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That makes it confusing though. Starting the game with one of multiple possible endings. If someone doesn't get that ending that matches the intro to the game, then the intro won't make any sense. It becomes confusing how the intro starts that way, yet the ending doesn't match.Long hair MC will get to be short hair MC...or not, according to your choices. It's a story that started with a possible end that's all. It's not finished.
I didn't know about that (with Camille). I chose to go with Samantha. Guess the game does force you to be a cheating asshole then.You need to really change your first Chapter because when the game starts out or at least that is how it is for the Android version it shows the MC older and much shorter hair and then as he starts to have flashbacks it shows him starting to have sex with Christina which doesn't seem like there is a choice there. There is much that is forced on the MC especially his relationship with Samantha which I get because then we can meet her Milf mother. The thing that gets me in Part 3 is sex with Camille which is forced when it should be a choice there or not to cheat, yeah it is a choice to "stay" at the party or go with Samantha BUT it should also be a choice to have sex with Camille or not. I don't know who beta tests your game but there is obviously a lot of forced stuff that many players won't like and will be turned off by it. You started out good with the first Chapter BUT it could use a bit more choices. Also it is hard to know by the banner here who most of the LI's are going to be which should be updated. Also the conversation with Samantha's dad about how he wants to be with Josephine which almost tells me that choice there is going to be forced especially IF you want to cuck him with his wife. Not a bad story BUT I think some things just need to be rethought.
He has a weakness? So a girl gets naked and he loses all control and has to sleep with her against his will? MC has a girlfriend and a chick gets naked and he just goes "Screw my girlfriend, I'm going to go get laid!". Yeah that's definitely not the type of MC I want to play. Force a girlfriend on us and then force us to cheat on her. Myself personally, would definitely say "Goodbye, I'm going home." MC has a girlfriend he is in love with. Does that mean nothing to him that he would drop it all to get his dick wet at the first sight of a naked chick?Same answer about the beginning.
Yeah, as you say it's possible to stay loyal to Samantha, didn't see it necessary to add a yes/no choice when Camille's naked in front of you, MC wouldn't say "Good bye, I'm going home." He has a weakness. But yeah, if people want it, I'll add it.
I have no control over the banner here, my patreon has the latest one.
That really cements the choice that this game just won't be for me. Doesn't mean you need to change it or anything, just not my tastes is all. There is plenty others who will enjoy it, so no worries. Regardless, again, still wish you the best of luck with your project.
sorry for the multi-quote and long message lol