Okay I played it to see the Indian element if there was any. I don't think you need any help there, so far there is little to no callbacks to it. You are good.
Pro's:
Love the artwork, story, renders and characters. Someone has put a lot of work in this and it is really commendable.
The 'magic' element, the extras at the party and the final scene shows how much effort you have put in. Great job!
Con's:
1. Not much story to comment on as of yet, I'll wait for a few releases.
2. I would love to see the 'Health' meter in use. I know it's a kinetic novel, seems like only on romance but I would also love some side characters to add to the conflict of romance.
3. I think you might have missed an edit:
"Go ahead give your best shot, pussy like you can't hurt almighty Arideath."
Should be: "Go ahead, give your best shot. A pussy like you can't hurt the almighty Arideath."
Or you could go with: "Go ahead, give your best shot Pussy! Like you could ever hurt the almighty Arideath."
If you need any suggestions or help with writing you can ping me. I love creative writing and I would do it for free.
Cheers and good luck on your amazing project!