VN Ren'Py Mayfly [v0.2 Reset] [JasonTon]

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The_Barbarois

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is the music and lewd audio supposed to be on the same volume slider, most of the time I can just hear music it would be nice to separate the two
 
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sexypeanut

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Just played this one.

Fantastic renders - On par with the very best HS2 can offer. Kudos to the devs!
There are lots of music, although some parts were silent.
The girls are hella cute and have distinct personalities. The only one I'm not really interested in is the Hunter (Jinin's sister; forgot her name. Raven?)
The plot started quite slow, but it ended up catching some steam. The 0.2 update looks so much like Eternum... the same 'more real than real life' VR stuff. I'm more interested in the real life stuff, so I hope the devs will go back to it in 0.3.
I like that there are action right off the bat (no 'starway to heaven'), although I thought the stuff with the step-sister would take a bit more of time to happen.

All in all, a very promising start and I'll keep tabs on it!

PS: I've noticed some loop errors with Bunny's scene.
 
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Jas0nTon said:
Well, writing remains a work in progress for me—I'm actively refining my craft
Currently, I struggle to condense narrative arcs effectively within limited word counts, which sometimes causes storylines to spiral into convoluted tangles... I sincerely apologize for this
Click to expand...

This bulge is perfect:love::love: Please don't stop with thatxDD
 
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I tried. I really did. I tried to follow the convoluted plot that seemed to veer off in random directions and then go back to it's starting line back and forth. I overlooked all the stolen story elements and blatantly ripped off scenes. But I got into the part that was basically Eternum and went "Nope, I'm done."

It's a game that is trying so hard to be Eternum but it's not, the writing just isn't there. So much of the story is introduced to the player first-handedly so a lot of the pacing is just all over the place. We keep getting introduced to new characters and new elements before anything progresses with the ones that were introduced just prior. I got done with Pandora and just couldn't take it anymore.
 
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Finally got time to try the new update, still not have big progress on the story line, even the Lis are not fully show in the game yet, don't know when the game will be finished or having another remake.
而且我想說,和網絡小說一樣過於文青病只會對作品有害
 
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Mayfly [Reset Version] EP3 progress: 40%​

I sincerely apologize for the recent lack of ideal progress...
I'm currently overwhelmed by all graduation-related matters for my university studies, and furthermore, my grandmother has fallen seriously ill. I must set aside time daily to travel to another location to care for her.
This situation is expected to continue through June, after which I should have more time for development work and will begin preparing to start job hunting.
My heartfelt thanks to each and every fan who chooses to support my work.
JasonTon
 
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3.80 star(s) 31 Votes