midwest/East coast teen dude bangs some chicks" thing.

    -The actual divorce subplot. If for no other reason, the person getting cheated on going to a divorce attorney immediately, and the cheater realizing their hedonistic dreams have destroyed their family . You don't even have to close out peacefully, you can just freeze them out in the end. It's....it's like a real divorce! With how real people would respond!

    The Bad:

    The main plot: It's not clear to me what the main thrust of the story is. I know it's about healing, but.....barely anything happens. The divorce scenes are great, but then you have like, 3 scenes after that just seem like analyzing the hell out of it. It's just....boring.

    the dialogue: A bad story doesn't have to impact a game if the dialogue is good, and unfortunately, I don't think it is here. Just....endless navel gazing. Sorting out feelings is fine....when it doesn't feel like the whole game. I start skipping scenes, it got so dull.

    Short version: Looks great, some interesting takes, but ultimately dull.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    Jnx

    I really like this one, so I have less to say about it than I usually do. However, it just cruises from cliffhanger to cliffhanger. And it's not a real slow burn like it wants to be. It's a slow burn in the sense that the 15 minutes of reading is interrupted by ~a month of waiting for the next update. But this uses atypical character models that are (mostly) good. The poses aren't the same poses you see in every other DAZ game. The UI is mostly stock and the lack of a textbox makes it hard to read some things. But it's presented a little better than most so I'm ambivalent.

    The story just throws you right into MC catching his wife cheating on him. His loving daughter pushes him to a hotel to get away from the trauma. Then they move in with his doting sister. The illusion of slow burn is once again washed away by the fact that daughter has an Oedipus complex (actual line from the story) and MCs first kiss was his sister. And I'm guessing a lot of this is written by patreon polls or something because there seemed to be a moment where ex-wife wanted to try for redemption. But the inferiority complexed beta males on the internet can't handle that so she was written out of it post haste. But the interactions are written well and there isn't 35 love interests to lose track of so give and take I guess.

    Final verdict wait every few updates to read this. This is one that I've very uncharacteristically followed since it's first appearance and I like it. While I'm VERY tired of the "dad dating his family" thing, my head usually doesn't pound while reading the dialogue. That is one MAJOR issue though, the English. There's spelling, grammar, and tensing issues EVERYWHERE. It really needs to be edited. Wrong characters saying other people's lines, things need to be edited. And I laughed because I generally read through the WHOLE story every time I come back to this and the "Ahem, ahem patch" no longer "patches" for I think episodes 1-5, so the "taboo subtext" doesn't work unless that's fixed. Not that I even like that trash. And about my comment about the models, the only one that is awful to look at is MC. His disgusting grey/yellow-green skin, and his face looks like its made of playdoh. I dunno... I just am glad when he's no longer on the screen. So I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt with 4 stars and might go down to 3 in the future, fair warning.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    RobJoy

    Incredible and tastefully done incest story.
    Great visuals and the use of Ran'Py is just splendid.

    Never played this one before, and now it has become my favourite.

    Believable father daughter dynamic, if they were to somehow fall in love. It does not feel rushed in any way.
  5. 3.00 star(s)

    URMfollower22

    So. 3 Stars right. You guys are going to start just skipping my reviews. Guess what it is? That's right:

    Great pictures. AMAZING transitions. Engrish... OMG the Engrish... but the pictures and flow is enough for me to understand. So, why not 4 stars? A very personal choice:

    King vs Prince. I have URM because I can't be assed to do a game 2-5 times to get the result I want. This is a porn game. I want nice easy +1 to Love Interest #1 or +1 to Love Interest #2. That's it. I can multi-save if I want to see it all, or pick and choose the LI.

    This is WAY too artistic... It's not bad at ALL... but it's rubbing me the wrong way. I can't see any obvious counts on the URM... and it's just one bad update from me tossing it (while wishing it well).

    "But, lack of numbers makes it realistic!" I'm going to be WAY too real for a porn site:
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    If the lack of clear flags and the King / Prince doesn't bother you, you'll probably enjoy this game at the 4 star level.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    avent0001

    It´s an incest game. Don´t go away just yet, this is the real deal. Proper incest, not some fantasy out of a porn flick. There are feelings here and life long relationships and lots of cheese. But incest is like this sometimes, it´s not just pure lust. Sometimes it´s just love (the chees is rubbing on me).
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    Askwad

    A fantastic slow burn romance novel that really nails atmospheric and emotional themes. At times it feels like the writer wanted to write poetry more than adult novels.

    Every character interaction feels genuine and it's easy to get drawn into the dynamics at play. It's cute without being insufferable and poignant without overplaying the hand.

    Now as of yet there's no sexual scenes, just romantic build up and emotional processing. It's very much an adult novel with emphasis on mature but I really wish the dev left more room for eroticism.
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    jelow333

    Nice game, well written, but with a bitter taste. What kind of mother and wife would choose her home, for such cheating, with a young associate. maybe he would understand some hotel, his suite, after a few drinks. But she planned it, so she paid for their absence (shop visit). Or, what a corrupt person you have to be to even think about fucking a young colleague and not think about the day your daughter graduates. It would have been better for me if there was no explanation from the mother. It's just that she's gone, the other two (sister and daughter are beautiful) and I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story. Please continue with the game according to your dev ideas (sorry Google translation).
  9. 4.00 star(s)

    Geralt_R

    Making Memories is a story driven slow burn romance between the MC, his sister and his daughter (you should really apply the patch here). As of release 0.6 (early August 2022) there is zero nudity, zero sex, just some petting and kissing in the game.
    So if you want lots of action from your game or steamy teasing at least - Making Memories will probably disappoint you. You also only have two love interests in this game. The sister and daughter. No one else (so far).

    With that out of the way Making Memories excels at the actual "novel" part of VN/KN. And while it doesn't really bring anything new to the table the execution is different than in most other games of the genre.
    The game is contemplative, pensive and at times more somber, so it's not your somewhat over the top fun teasing game where characters jump from one improbable scene to the next. This game takes its time and feels more realistic.

    You get video clips every now and then of cityscapes, cloudscapes, a ride on the subway, these are real world videos but they are integrated really well into the story and add a lot of atmosphere.
    There are no real sex animations to speak of though, since there is no sex in this game so far, some of the teasing and light petting (no nudity, panties are not removed) are of course not just one static render, but if you go into a game expecting lots of lewd animations... again, this is not your game.

    Character design in this game is pretty good. The game also has a third person view, so you will see the MC and his face several times. Composition and camera angles are really good here, helped by the fact that the game doesn't need to hide the MC. I appreciate it... if you prefer invisible MCs or POV you need to be aware that the MC will be seen many times.
    The sister is one of the few DAZ models that actually look a bit more mature, and not like the typical milf that still looks not a day older than 25. The sister maybe doesn't look like 45 or so (as mentioned in the game), but at least like a woman in her mid or late 30s. You do believe she's an adult. The sister is of course very pretty and curvy (not too curvy). I think she looks like a sister or cousin of Salma Hayek. That should give you an idea of her type.

    The daughter is 22 in this game and yet another beauty. She's not of the ultra skinny variety, she looks like a very pretty healthy woman with normal weight. So legs are a bit thicker, she has some nice curves and overall looks very soft and sweet, adorable and sexy.
    The MC does look alright, but his skin tone is very pale which I found a bit odd.
    The main characters in this game are latinos, something you don't get too often, which I found quite refreshing. Some Spanish vocabulary is thrown in here and there, nothing too complicated though and even if you don't speak Spanish you will still get it. The actual dialogue is in English of course, the Spanish words are just used for flavor.

    There are also several NPCs in the game, a pretty Asian friend of the daughter (maybe potential future love interest?), a therapist, the (ex)-wife and a few more. They all look ok. The Asian friend is the prettiest character here though. She's very cute.

    The main characters all have some depth to them, they have lifes, they have hobbies and jobs, so they don't just exist to romance. The sister is a lawyer and a hobby baker. The daughter works as a photographer with her friend, Only the MC more or less does nothing, he's a travel agent or so, but at least for now he doesn't work, he devotes his time to the two women.

    Back to the story though...

    As mentioned... if you want a somewhat more realistic story, a much less silly and more thoughtful approach to taboo love (I do recomend you use the patch, the game makes so much more sense with a patch), then Making Memories will leave an impression on you.

    And even though the game does not bring anything new to the table really... execution is different here.
    So the scenario is familiar. Wife cheats on husband, husband and daughter walk in on her while she's having fun... Husband files for divorce and reconnects with his sister who is a lawyer, and ends up living in her house with his daughter. And then the MC slowly forms ever more closer and intimate bonds with the two women.
    And as in so many other games of the genre it is eventually revealed that the daughter has had a crush on the MC for a long time and that the MC and the sister were really close when they were younger, as in, there was love between them, but it was never really acted upon.
    But years have passed, times have changed and the MC and his sister quickly realize that they can now explore something beautiful between them. It's really sweet and loving.
    So the scenario is not new. You have seen it plenty of times before. But the approach here is much more psychological in nature, whereas most other games usually choose a route more based on raw passion, lust and desire.

    The cheating scene very early in the game is entirely optional btw, you can skip it, but it's really just one static render of the wife in the bedroom, you don't even really see anything. I don't like NTR at all (if it's the netorare variety), but this scene is absolutely ok. And the wife is not a love interest to begin with. So no reason to be upset about that. And you can safely skip it, the game warns you even.

    You will have to talk to the wife a few times in the story, she will also appear in dreams or as some kind of daydream during therapy sessions, but it's always obvious the MC is moving on from her, and instead getting ever closer to his sister and daughter.

    There is a "King" and "Prince" flavor path in the game, both can result in somewhat different scenes, but the gist is still the same. This is not a dom/sub path, more like a more assertive/paternal path and one where the daughter is encouraged to be the MC's equal, to even take the initiative here and there (when it's about making a move, kissing etc. so NO domination or submission).
    This is a wholesome romance game through and through.

    I think I would have liked it better though if at least one of the love interests had not a secret crush on the MC. This of course makes everything very easy. The MC doesn't have to fight to gain the interest of the two love interests, they already love him to begin with. But maybe it's too easy. It could have been interesting to make the daughter someone who slowly falls in love with the MC, with the sister being the one who's had a crush or even felt real love for the MC for a long time.
    But of course this would make things even slower. So the daughter and the MC begin to exchange kisses and cuddle pretty early in the game, same with the sister. Both the routes progress at the same speed. And at the end of the current update petting with both is introduced (with clothes on.... not sure why, but it is what it is, I feel most people would usually remove their clothes in this situation).

    And that's one potential major issue then... a slow burn eventually stops making sense when the characters are so in love with each other and when there is zero conflict anymore. The daughter at one point even tells the father that she wants to go all in, that she wants to be physical with him. So there's zero doubt about what she wants and needs.

    It's mostly the MC who has a few second thoughts, but again, this eventually stops making sense. But the game is not quite there yet, only getting close to that point where things should progress much further. Also, the game is pretty short, you can easily play it through in one session. So for now the teasing and rate of progress feels right.
    Still, I feel things should move on to the next stage sooner than later. The three characters are already at a point where there are no doubts anymore really, everyone wants to be intimate.

    Also, as of now there's zero conflict. Of course there is drama, the cheating ex-wife, the emotional turmoil of the MC, his thoughts about his attraction for both his sister and his daughter... but the romance itself is - as of now - without any drama. However, the daughter and the sister don't know yet that the MC is involved with both of them.
    Another source of potential confllict is removed when the female therapist turns out to be a very understanding and even supportive character. She more or less even encourages the MC to accept his feelings.

    What else... the game has a few typos, here and there the English doesn't sound right either, but it's nothing too major and doesn't happen too often.
    Render quality itself is pretty good, It's your typical DAZ game in that regard. I have not seen the character models for the main love interests anywhere before though. So if you want to see some fresh faces... this game has them.
    And the latino angle (I would assume the characters have Mexican roots, which is also suggested by flashbacks) is also pretty rare and offers something unique.
    The music in this game is pretty great and underlines the contemplative mood. Don't mute the music here.
    What I find a bit disortienting at times is the lack of scene transitions, as in, there are no title cards and the game does jump to different scenes without warning and you may wonder what's going on here. I would suggest adding more scene transitions to make it obvious when time is skipped or a new scene is beginning. But it's a minor issue.

    So who will enjoy this game?
    Fans of story driven games that have an artistic touch, someone who will appreciate a less over the top and much more grounded and at times contemplative approach to the topic, and people who can accept that there is no sex as of yet (but it will come) will probably love this. As far as wholesome somewhat more serious story driven games go Making Memories is a highlight that deserves much more attention.

    If you want many love interests, paths, routes or lots of intense teasing... you will probably not be happy here. But you can find plenty of other games that offer all that.

    Making Memories is the rare game that focuses on just two love interests and which has a more psychological approach to everything, further underlined by the therapy sessions of the MC and his daughter. The mood in this game is fantastic, and even though there is little teasing (compared to other games of the genre), you can feel the emotional attachments that are formed and the kissing, some caresses and some light petting eventually are still impactful, despite the complete lack of nudity. As said before, the progress in this game is mostly psychological in nature, not so much carnal. This is not about convincing someone to give a blowjob or to open the legs. If you like that you will be very happy with the approach here.

    So give the game a try if you like story driven games! I am certain you will like it a lot, probably even love it - even with zero sex in the game so far.
  10. 4.00 star(s)

    Veriko666

    I really like this VN a great deal. It's not a porn game but rather a game focused around a small number of people who are struggling after some family trauma and you follow their story with grief, hopes and ambitions.

    I will say that the pacing felt great up until episode 6, where I think it stumbled a little bit. I can't go into details without giving away spoiler so I will avoid talking about it too much. But I kind of felt like it's important to mention and I hope this isn't a sign of more pacing issues. But right now I take it as a stumble.

    The atmosphere in the VN is great, this is one of the few games where I feel like the music actually adds to the experience. Which to me is a pretty huge thing.

    I feel like it's important to mention that the game lacks any major grammatical issues, it does happen and yes it sometimes annoys me but it's very passable.

    Overall: It's refreshing to see a VN that focuses on a small number of people instead of throwing 20 girls at you that get no time to develop. It's also an interesting and somewhat believable story. The models are great and the quality of renders are overall wonderful, with some darker scenes having some graininess. To top if off: don't expect a porn game, this is a somewhat slowburn.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    diego68usa

    Excellent job so far. Love the storyline progress and really like the smattering of spanish! Its a slow burn and a lot of dialogue but its entertaining and might even be "believable" as far as erotic stories go. Not sure what the King and prince designation is for or if it actually will result in a different ending. I agree with someone below whom stated that the MC has things very easy (Money, love, etc) but its not distracting.

    Highly recommend this game (unless you want a quick result) and keep up the great work dev. v/r Diego
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    Larry2000

    Based on Episode 4 (will play 5 soon)

    This game renewed my faith in Incest games. I was gonna hedge my bets and say "kind of" but then I thought about it. Most Incest games do little to actually form a close bond between the characters involved. They don't bother to call upon the taboo nature of the subject. Most don't realize that if Incest WERE to happen, it'd probably because something broke within the people.

    Well, there was a change of sorts, and there are some broken pieces strewn about.

    Characters
    This is where the game really shines. We have a beautifully paced Visual Novel that puts emphasis on two heroines/love interests: MC's sister Ava and MC's daughter Xiomara.

    Each character is unique, but more importantly, they both have a pretty specific and beautiful relationship with the MC. I won't go into spoilers, but the rekindling with the sister was pretty amazing to me. It was unexpected, fruitful and surprising. It feels like the Dev bottled intimacy and put it into two characters.

    Even though the sister is great, the powerhouse is the daughter. Xiomara is among the loveliest Daz characters created. I don't know if the characters are supposed to be Mexican or not, the day of the dead stuff points that way to me, but the Spanish words used affectionately really fill my heart when I read it. As a Mexican myself, it makes it that much more relatable. But as I was saying, she is amazingly rendered. Her and Ava both look very Native American/Mexican making them look VERY unique. Her heterochromia is even more spectacular. Probably the cutest girl ever in my opinion.

    She's full of life, but is pretty reserved. She's also one of the most realistic LI's I've seen because her motions aren't dictated by lust/love, like in most incest games, but a lack of wholeness, imo anyway. Her father completes her and she knows what she is to her: a piece that should never leave her puzzle :love: The story of how she comes to love her father is VERY easy and, well, normal. That said, it's realistic and completely understandable and relatable.

    Lewd content:
    Honestly, not much as of Chapter 4. It's a little bit of teasing, and the sister's MASSIVE cleavage. But I'm sure there is more in the next chapter that is ALREADY OUT :D

    Story/Plot:
    Bad stuff happens to MC. His wife is a trifling "lady." You catch her cheating in a non-graphic (in the game I mean) manner. MC takes video and moves for divorce pretty quickly. That's as much as you need to know about that situation. Not a spoiler, just a long story short. The more interesting part of this game is how the MC handles the cheating. There are some interesting and well done psychology in the game. Not as in real psychology, I wouldn't know where to begin, but in terms of moving the story along and more importantly, pushing the healing forward. MC is having haunting moments of his wife both in dream and while awake. These sneaking thoughts that pervade his space when he lets his guard down. Each scene is tastefully and artistically covers his wives whole face. It lets the MC alone in his thoughts talking to a faceless women he never knew prior to the cheating. A really cool and metaphysical examination of human psychology. I know your wife is a cheating "lady" but there seems to be something that we don't understand about the cheating. That has yet to be revealed in chapter 4. Doesn't change the cheating, but I feel that there are some demons that have yet to be exercised from MC. I thought about the wife's reason to cheat on him. I felt real anger, and contemplated it for a while. Then there is a moment in the game when the wife calls MC over the phone. "You were pretty quick to divorce me, it's almost like you were ready to leave at any moment" or something to that effect.

    I stewed on that thought for a while. I contemplated the pressures the wife might have had and the MC's hand in the cheating. Not contrary to the MC, cause she CHEATED! But I thought about the perspective and gave her a little rope. I have a tinge of sympathy for her and if the Dev wants us to EVER give her a chance, I'm sure they are more than equipped to convince us with the way they handled the story so far.

    Wonderful stuff really :D

    Thank you for renewing my faith in Incest games Kvitravn Tales :')
    5/5 No question.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    Demogorgon1422

    Very well done. Loving the storyline progress. Took me longer than I would like to admit to understand the Spanish thrown in there. Really could have done without it, but whatever.

    Also the dialog options were 'King' or 'Prince'. I was unsure if calling the Li a king, and wasn't translated to be queen. Still am, Its kinda like Fosters use of Alpha & Beta for dialog choices.

    That wasn't enough of a gripe for me to take away a star. 5/5 will fuck around, while enjoying the renders and the realistic bodies. OMG, the body types..... So Hot!
  14. 4.00 star(s)

    UselessSphinx

    I gave this a tiny update since the last release. Just about the writing. It does not reflect on the 4 star rating.

    PROS
    Good story
    Good models
    Good renders

    CONS
    MC looks like Casper. Needs some color bad
    Image on day 4 was missing
    Writing needs some help

    OVERALL
    I understand that not every one is fluent in English, but you shouldn't substitute contractions when they aren't needed.
    For example: say you are instead of you're . There are lots of this in the writing.
    Not a bad story so far. Some emotions throughout makes it more captivating and believable.
    The only big question that I actually have is, are we going to get the family harem thing, or just the relationship between the three main characters?
    Good plot and dynamic characters makes this a pretty good VN. I recommend it.
    I'm looking forward to continuing this story to completion.
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Chloe_Lauren

    This VN is in my personal top 10 list. Story is excellent and all of the characters are extremely charming (Even the Wife!) But something is missing. Something like a spontaneous or unusual events. Or a rival young man who will try to date your romance option.

    What i'm saying is that everything is going all too well for MC. He doesn't have to work to get the money, He doesn't have work to get the girls to love him. It's like starting a new RPG game with lvl 100 character :sleep:
  16. 1.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 2553135

    Overall, a terrible game b/c the dev lied about what the game would be.

    Pros:
    Renders are great.

    Cons:
    Dev combines Spanish and English in some parts
    Characters are terrible and contradict themselves regularly.
    MC is a spineless wimp. Lets his daughter whom he supposedly love just leave him, and he forgives his cheating wife like a beta.
    The dev lied about future tags to bait players into the story.
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    Uncommon Sense

    I highly recommend this game for romance and incest lovers. The betrayal of the MC's wife brings him closer with his family, sister and daughter to be frank. The story is a what I thought was a slow burn kinda but seems to be moving at a good pace. The renders are we'll done and characters beautiful and different from the standard. Xiomera is a beautiful model a total Heartbreaker.
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    Darkened90

    Can't wait for the next update. Very addicting. Sure it has a very similar story to some other VN's. But this one just grabs you and pulls you into the story and doesnt let go. I found it difficult to stop.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    KgsOfTea

    Marvelous! One of the best games on the resource. It's as if "Ocean" himself came down from heaven and got rid of the excess of perfectionism, becoming more engaged in productivity. Amazing level of quality, bravo!
  20. 3.00 star(s)

    Kaasje404

    Review for Ep. 5 v0.5

    What immediately catched my eye while playing this game was the use of real life animations. I think that was a good idea, it actually didnt feel unnatural even though it has a contrast with the graphics of the game of course. Never seen this done so well before in a AVN, so props to the dev!

    The English of the dev can do with some improvements, as some dialogues felt a little bit rough. The graphics aren't amazing and I unfortunately did not find the women attractive in the game, the preview pictures were nothing like the women in the game.

    Furthermore, I would advise the dev to change the colour of the text in the in-game menu as it was very difficult to read the text being pink on pink.

    To end on a high note though, the game is well put together in an unique and interesting way that I've never seen before in an AVN. There's quite a lot of potential, so i doubted between a 3 or a 4 stars. Eventually the characters not being in pretty imo was the deciding factor to give it three stars.