HTML Manslayer [v0.2] [digitalchic]

[LadyBoyJay]

I loved the update!

 

[digitalchic]

Genre/kink wise this isn't really my thing but it's undeniable how well written and put together this is. Honestly people like you digitalchic are the most worthy of artists, bit of shame that you have to scavenge for images while AVNs with a third of the thought put into it can get great DAZ renders lol.

Thank you, that's so kind! My biggest hope is that if the project gets big enough I can get an artist involved... we'll see!

Thanks for sharing! Really fun!
A weird twist on the genre, as the sissification is tied with becoming stronger/heroic, unless...

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Thanks for the kind words and all the feedback! ❤ The flashback suggestion is not a bad idea at all, I might actually decide to add a scene like this!

 

[Sleepmind]

Report to the ship as soon as possible. We'll Bang, ok?

 

[chaosbox24]

Will we be able to avoid becoming feminized or is that the major focus of the game?

 

[VasaraGlyndark]

Will we be able to avoid becoming feminized, or is that the major focus of the game?

No matter what, you'll end up as a feminized man. At the end of episode 2, you'll be given the choice to go all the way female or retain as much masculinity as possible.

 

[chaosbox24]

No matter what, you'll end up as a feminized man. At the end of episode 2, you'll be given the choice to go all the way female or retain as much masculinity as possible.

I see, I think i'll skip this one then. Thanks.

 

[swiver]

Renonymous nice review, I've tweaked some of my inadvertently potentially misleading formulations. I forgot to mention the UI, it is the some of the smoothest HTML I've played. But I'm wondering how you've reckoned 15 minutes gameplay? I can't be that slow a reader!

It's just my way of showing that the interaction didn't actually happen and it was just a hallucination. I'm trying different ways of showing this kind of stuff, blur is probably not it haha.

Nah, I think this is actually good, haven't played enough html games to plainly say it's the norm to symbolize dreams and hallucinations wtth hazy font, but I'm pretty sure I've seen it a couple of times before. Plus with the different colour it is quite clear.
My nitpick with it might be the (much?) higher brightness than the rest, hurts me eyes. It might also be a tad too hazy for some of our bespectacled friends not sure though, that might be again on account of the brightness.

 

[digitalchic]

Will we be able to avoid becoming feminized or is that the major focus of the game?

Like they said, feminization is the main theme of the game.

Nah, I think this is actually good, haven't played enough html games to plainly say it's the norm to symbolize dreams and hallucinations wtth hazy font, but I'm pretty sure I've seen it a couple of times before. Plus with the different colour it is quite clear.
My nitpick with it might be the (much?) higher brightness than the rest, hurts me eyes. It might also be a tad too hazy for some of our bespectacled friends not sure though, that might be again on account of the brightness.

Well, I was specifically talking about the bit when

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It's like a variation of the times I simply replace sexy text with mundane text, but I think it is a bit odd. I'll think about changing it.

The rest of the times I use hazy font I think it works well... I take your point about maybe being difficult to read for shortsighted people but unless I get a bunch of complains it will stay as is. As for the brightness, you mean in the dream sequences in general, yeah? I quite like how it looks now, but, again, everything is subject to change if I enough people find a problem with it.

 

[swiver]

Like they said, feminization is the main theme of the game.


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It's like a variation of the times I simply replace sexy text with mundane text, but I think it is a bit odd. I'll think about changing it.

The rest of the times I use hazy font I think it works well... I take your point about maybe being difficult to read for shortsighted people but unless I get a bunch of complains it will stay as is. As for the brightness, you mean in the dream sequences in general, yeah? I quite like how it looks now, but, again, everything is subject to change if I enough people find a problem with it.

oh I thought it was about all the hazies in general. I remember the exam scene, kept trying to go back and forth then made a screen shot I was wondering if we're ultimately not meant to read those flashes? Not at all a complaint, though.

It's quite interesting how it's mostly html and text-based devs who play with format and symbolism. Another aspect to ya'll being more interested in aesthetics, diction, etc.. Normally I'd lament Renpyers not doing stuff like that enough as the engine is more convenient, but you've managed to make it smooth enough that I don't think of starting up the game as a hassle.

The brightness: it wasn't one specific time, in the dreams/hallucinations in general, along with being hazy and neon coloured there seems to be a lighting effect? A couple times I felt I want to wear my glasses (which I have purely for the purpose of dulling bright lights, so I'm not best to go by, I guess, since I am more sensitive to brightness than the average).

The text does look good, as does the bg and the rest! Better than html UIs and texts I've played, some are just ugly like... well like something coded in html lol (and I'm flashing back to 1999).