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ProofreadingRUS

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My God what a good game, but it's in need of a better proofreader.
Every time I run into a sentence I can't understand, I just want to slap whoever did the proofreading.
And all of the sudden it turns into the Black Butler series with The Demon thing and eating soul thing and Contract thing.
Choose or die? That's an option? I don't even know what he was agreeing to.
 
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PrimeX

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It's great that you can have sex with a LOT of girls but I bet the FBI is frowning on me now! Lol
 
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BigDaddyDom

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Aurora seems...familiar :sneaky: any plans to turn her into a transformer or have a younger petite version of her? :D
 

Paitryn

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Hello everyone i just wonder :
1) we learn that he is not MC's father.
How Max managed to fool all the God's to believe that he is the one and if the MC is not the son how can be his replacement.
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I bet Max originally didn't try to fool anyone. The gods just fucked up and handed power over to a complete asshat.

Max is the father, the MC is in concurrent timelines in which he also fathers himself. its the very definition of a time paradox. Because the magic world exists across time, we see what is, what can, and what could be.

Convoluted, confusing and convenient (for the writer anyways, but fun to play with no less)

2) She's not. she serves them as an observer. Everything got messed up because she interfered when she shouldnt have.

3) I would imagine he has all the gifts bestowed upon him but no longer any more support or future gifts as the contract is now broken

4) Maybe, maybe not. nothing says he has to do anything he agrees to if he can find a way to break the contract. He's just been given a new ending to the story.

5)Doubt travelling through portals will protect the girls from max other than to keep them hidden for a moment. I would expect intervention.

Alexandra being good is a question of relativity. To the MC she is probably good, but ultimately that is because she wants neutrality and for the gods to stop fucking things up. If the MC wasn't in the situation he is in, he could be tragically torn to pieces by max and she probably wouldnt care. She has her own agenda, good or bad would seem to not be part of that.
 
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Daxter250

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lmao that made me laugh too hard. sry, but no xD. you either haven't read any good stories in ya life or are just thinking with ya dick. this game is just one hell of a fetish loli show while the story, if you could it that, is just glued together so the MC can sex as many lil girls as he wants. which is fine by itself, but it's not a "the godfather" of story driven porn games. heeeeell noooo :LOL:

this game is purely a "let ya dick do the thinking", nothing more, nothing less. if you take this story in any way serious you will see a lot of plot and logic holes and might even risk losing some brain due to those braindead time travel scenes that have so many logic holes ya can dig a whole town in xD.
 
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VeniXYZ

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lmao that made me laugh too hard. sry, but no xD. you either haven't read any good stories in ya life or are just thinking with ya dick. this game is just one hell of a fetish loli show while the story, if you could it that, is just glued together so the MC can sex as many lil girls as he wants. which is fine by itself, but it's not a "the godfather" of story driven porn games. heeeeell noooo :LOL:

this game is purely a "let ya dick do the thinking", nothing more, nothing less. if you take this story in any way serious you will see a lot of plot and logic holes and might even risk losing some brain due to those braindead time travel scenes that have so many logic holes ya can dig a whole town in xD.
OK i will not disagree with you, you have your opinion and i have mine :)
 
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Daxter250

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OK i will not disagree with you, you have your opinion and i have mine :)
cheers. i normally don't really care what people think of a game (as you said, whatever floats ya boat). problem is, you are kinda undermining the rating system if you throw out five stars like that. it also doesn't really help the dev either. a dev needs criticism to get better over time. and when i see that someone rates a VERY SIMPLISTIC game that is just a funny lil fuck show with the quotes"pefect and the story is just fantastic" i do raise an eyebrow what the heck is going on there.

nothing against ya, just pls consider that when rating games.
 
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Spfjolietjake

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cheers. i normally don't really care what poeople think of a game (as you said, whatever floats ya boat). problem is, you are kinda undermining the rating system if you throw out five stars like that. it also doesn't really help the dev either. a dev needs criticism to get better over time. and when i see that someone rates a VERY SIMPLISTIC game that is just a funny lil fuck show with the quotes"pefect and the story is just fantastic" i do raise an eyebrow what the heck is going on there.

nothing against ya, just pls consider that when rating games.
Respect but it seems to them that is a 5 star VN, I have a problem with rating VNs. I've only rated one so far because it asks you to not rate with emotions. Thats hard as fuck for me, because besides being turned on what I value most is the feels I get from the characters and stories both good and bad.
So many talented story tellers here on this forum.
This game i do highly enjoy, its taken myths i was thought and putting them, crazy sex, and nice visuals all in a blender with out a lid. Its fun and fresh but I don't have a clue how to rate it the proper way
 

Daxter250

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Respect but it seems to them that is a 5 star VN, I have a problem with rating VNs. I've only rated one so far because it asks you to not rate with emotions. Thats hard as fuck for me, because besides being turned on what I value most is the feels I get from the characters and stories both good and bad.
So many talented story tellers here on this forum.
This game i do highly enjoy, its taken myths i was thought and putting them, crazy sex, and nice visuals all in a blender with out a lid. Its fun and fresh but I don't have a clue how to rate it the proper way
a five star means utter pefection that nothing can surpass and that can't ever get better (english grammar alone alr isnt even near perfect, so the game simply can't be rated perfectly - apart from all the plotholes...).
if you like something you can rate it 3 to 4 stars. i often do that, the famous game rater zippity also often does it.

btw. how many VNs did you play so far? ever played actual story driven games like kazoku keikaku, yu-no or yume miru kusuri? maybe clannad? ever 17? g-senjou no maou? or some indie titles like the ones from fenoxo?
 
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ProofreadingRUS

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My God what a good game, but it's in need of a better proofreader.
Every time I run into a sentence I can't understand, I just want to slap whoever did the proofreading.
Respect but it seems to them that is a 5 star VN, I have a problem with rating VNs. I've only rated one so far because it asks you to not rate with emotions. Thats hard as fuck for me, because besides being turned on what I value most is the feels I get from the characters and stories both good and bad.
So many talented story tellers here on this forum.
This game i do highly enjoy, its taken myths i was thought and putting them, crazy sex, and nice visuals all in a blender with out a lid. Its fun and fresh but I don't have a clue how to rate it the proper way
And we don't care that you don't care.
 

Farbror Gael

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I think some of the girls might be related to Michael Jackson, because they sure look like he did at the end!
 

Spfjolietjake

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a five star means utter pefection that nothing can surpass and that can't ever get better (english grammar alone alr isnt even near perfect, so the game simply can't be rated perfectly - apart from all the plotholes...).
if you like something you can rate it 3 to 4 stars. i often do that, the famous game rater zippity also often does it.

btw. how many VNs did you play so far? ever played actual story driven games like kazoku keikaku, yu-no or yume miru kusuri? maybe clannad? ever 17? g-senjou no maou? or some indie titles like the ones from fenoxo?
Honestly i haven't played any of the ones you mentioned. This is the first vn that I've tried that I can't pronounce.
I'll try some of them after I'm caught up with my usual ones, and thanks for your time :)
 

Daxter250

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Honestly i haven't played any of the ones you mentioned. This is the first vn that I've tried that I can't pronounce.
I'll try some of them after I'm caught up with my usual ones, and thanks for your time :)
kazoku keikaku is also known as family project, g senjou no maou => the devil on g string, yume miru kusuri => a drug that makes you dream and yuno is also called a girl who chants love at the bound of the world. all translanted into english.
 
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Hbsmith

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Love this game; can't get the newest version to load. Here's my error:

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.

The label after_load is defined twice, at
File "al.rpyc", line 1 and
File "script.rpyc", line 1.

I've tried with and without the patch; I'm playing on Mac if that makes a difference.

Would really appreciate some help!
 

Evil-Neko

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Love this game; can't get the newest version to load. Here's my error:

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.

The label after_load is defined twice, at
File "al.rpyc", line 1 and
File "script.rpyc", line 1.

I've tried with and without the patch; I'm playing on Mac if that makes a difference.

Would really appreciate some help!
is the patch.rpa realy in MaouSamaWeek1/game folder?
 
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