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dan_roger69

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Mando Logica said:
Thanks a lot for your kind words, my friend.


Here it was Just for You KN, and the feedback was... I don't know, but many complained for no animation.
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I understand how it must have felt with the reviews on your first Kinetic VN. Don't let that stop you from attempting a new VN. we usually fail on our first attempt. Take constructive feedback from the reviews and make another attempt with a few change ups like:
1. Change the pacing for VN from how it's with your comics. Make the story intriguing or thrilling
2. Delay sex and tease more (like how its done with A wife and mother (AWAM) or A perfect marriage VN's) This will give you more time to either learn animations or invest in it in the future. AWAM introduced animations after 4 or 5 years of VN development and to this date there is no sex with the Female MC. Even animations are only 4 - 10 seconds long and is outsourced.
3. Try different variations and see what works and what doesn't.

Many VN developers first VN didn't take off and their 2nd or 3rd VN gained attention. (I'm just trying to encourage you)

Looking forward to your new comics and VN's.
 
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BiberonSZeta said:
Animation can come any time later, or on a new game you push. Don't worry so much, the laundest people are not always the majority.
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dan_roger69 said:
I understand how it must have felt with the reviews on your first Kinetic VN. Don't let that stop you from attempting a new VN. we usually fail on our first attempt. Take constructive feedback from the reviews and make another attempt with a few change ups like:
1. Change the pacing for VN from how it's with your comics. Make the story intriguing or thrilling
2. Delay sex and tease more (like how its done with A wife and mother (AWAM) or A perfect marriage VN's) This will give you more time to either learn animations or invest in it in the future. AWAM introduced animations after 4 or 5 years of VN development and to this date there is no sex with the Female MC. Even animations are only 4 - 10 seconds long and is outsourced.
3. Try different variations and see what works and what doesn't.

Many VN developers first VN didn't take off and their 2nd or 3rd VN gained attention. (I'm just trying to encourage you)

Looking forward to your new comics and VN's.
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Thank you very much for your valuable advice, my friends. I assure you that I will definitely take your suggestions into consideration! (y)

Maybe I can make a small VN game just like the one I did three years ago. https://f95zone.to/threads/fashion-business-fan-game-final-mando-logica.75531/
 
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That was a pretty big chapter nearly 300 pages wonder how many pages will include the coming chapter...
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BB1 have 87 pages
BB2 have 112 pages
BB3 have 135 pages
BB4 have 173 pages
BB5 have 211 pages
BB6 have 263 pages
BB7 have 291 pages

BB8 will have ? pages
BB9 will have ? pages
BB10 will have ? pages
BB11 will have ? pages
BB12 will have ? pages

However i am motivated! who else ?​
 
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StreamSteam said:
That was a pretty big chapter nearly 300 pages wonder how many pages will include the coming chapter...
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BB1 have 87 pages
BB2 have 112 pages
BB3 have 135 pages
BB4 have 173 pages
BB5 have 211 pages
BB6 have 263 pages
BB7 have 291 pages

BB8 will have ? pages
BB9 will have ? pages
BB10 will have ? pages
BB11 will have ? pages
BB12 will have ? pages

However i am motivated! who else ?​
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More than the number of pages it would motivate me to have that cock go back in that ass right away LOL
 
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StreamSteam said:
That was a pretty big chapter nearly 300 pages wonder how many pages will include the coming chapter...
View attachment 3454725
BB1 have 87 pages
BB2 have 112 pages
BB3 have 135 pages
BB4 have 173 pages
BB5 have 211 pages
BB6 have 263 pages
BB7 have 291 pages

BB8 will have ? pages
BB9 will have ? pages
BB10 will have ? pages
BB11 will have ? pages
BB12 will have ? pages

However i am motivated! who else ?​
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I hope our friend Mando Logica will do more pages, cause this story is getting more addictive. The more pages, the happy we are.
 
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