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Franz's path will be over by Episode 8, currently working on it. It was meant only to have closure to his side story.
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Then sorry to say it but it shouldn't be in the prologue, it's shown as MC's past, something he has done, it's already set in stone.
It's a public forum here, not an art gallery, popularity is the key here, there are thousands of games, we don't want to waste hours/days playing the bad ones.
You have made very bad decisions with your game, that's my very own opinion, but that's your game, your own choices, you develop it the way you want after all, I'm not here to tell you what to do, I'm just voicing my opinion in a public forum.
Anyway, I still wish you good luck with your game, it's your own, do it as you please.
My friend, comments like yours help me identify a possible mistake and help me grow as a developer. When someone says "great job"...yeah, I appreciate it, it feeds my ego, but they're not really helping me get better. At the end, as you said, I'll decide.
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I thought maybe if you don’t go to Camille’s after the party and she never reads you the fortune tarot cards then maybe that would prevent it. Also will Camille’s sister the reporter ever become a li?
think you said this before but just confirm it for me, there are no choices mc can make to prevent her murder right?
I thought maybe if you don’t go to Camille’s after the party and she never reads you the fortune tarot cards then maybe that would prevent it. Also will Camille’s sister the reporter ever become a li?
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Nope, either you die, or Sam dies. I just sacrificed myself and the game ended there for me.
The choice to prevent her murder is to become the martyr.
You know, I was thinking about it: a path where nobody dies and what you mention would be a prereq.: not to go to Camille's, to the strip club, etc...but then I remembered...the game is called Martyr of Love, not University of Vaginas.
That last question: yes. (that kind of question is better to be asked privately, I feel like a spoiler.)
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pretty much the only positive in this KN in disguise (enforced GF, enforced ""love of my life", enforced sex scenes...) are scenes with milfs (netori).
while there is no (sex) scenes with mother-in-law just yet, but there are hot scenes with a few other milfs (mom of mc best friend included).
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Game looks okay overall but story line is all over the shop. just got killed by some rando from nowhere Come on mate that's horrible, fix the thing up! So far only ** from me.
Come on mate that's horrible, fix the thing up! So far only ** from me.
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It's always difficult to judge a story without seeing it in full.
For the scene at the beginning with the MC of the future, I think you should delete the part that concerns Christina because it is avoidable. And it's very weird to see that in a story if it doesn't happen.
Then, and this is where not knowing the whole story makes judgment difficult, I have the impression that we had a long introduction until the death of S (which is canon, if it is the MC who dies it is game over). Now the story “begins”.
I come back to the prologue scene, for me it says that the MC screwed up in the past. When we see the scene, we say to ourselves that he cheated on the love of his life, and he regrets it. Except that’s not it at all. S's death is inevitable (except game over), and completely outside the MC's responsibility (and no connection with his optional infidelity).
Knowing that we have no control (apart from one or two anecdotal choices) over the MC's life, this is what reinforces the impression that the first 5 episodes are a long introduction.
For the scene at the beginning with the MC of the future, I think you should delete the part that concerns Christina because it is avoidable. And it's very weird to see that in a story if it doesn't happen.
Then, and this is where not knowing the whole story makes judgment difficult, I have the impression that we had a long introduction until the death of S (which is canon, if it is the MC who dies it is game over). Now the story “begins”.
I come back to the prologue scene, for me it says that the MC screwed up in the past. When we see the scene, we say to ourselves that he cheated on the love of his life, and he regrets it. Except that’s not it at all. S's death is inevitable (except game over), and completely outside the MC's responsibility (and no connection with his optional infidelity).
Knowing that we have no control (apart from one or two anecdotal choices) over the MC's life, this is what reinforces the impression that the first 5 episodes are a long introduction.
WTF???? MC gets killed and have to start playing as his brother? What kind of bullshit is that? And from what I read, some choice that makes no sense if not MC it's his girlfriend (after the story is set in the past as the MC remembering.)
Didn't the dev see how badly Acting Lessons got rated afterwards? This is even worse.
Didn't the dev see how badly Acting Lessons got rated afterwards? This is even worse.
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