I am not putting in a rating, since this is just 0.1, and I'd have to give 2/5 stars.
But I'll put how it currently looks as feedback to devs.
The good:
- Okay, so you got basics right for a power fantasy maledom game! Thumbs up for that, good.
- The renders are decent enough (I am not a fan of HoneySelect, so I may be biased).
The bad:
- Dialogues are unrealistic and way too simple. Also, too basic English. All what you wrote should be done sorta more naturally. Not necessarily in longer texts, but maybe allow a couple renders for actual actions and set up background more for each situation, instead of just writing 1 line of text about how MC fakes bank transfer. I get it, those lines exist only as filler between sex/dom scenes, but still it is way too rushed. This might work in bad porn movie, but this is supposed to be a "novel".
- You may have your preferences for women's figures, but do try to include different bodies. All the girls look the same -- big tits, big arse, tall.
There are no choices, but there are menus to choose things. Remove them, unless you use them.
Will look forward to next version.