VN Ren'Py Mastering the Pink Box [v0.10] [Studio 68 Games!]

[Drevok]

I've noticed an interesting detail. When They are playing pool and you have the chance to peek under Misty's skirt, if you don't do it, Devon calls the MC "puppy" as she's been doing during the entire episode. But if you peek, she calls him Mister (this is on the "couple" path btw). So, maybe there's some kind of jealousy meter and if you flirt and do stuff with girls right in front of her without her telling you she's ok with it she won't like it.

Also, I hope Devon becomes a cuckquean. I want the MC to do stuff with other girls on his own from time to time and later he tells Devon when they are together.

 

[Krytax123]

There's no logic with harem guys. They do this all the time. Go into sharing, swinging, cheating games. Demand optional harem route and the choice not to play core game route. Dev half heartedly complies and gives choices hoping it will draw in a larger pledge base.
Backfires and harem pirates just complain more about the game and still don't financially support the dev.

Thats very much a matter of definition, im not a harem guy yet wont share devon on my main pt if possible without making the flow of the game seem weird.

Youre sounding like you want to gatekeep this avn to people who just want to swing (or watch ..) all the fucking time.

I like this game because it feels like realistic (okay maybe too easy but you get the gist) college relationships and fun times, i think its fun to tag team a girl but im not playing this game simply because its "a sharing/cheating/swinging" game, has the dev ever declared it as such or is that just your opinion?

I would just call it a avn with realistic (over the top) sexual college adventures displayed, makes it a more immersive and believeable experience.

I will have a sharing devon pt too, but you guys kinda trying to shame the guy because he doesnt want to share the gf character (but is fine with sharing other girls) is kinda stupid imo.

Sharing devon (this fast) actually made the game/experience less realistic to me, they are a couple for like 1 day and just had sex once, usually in the beginnig you dont need to "spice things up" as youre crazy for each other anyway esp at college lol

Feels more like mc was looking for a girl to share than for a girlfriend.

 

[Jacowboy]

Major path bug. The dialogue is if you've met and talked with Jenn.

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yeah I got that too... but the game is still buggy, so I ignored it... I'm hoping the dev will fix the game at some point...

I mean, she sort of is
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I mean, sure fair enough, but still, I'd prefer Misty over Devon...

 

[3J1E]

This is a sharing game, you are correct it's not going to be right for you. This will be others sharing their girls with the MC and him doing the same. You have the choice here to not share Devon but as the developer himself says..

Yeah, I'm just moaning, I know it's on me. The game is clear about what it is, although I do think some parts are badly implemented and the lack of choice with misty is really bad design regardless. Even if I was into sharing I'd always want to be able to choose who I was doing it with, particularly if it's going to railroad me down a particular path.

It's one of those odd ones where there's a LI I really like stuck in a game I really don't! Will probably keep checking back just to skip to the Devon scenes, but it's never going to be my thing and that's fine.

 

[kev4U]

Meh I was fine with Tod given he shared his girl with you first.

If Devon starts wanting to fuck others well...we'll see I guess.

As I don't find any of the other guys worth it. Maybe Bob can be given a BJ at some point?

Still I'm more interested in the elaborate game that was orchestrated for the MC and who is the mastermind behind it.

 

[Maximilian87]

Major path bug. The dialogue is if you've met and talked with Jenn.

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dont even get me started on the botched variables.... its fucking annoying, and the dev had time to fix them, but he didn't.
he wants the money, he wants all sorts of players, but he then decides to shove paths down your throat, not fix his own broken script, trying to push players into a singled out option..... arent we like sharing all other sluts in this stupid college? another thing is the forced misty fuck, in my main playtrough i just went to town on her, if it is forced then she will be getting her ass fucked while screaming how much she likes it to her cuck boyfriend, also Todd was annoying as fuck this update. the scene at the PB is ALL FORCED, EVEN IF YOU TELL YOUR EX TO FUCK OFF, you will see her (the bunny) getting railed trough a glass, and not even wonder if thats her or anything... again BOTCHED VARIABLES...NO AGENCY, pretty much what you chose in the PB does not matter. next morning you will be singing of how AWESOME it was in the PB... like bro, what???.... what i liked about this game, was that it feels like you have agency and choice, but as some people are pointing out, the dev wont let us make that many impactful choices moving forward anyway. so yeah, not sure where to go from here, ill wait for next update, see if he gives more attention to other girls as well, and see what happens with this devon thing... idk...

 

[blkcrow20]

dont even get me started on the botched variables.... its fucking annoying, and the dev had time to fix them, but he didn't.
he wants the money, he wants all sorts of players, but he then decides to shove paths down your throat, not fix his own broken script, trying to push players into a singled out option..... arent we like sharing all other sluts in this stupid college? another thing is the forced misty fuck, in my main playtrough i just went to town on her, if it is forced then she will be getting her ass fucked while screaming how much she likes it to her cuck boyfriend, also Todd was annoying as fuck this update. the scene at the PB is ALL FORCED, EVEN IF YOU TELL YOUR EX TO FUCK OFF, you will see her (the bunny) getting railed trough a glass, and not even wonder if thats her or anything... again BOTCHED VARIABLES...NO AGENCY, pretty much what you chose in the PB does not matter. next morning you will be singing of how AWESOME it was in the PB... like bro, what???.... what i liked about this game, was that it feels like you have agency and choice, but as some people are pointing out, the dev wont let us make that many impactful choices moving forward anyway. so yeah, not sure where to go from here, ill wait for next update, see if he gives more attention to other girls as well, and see what happens with this devon thing... idk...

 

[jimtra]

can we get a gallery update please

 

[HUNUTAN]

Overall, I liked the update. Well, it wasn't exactly a "wow" moment, but we finally got a fair bit of Devon content, so that's a plus. The only thing is, I didn't think this update was very big.

 

[Dessolos]

I am not going to lie the part about just a short alternate scene is kind of upsetting, I wish it got equal treatment. Devon is core of the game, and I feel like why even make it optional, if the option DOES NOT REALLY MATTER.

I don't remember that quote from the dev, or I just didn't see it, but I just wish dev gave more to the not sharing path, instesd of including basically a "fake option" in a way.

Look, I know this is a sharing game, and I have no problem with it, but when the dev said he would make the "main girls" optional sharing, I thought this would include at least trying to give EFFORT to the other paths, but its clear he just doesn't clear about the other paths.

And my main issue honestly is Devon, I am pretty much OK sharing anyone else but Devon, maybe one other, but mainly Devon, but the Dev just says you don't matter is what it feels like. Like I said I have no problem with sharing, but I wanted Devon to be special to me, and apparently its bascially forced sharing, or get basically nothing.

I am honestly just let down by this news, I was excited to restart the whole game, I was excited to reach this new content, I was excited to play next update, cause dev said Dean will get some content. But Why should I be excited, when I am told the dev doesn't care about any path, why even have the option to refuse if I don't get equal treatment of paths.

Like I said shairng is fine, but I wanted Devon to be special. I am just letdown and disheartened, was so excited, now just feel empty and trying to find why should I play this game, when the dev doesn't even feel like he cares. Rant over.

I think it's too early to say not sharing Devon does not matter , after all the only sharing scene with her has been a choice. Maybe you will be right but hard to say for now. On my main save I didn't share her had a nice sweet solo sex scene with her , sure might not of been as long as the sharing scene but I enjoyed. I did expect it to be shorter as well since for that option you just go home.

 

[Justaphase]

I think there's some fuckery on Aimee path, just the BJ in the dorm gives +10 lust when it is +1 usually.
So you can max out her lust by being vanilla.

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Major path bug. The dialogue is if you've met and talked with Jenn.

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If you do spot any bugs then tag Cookie Kiss here in your post and he will get them fixed in a future patch. A few bugs are always going to slip through the cracks.

 

[bobi67]

Very hot sharing update

 

[hobobobb]

I have a question about this game.

What does the NTR toggle in the Options menu actually change?

I downloaded it because it didn't have a NTR tag and the Dev logs said that sharing and swinging were completly optional.
I was surprised to see that the game has a NTR On / NTR Off option in the menu. I've played through the game, with the NTR toggled off and franky it still isn't for me. As even with the NTR turned off it falls into the too many "other dicks" catagory.

That said, the point of this post is not to complain or rage on the game, I am genuinly curious what this NTR toggle actually changes.

 

[Maxwell D]

Pretty good college game.
I like that there is an option to not share.
Nice to have a path for pure bulls and not locked into swingers.

Only complaint I have is the lack of believability about Graham, Todd, JamJam, and Joe Dirt all wanting MC to sleep with their girlfriends.

What are the odds of all these dudes at the same college having a niche kink or request.

Every single guy being carefree about other dudes sleeping with their girlfriends/wives/daughters breaks immersion.
It's like something is in the water in that town.

If Todd or Graham became curious about the concept from JamJam, that would have been more believable.
Then the MC getting a reputation of being into that with an impressive package, causing them to request him to fulfill that kink.

Or if it was some cool or hip fad at the college that was spreading and part of the campus culture.
I just thought there needed to be a more believable scenario.

Some of the older adults being comfortable about it make sense if they've been in the Pink Box club for years.
The male students all being into that right off the bat broke immersion.

The story needs to emphasize the MC being exceptionally attractive despite his model.
There needs to be a reason why the girls are instantly swooning and crushing on him.
Also, why is every single teacher an absolute creep?
Are there any normal dudes in this town that aren't perverts or swingers?

It was a bit much having JamJam, Graham, Todd and Joe Dirt all pushing their girls on the MC, with some barely knowing him.

There should be more jealousy, uncomfortableness, mixed feelings, cheating, regret, and scandal.
Everyone goes from 0 to 100 immediately like it's no big deal.
People don't change from vanilla to depraved instantly.
If they did such a drastic 180 turn instantly, it would surely cause internal conflict.

Criticism aside, it's solid and I'll check out future chapters.

 

[Justaphase]

Pretty good college game.
I like that there is an option to not share.
Nice to have a path for pure bulls and not locked into swingers.

Only complaint I have is the lack of believability about Graham, Todd, JamJam, and Joe Dirt all wanting MC to sleep with their girlfriends.

What are the odds of all these dudes at the same college having a niche kink or request.

Every single guy being carefree about other dudes sleeping with their girlfriends/wives/daughters breaks immersion.
It's like something is in the water in that town.

If Todd or Graham became curious about the concept from JamJam, that would have been more believable.
Then the MC getting a reputation of being into that with an impressive package, causing them to request him to fulfill that kink.

Or if it was some cool or hip fad at the college that was spreading and part of the campus culture.
I just thought there needed to be a more believable scenario.

Some of the older adults being comfortable about it make sense if they've been in the Pink Box club for years.
The male students all being into that right off the bat broke immersion.

The story needs to emphasize the MC being exceptionally attractive despite his model.
There needs to be a reason why the girls are instantly swooning and crushing on him.
Also, why is every single teacher an absolute creep?
Are there any normal dudes in this town that aren't perverts or swingers?

It was a bit much having JamJam, Graham, Todd and Joe Dirt all pushing their girls on the MC, with some barely knowing him.

There should be more jealousy, uncomfortableness, mixed feelings, cheating, regret, and scandal.
Everyone goes from 0 to 100 immediately like it's no big deal.
People don't change from vanilla to depraved instantly.
If they did such a drastic 180 turn instantly, it would surely cause internal conflict.

Criticism aside, it's solid and I'll check out future chapters.

Because VN's are known for their realism and believability right? Should all of the girls ignore him? Should they all walk around looking down, being addicted to their phones with giant headphones on their head? Should there be more ugly fat liberal chicks? Anything else you want with your college realism?
It's just a fun college game with hot girls, where they enjoy sex and in most cases sharing.

 

[Maxwell D]

Because VN's are known for their realism and believability right? Should all of the girls ignore him? Should they all walk around looking down, being addicted to their phones with giant headphones on their head? Should there be more ugly fat liberal chicks? Anything else you want with your college realism?
It's just a fun college game with hot girls, where they enjoy sex and in most cases sharing.

I'm talking about believable characters with believable motives.
There are quite a few stand-outs on this site that pass that test.

Being A DIK for example.
I also play non-lewd visual novels like Mask of the Rose which is quite good in those areas.
They don't have to be perfect, just don't completely break immersion.

It's like saying Grand Theft Auto shouldn't have good writing and characters because it's a violence game.
Just because a novel has sex, doesn't mean you excuse its faults.

Constructive criticism is a good thing.

I'm not saying to add liberal chicks.
But make characters consistent with their environment and setting.

The story doesn't give believable reasoning for why everyone is swinging left, swinging right.
Why everyone values pleasure and hedonism above all else in this town's culture.
Why every girl instantly falls for the MC.
What value is sharing if the characters feel like soulless dolls instead of characters you get invested in?

I personally don't play for the sharing, so I'm happy that I can avoid it and still have a decent experience.
My criticism is that the game's world could feel more immersive and alive with characters that you care about.
Instead the immersion is not there, the characters do not draw you in, and don't feel believable.

This visual novel is not so bad that it cannot be improved.
I'd even say it's solid with a lot of room for improvement.
There is potential, which is why I even bothered to share my criticisms.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Then just make this game kinetic then. Like I said it was just a Devon want. Make her non sharing path good too. Dev literally said we can share who we are with from the beginning. Didn't say anything about no content or very very little on those paths. Just don't give choices if this is the route he is going. I actually liked this dev, seems he took good feedback, responded here, guess I was wrong, he is just another liar and bad dev, shame, I was excited for this update.

It's far from kinetic tho - I get you're referring to the choice to go home after pool or go to Todd n MIsty's but there's far more choices UNDER that option. In other words, it'd be more accurate to say if a player isn't down with ANY kind of group sex shenanigans, then i'd suggest they play something else. But if a player is the type who's fine with that stuff but just wants some choices in the moment, it already has that. When card game finishes, you can egg devon on for more or just get blown then and there.

I have a question about this game.

What does the NTR toggle in the Options menu actually change?

I downloaded it because it didn't have a NTR tag and the Dev logs said that sharing and swinging were completly optional.
I was surprised to see that the game has a NTR On / NTR Off option in the menu. I've played through the game, with the NTR toggled off and franky it still isn't for me. As even with the NTR turned off it falls into the too many "other dicks" catagory.

That said, the point of this post is not to complain or rage on the game, I am genuinly curious what this NTR toggle actually changes.

It looks like he hasn't yet implemented that toggle yet. If you're looking for a harem power fantasy tho, this aint it - there's bound to be fuckfests here.

 

[Maxwell D]

It's far from kinetic tho - I get you're referring to the choice to go home after pool or go to Todd n MIsty's but there's far more choices UNDER that option. In other words, it'd be more accurate to say if a player isn't down with ANY kind of group sex shenanigans, then i'd suggest they play something else. But if a player is the type who's fine with that stuff but just wants some choices in the moment, it already has that. When card game finishes, you can egg devon on for more or just get blown then and there.

It looks like he hasn't yet implemented that toggle yet. If you're looking for a harem power fantasy tho, this aint it - there's bound to be fuckfests here.

I'm a non-sharing player.
I thought that the choice structure was implemented fairly.

There was the option to completely skip the hangout with Misty and Todd.
You could still hangout with them as a non-sharing player..
If you did hangout with them, your previous choices about sharing affected how Devon behaved.
In my playthrough, she wouldn't cross boundaries and was monogamous to the MC.

It would have been better if the MC could still interact with Misty during the dare game, while Devon refused, for non-sharing players that prefer a bull MC, and Devon as a cuckqueen.

Ah, I was wondering if that toggle did anything in-game because it didn't seem to affect the gallery.

 

[Justaphase]

I'm a non-sharing player.
I thought that the choice structure was implemented fairly.

There was the option to completely skip the hangout with Misty and Todd.
You could still hangout with them as a non-sharing player..
If you did hangout with them, your previous choices about sharing affected how Devon behaved.
In my playthrough, she wouldn't cross boundaries and was monogamous to the MC.

It would have been better if the MC could still interact with Misty during the dare game, while Devon refused, for non-sharing players that prefer a bull MC.

Ah, I was wondering if that toggle did anything in-game because it didn't seem to affect the gallery.

I reposted this quote from the developer earlier today. Like I said in that post, I can't see this game being the type where you can go and fuck every girl you want and have Devon sat in her room waiting for him to come and visit. She wants to be a part of whatever the MC is up to, not ignored while he's off having threesomes, orgies or whatever.

Event six has a lot of possible "First's" for Devon. It was a task to make all the possible options happen. I feel like the more we progress the more I won't need to do things like.. Say.. No.. Don't share Devon with your best friend Todd. Though I said I'd make it optional. So I did.
It's going to be a VERY boring game if you didn't.

 

[Maxwell D]

I reposted this quote from the developer earlier today. Like I said in that post, I can't see this game being the type where you can go and fuck every girl you want and have Devon sat in her room waiting for him to come and visit. She wants to be a part of whatever the MC is up to, not ignored while he's off having threesomes, orgies or whatever.

Cuckqueens can be involved in many ways without being intimate with another guy.
She seems to have cuckqueen inclinations and is obeying what the MC wants of her.

The MC already can screw almost every girl.
I personally don't like harems, so I'm glad there is none.
This MC can be in a relationship with a cuckqueen while having many side-conquests.

There are even jealousy variables with Aimee.
If any of the other ladies get too attached to the MC, it could cause some drama.
Which is believable and I hope that is played into more.