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At first my thoughts were : wow , THICC , beautifull dames , lewd.
Right up my alley.
But without animations this lacks something i can't lay my finger on.
This just doesn't grab me.
Pity.
Right up my alley.
But without animations this lacks something i can't lay my finger on.
This just doesn't grab me.
Pity.
Nowadays there are so many femdom ,NTR or futa games,
why not give a chance to a maledom vanilla game even if is an early release ? uh?
why not give a chance to a maledom vanilla game even if is an early release ? uh?
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girls look great. premise is awesome, but...
lacking animations in a HS based game is a big one. Really need those
and I'm sorry but you need a writer. Its like someone describing pictures, is the outline of a story, or like it was written by an 8 year old.
But this has a lot of good potential. Like I said the premise is great. The characters are solid, and the girl designs are excellent. Just put a little more effort into the writing part and this will be a good game.
lacking animations in a HS based game is a big one. Really need those
and I'm sorry but you need a writer. Its like someone describing pictures, is the outline of a story, or like it was written by an 8 year old.
But this has a lot of good potential. Like I said the premise is great. The characters are solid, and the girl designs are excellent. Just put a little more effort into the writing part and this will be a good game.
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SAME A VN with Honey Select visuals but no Animations is like a car with no wheels. Feels incomplete.
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Nowadays a pure maledom game is pretty hard to find. There's always inclination to include other types of fetish.
Sometimes people just want a pure maledom vanilla. Sometimes people just not really interested in all that long novel stories and just want to get right into what makes the action possible and what are the actions happening. It's obvious that English is not the dev's native language. But really, a straightforward approach is sometimes a great way to do it.
It's still 0.1, give the dev some more time to get more experience with the engine, how to write a story, garner some feedbacks, I'm sure with enough support and incentives, the dev could expand more.
And honestly, pretty sure some people just hold Ctrl button to skip most of the stories in any game in this site, and just want to jump into where the actions are... should buy an 18+ book to read instead if one is that interested in the story instead of the porn in a porn video game...
Sometimes people just want a pure maledom vanilla. Sometimes people just not really interested in all that long novel stories and just want to get right into what makes the action possible and what are the actions happening. It's obvious that English is not the dev's native language. But really, a straightforward approach is sometimes a great way to do it.
It's still 0.1, give the dev some more time to get more experience with the engine, how to write a story, garner some feedbacks, I'm sure with enough support and incentives, the dev could expand more.
And honestly, pretty sure some people just hold Ctrl button to skip most of the stories in any game in this site, and just want to jump into where the actions are... should buy an 18+ book to read instead if one is that interested in the story instead of the porn in a porn video game...
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Unless you're find cow udders on women utterly repulsive.
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I am not putting in a rating, since this is just 0.1, and I'd have to give 2/5 stars.
But I'll put how it currently looks as feedback to devs.
The good:
- Okay, so you got basics right for a power fantasy maledom game! Thumbs up for that, good.
- The renders are decent enough (I am not a fan of HoneySelect, so I may be biased).
The bad:
- Dialogues are unrealistic and way too simple. Also, too basic English. All what you wrote should be done sorta more naturally. Not necessarily in longer texts, but maybe allow a couple renders for actual actions and set up background more for each situation, instead of just writing 1 line of text about how MC fakes bank transfer. I get it, those lines exist only as filler between sex/dom scenes, but still it is way too rushed. This might work in bad porn movie, but this is supposed to be a "novel".
- You may have your preferences for women's figures, but do try to include different bodies. All the girls look the same -- big tits, big arse, tall.
There are no choices, but there are menus to choose things. Remove them, unless you use them.
Will look forward to next version.
But I'll put how it currently looks as feedback to devs.
The good:
- Okay, so you got basics right for a power fantasy maledom game! Thumbs up for that, good.
- The renders are decent enough (I am not a fan of HoneySelect, so I may be biased).
The bad:
- Dialogues are unrealistic and way too simple. Also, too basic English. All what you wrote should be done sorta more naturally. Not necessarily in longer texts, but maybe allow a couple renders for actual actions and set up background more for each situation, instead of just writing 1 line of text about how MC fakes bank transfer. I get it, those lines exist only as filler between sex/dom scenes, but still it is way too rushed. This might work in bad porn movie, but this is supposed to be a "novel".
- You may have your preferences for women's figures, but do try to include different bodies. All the girls look the same -- big tits, big arse, tall.
There are no choices, but there are menus to choose things. Remove them, unless you use them.
Will look forward to next version.