LadyBoyJay
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HTML Manslayer [v0.2] [digitalchic]
digitalchic
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Thank you, that's so kind! My biggest hope is that if the project gets big enough I can get an artist involved... we'll see!
Thanks for the kind words and all the feedback! ❤ The flashback suggestion is not a bad idea at all, I might actually decide to add a scene like this!Thanks for sharing! Really fun!
A weird twist on the genre, as the sissification is tied with becoming stronger/heroic, unless...
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Sleepmind
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Report to the ship as soon as possible. We'll Bang, ok?
No matter what, you'll end up as a feminized man. At the end of episode 2, you'll be given the choice to go all the way female or retain as much masculinity as possible.
swiver
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Renonymous nice review, I've tweaked some of my inadvertently potentially misleading formulations. I forgot to mention the UI, it is the some of the smoothest HTML I've played. But I'm wondering how you've reckoned 15 minutes gameplay? I can't be that slow a reader!
My nitpick with it might be the (much?) higher brightness than the rest, hurts me eyes. It might also be a tad too hazy for some of our bespectacled friends
not sure though, that might be again on account of the brightness.
Nah, I think this is actually good, haven't played enough html games to plainly say it's the norm to symbolize dreams and hallucinations wtth hazy font, but I'm pretty sure I've seen it a couple of times before. Plus with the different colour it is quite clear.
My nitpick with it might be the (much?) higher brightness than the rest, hurts me eyes. It might also be a tad too hazy for some of our bespectacled friends
not sure though, that might be again on account of the brightness.
digitalchic
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Like they said, feminization is the main theme of the game.
Well, I was specifically talking about the bit whenNah, I think this is actually good, haven't played enough html games to plainly say it's the norm to symbolize dreams and hallucinations wtth hazy font, but I'm pretty sure I've seen it a couple of times before. Plus with the different colour it is quite clear.
My nitpick with it might be the (much?) higher brightness than the rest, hurts me eyes. It might also be a tad too hazy for some of our bespectacled friends
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The rest of the times I use hazy font I think it works well... I take your point about maybe being difficult to read for shortsighted people but unless I get a bunch of complains it will stay as is. As for the brightness, you mean in the dream sequences in general, yeah? I quite like how it looks now, but, again, everything is subject to change if I enough people find a problem with it.
swiver
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oh I thought it was about all the hazies in general. I remember the exam scene, kept trying to go back and forth then made a screen shot
I was wondering if we're ultimately not meant to read those flashes? Not at all a complaint, though.It's quite interesting how it's mostly html and text-based devs who play with format and symbolism. Another aspect to ya'll being more interested in aesthetics, diction, etc.. Normally I'd lament Renpyers not doing stuff like that enough as the engine is more convenient, but you've managed to make it smooth enough that I don't think of starting up the game as a hassle.
The brightness: it wasn't one specific time, in the dreams/hallucinations in general, along with being hazy and neon coloured there seems to be a lighting effect? A couple times I felt I want to wear my glasses (which I have purely for the purpose of dulling bright lights, so I'm not best to go by, I guess, since I am more sensitive to brightness than the average).
The text does look good, as does the bg and the rest! Better than html UIs and texts I've played, some are just ugly like... well like something coded in html lol (and I'm flashing back to 1999
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TheFamilyDog
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I thought the main theme of the game was staking vampires, or as we learn later... taking care of their meat stakes.
I am not into futa, but it's a really fun game and well designed. Worth giving it a try.
This should also be tagged with Gay, in part 2 the MC can suck guys off while still being a dude
Ngl this is pretty impressive. I prefer a more sandbox approach to my html games, but I mean... I have no room to be complaining.
The writing is good. You've captured that whedon-esque cringe but not too cringe humor, pretty fuckin well.
I like that you can stay a femboy. Though, that does sound like a doubled workload as far as storytelling goes, or... at least a decent increase. I'm sure a lot could remain the same for either route beyond imaging. Good luck with it.
The writing is good. You've captured that whedon-esque cringe but not too cringe humor, pretty fuckin well.
I like that you can stay a femboy. Though, that does sound like a doubled workload as far as storytelling goes, or... at least a decent increase. I'm sure a lot could remain the same for either route beyond imaging. Good luck with it.
digitalchic
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Thanks for the positive review! I'm dealing with the consequences of this decision now as I'm deep into writing episode 3 haha. Some people have managed to deal with this kind of forking pretty successfully in my view, for example I would look at Healslut for a good reference. I'm clearly not going to be writing two games simultaneously from now on, but hopefully there can be enough moments where the difference is felt to make it seem like a worthwhile choice
Oh, and there might be even more significant choices at the start of episode 3...
digitalchic
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For now the most you get is a feminized guy who people perceive as a girl. I figured this qualified already, but also the game will go deeper in this direction.