VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Measuring My Cum [Ch. 4 v4.0c] [Suzinak]

OVERALL 9/10 - this takes a premise i love, brings it something different and really does an excellent job of it. i only really wish you could customize how the MC and her/her roles are referred to. you can change the title of her character but not how she's referred to in the actual dialogue

VISUALS 8/10 - overall really good.
-design 7/10: for me but what this game does really well is the lower sex organs which is more like an 8.5-9/10 but for me the boobs are like a 7/10. also at the end of the day i feel like the female characters look good but nothing that special or that makes me say wow. what the main girl really shines is in her story
-bells and whistles 9.5/10: things like fabric, transitions are probably some of the best out there.

AUDIO 8.5/10 - the music is quite good. there's no sexual SFX which would be nice but it also doesn't need it because of the music. would welcome touches of sexual SFX tho. it could easily add to experience as long as they're not really garbage

STORY 9/10 - overall it's really good and probably it's strongest point
-pacing 9/10: really good pacing, almost perfect in terms of when content scenes happen and their ratio to context/build up
-dialogue 7/10: sometimes the dialogue feels a bit bloated or like it goes on longer than it needs to which kinda slows the pacing some too

I loved every minute of it. The story is really building up the tension. Beautiful renders and landlady. The writing is excellent. I love the way she behaves towards the mc and the way he loves it too. Became a patreon as well and hope for lots of updates. The only thing missing is choices. it is just a visual novel. Would be even better if you could also make choices that impact the story.

chapter 3 is amazing. new story, beautiful renders. i like the new story more than the old one. it is different but a lot more sexy. now the game is no slow burn game any more. cant wait for more chapters to come. it will be legendary!

This shit is hot as fuck. While mainly text-driven based as it's still in its early development, the linear and forbidden storyline really get you going. Not to mention the nice art style and storytelling.
glad its on hold and not abandoned

At least they have the balls to not hide the familial relationship behind "landlord and tennant". I played it long enough to know it wasn't for me.

How many games are going to use a mysterious medical condition as an invitation for some kind of incenstuous relationship? Hormonal boys have no issue getting themselves off, no doctor would prescribe or suggest the mom help. I wouldn't be so hard on the game if the premise wasn't already used by like a quarter of the games on this site. By the by, who still has nudie magazines and porn DVDs?

Look, if this is what you are into, have at it. You'll probably like it. The models are decent and the MC doesn't look like an Alcohol Fetal Syndrome baby. Though he seems like a beta simp-lord, definitely not the dom in that relationship.

It's an eye roller for me.

Wow, this is awesome! Like this is really good, it is still early in development and unfortunately the dev had to take a 2 month break (hopefully that'll be over pretty soon, stay strong buddy), but so far there is a clear level of quality present here. I was worried at first that the story would play out like some typical Brazzers porno, but its much better than that. Oh I almost forgot to mention, HOT MILF ALERT!

TL;DR Play this game!

A very good game.
Excellent rendering of characters (Mom is my crush)
The game has good prospects. I would like see a little difference from the original novel and the extension of the story.
I wish the dev to finish this gorgeous project.

Only reason its not a 5star yet, is because I'm waiting for future and more to come, since its a new game scenes and gameplay are limited, that doesn't make them bad tho it's quite the opposite its really good. 10/10 would recommend giving it a shot, it wont disappoint.

This perfectly shows that a game doesn't need an outstanding story to be good.

Many games come up with a complicated plot but don't have the means to live up to that promise. This one keeps it simple but executes that perfectly!

A major advantage of a having a simple setup is that you can focus more on other aspects. As a result the renders, the models and especially the animations are top-notch! The story, despite having a porn movie script, is well written with believable character personalities and dialogue (although the MC is a bit of a doofus).

One thing that I would change if I could advise the dev is to keep the dialogue and descriptions separate. Too many constructions like - "Hi son, how do you feel?" She asked with a smile. - get annoying and only distract from the story. In the end this isn't a book.

Apart from that, a very promising start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

This novel is amazing. Can't wait to see more. I won't spoiler me with the erotic story. If you like novels where you don't need Tolkien like story writing you are at the right place.

Animation 5 Stars.

I would like to have an option to have an "Aunt" not a Mom.

Short and simple but a promising start to this VN.

Renders look very crisp and attention to skin detail is on point. Landlady and MC both look attractive. The fluidity of the hand animations also caught me a bit off guard so kudos on that.

Looking forward to see how the game progresses

Very good Visual Novel.

Excellent quality renders and similar excellent animations. As everyone indicated the milf is super hot. Even the boy is good looking and that is important in this type of story.

This novel is erotic without being sleezy. How can one write a story about measuring cum? Well play it to find out. Well thought out, not ground breaking but well thought out. Good use of English language and seamless flow between scenes.

It's one of those games when an update is out, I will rush to play it. Now I have to figure out how the dev did the dforce skirt movement in his / her animations.

Very impressive Novel dev.

Review Ch.2:

I only stumbled upon it by chance, and I have to say: I am thrilled!

The graphics are great, the models are amazing (the mom is gorgeous, but actually the doctor is great too!), the story is also nice (based on an erotic novel). The game is a kinetik VN, so there are no decisions/choices - but actually I didn't miss them at all.

Didn't influence the rating from me, but highly recommended for music fans: the audio mod!

All in all a very good start and now I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Good start. The MILF mom is quite hot looking. I see a lot of potential in how this story could develop. The dialog is a bit simple, but has no problems. I hope to see more character development for the mom and son, to see why they are the way they are.

A good start. Artistically amazing. There is nothing to do so far in this "game" but I'll overlook this at this stage of development. Not much of a story either. Let's see where this goes. Dev definitely has some talent.

Review of CH2

If you've read the OP, this game is basically a Ren'Py / 3D port of a free erotic novel. If you read the novel, you know what you're getting.

The models are nice, the environments are nice, the lighting is nice, the clothes are extra nice most of the time.

This is a rather erotic porn game with porn logic. If you're into that, it's great. The mom is hot and domineering for those that are into that, it's an extra perk.

Each chapter is rather short, I expect that all of them to be around the 15 minute mark, but if the game does get up to chapter 10, as the dev stated he intents, that's still two and a half hours. Not bad, the pacing is quick. This is not a game that will be out for 15 updates over a year and a half with no actual sex outside of a dream sequence. Not pointing any fingers, but you know what I'm talking about.

The chapters are coming out quick, there's no choices to be made, it's already written. It's all about getting assets and rendering the scenes. Content delivery is on point.

All of that being said, the writing is what you expect of a free online novel. It's bad. Full of "I said hesitantly", and "She replied with determination". You know, pure amateur shit. This is how I write, and I avoid writing like it were the devil.

It's ok, maybe even rather good. It seems to be developing at a good pace and I like it. 4 stars.

I've read so many good reviews so I've played it and it's been a disappointment.

My 3 stars are becuase of the amazing renders, the great model of the mother, and that it's well wirtten. But the plot is so simple, so cliche.
There is no story, just sexual scenes. They are well writes, that's true, but if you are looking for a good mother/son story, this is not a game that I'd recommend.

Good start. The MILF mom is quite hot looking. I see a lot of potential in how this story could develop. The dialog is a bit simple, but has no problems. I hope to see more character development for the mom and son, to see why they are the way they are.

Amazing game! Loved the visual and the story. Curious to see what will be coming up in the upcoming chapters. Hopefully updates will be relatively quick and frequent. Keep up the good work Dev! All the best to you.

Review for Chapter 1 Update 2.

I don't usually review games this early in development, but I really like the setup for this one. The 5 star rating is based on where this seems to be going since there's not a lot of content here yet.

But what's here currently is high quality. The visuals are all good, but it's the story and writing that make this standout.