This seems to have developed nicely.
The plot is still alright, I had no trouble following it. Last time I commented, that was my number one concern...
What worries me a little now is the amount of characters introduced on Day 4 alone. It's SO many, and often in groups of two or three. Which would be fine, but during the marathon introduction of the students I found myself unsure of which name belongs to who.
Of course, this game is about impregnating lots of girls, and for that they need to be introduced. But maybe introducing 24 characters in one scene is a bit much.
Something that I think must be fixed - the sooner, the better - is the spelling/grammar. The English can definitely be improved quite a bit.
Finally, I've checked out the unpatched version out of curiosity. And there's one thing in that version that I liked that is not there anymore after applying the patch. That thing is the ability to say no. It's a small thing, but I guess I just love to see the girls' disappointed faces when I tell them to go fuck themselves, rather than me.
There are still a few situations where you can decline sex, not that many. Oh, also, saying no to the pregnant Olivia crashes the game. In case you weren't aware.
So in conclusion, I love this game. I look forward to seeing more of it.