VN Ren'Py Melissa's Adventures [Ch.1 v1.03] [CosmoK]

[SamKassor]

yeah not really playable very annoying

Hello, we took the time to explain in Developer Notes: that the game is incomplete, that it is a demo (ALPHA).

Obviously, you have just tried a version which indicates what it is (imperfect, missing images) but this version has the merit of showing that it is built to the end. There are around 250 images in this demo, which for a first launch, seems the basis for doing so.

We understand your disappointment, but everything is built with patience and reasoning. We are cautious beginners and have done our best not to displease anyone.

The game is certainly incomplete, but it is a demo, an ALPHA that allows us to confront you and your opinions, and it is important to collect your feelings.

 

[SamKassor]

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Lol this can't be called "chapter 1" rather it would be a demo or concept of a game (or kinetic novel), since of the 5 choices I think only 1 of them does not generate a game over so practically the choices are fake (that is, you choose the option you should or have game over, and if you click once more during the game over image the game closes)

There are missing images (since they are still being finalized) and in some parts there are images of a sketch (the choice to see the crotch one was quite comical to click next and see that)

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The milf model looks very good, the Male Mc looks kind of effeminate, maybe it's the idea that he looks like a child or teenager (shota mc?)

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Leaving that aside, how the Female Mc works here dev, since all the "choices" were from the Male character's pov?

Anyways, thanks and good luck.

Thank you very much for taking the time to try the Demo.

- In this demo, Melissa (female protagonist) does not yet have any repartee and lines to play but it is planned in order to build synergies with Nahui.

- Reassured that you have understood and understood the purpose of this demo, although imperfect and incomplete. Thank you for your support and above all welcome and kindness.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Thank you very much for taking the time to try the Demo.

- In this demo, Melissa (female protagonist) does not yet have any repartee and lines to play but it is planned in order to build synergies with Nahui.

- Reassured that you have understood and understood the purpose of this demo, although imperfect and incomplete. Thank you for your support and above all welcome and kindness.

Does this mean that this story will be partially connected between Fmc and Mc? judging by the description it seemed so to me, especially since it is rare to find such games with such a plot between two characters.

especially pictures look promising

 

[SamKassor]

Does this mean that this story will be partially connected between Fmc and Mc? judging by the description it seemed so to me, especially since it is rare to find such games with such a plot between two characters.

especially pictures look promising

I want to believe you because it requires creating a well-constructed algorithm from the start with loops and tables in order to be able to structure the nuances of each choice. And that requires a deep tree structure.

This probably won't be the case for chapter 1.
It will be possible at the "synergy" level that Melissa can also have choices, but binary like Nahui. I am sorry for the use of this word which in fact suggests a deep structure, thank you for the resumption. ❤

 

[MAGO-DAG]

I want to believe you because it requires creating a well-constructed algorithm from the start with loops and tables in order to be able to structure the nuances of each choice. And that requires a deep tree structure.

This probably won't be the case for chapter 1.
It will be possible at the "synergy" level that Melissa can also have choices, but binary like Nahui. I am sorry for the use of this word which in fact suggests a deep structure, thank you for the resumption. ❤

Ah, I understand. Judging by the overview, I realized that these two may interact more and their future stories. well, the main thing is good luck to you and CosmoK, so that game turns out beautiful

 

[Enot1964]

I apologize for some of the offtopic, but I collapsed from my chair with laughter when I read the name Nahui. The thing is that in my native language nahui (which has a whole range of meanings - fuck you, go to hell, fuck you, fuck off, etc.) is a universal word for all occasions.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

I apologize for some of the offtopic, but I collapsed from my chair with laughter when I read the name Nahui. The thing is that in my native language nahui (which has a whole range of meanings - fuck you, go to hell, fuck you, fuck off, etc.) is a universal word for all occasions.

Yeah, It seems I’m not the only one who noticed this, imagine a guy with that name appeared in our city

 

[SamKassor]

Yeah, It seems I’m not the only one who noticed this, imagine a guy with that name appeared in our city

Unfortunately, we learned that Nahui was (also) Russian slang.

But fortunately, this first name existed in Mezo-America before Russian slang arrived.
For legitimate historical reasons, the first name Nahui has not been modified since it only concerns the Russian language and not the entire planet. (and no disrespect to Russian friends) but it's a case of chance: it's difficult to know the slang of all languages.

The protagonist Nahui indeed seems, possibly, to hide something irrational within him due to his origin.

If you want to know more, and it's fascinating here is a link on Nahui Ollin

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[MAGO-DAG]

Unfortunately, we learned that Nahui was (also) Russian slang.

But fortunately, this first name existed in Mezo-America before Russian slang arrived.
For legitimate historical reasons, the first name Nahui has not been modified since it only concerns the Russian language and not the entire planet. (and no disrespect to Russian friends) but it's a case of chance: it's difficult to know the slang of all languages.

The protagonist Nahui indeed seems, possibly, to hide something irrational within him due to his origin.

If you want to know more, and it's fascinating here is a link on Nahui Ollin

You must be registered to see the links

Everything is fine, and yes, I know that there is such a name since Nahui is conventionally said in Russian as “Na'ui” without the “h”. so it's normal)))

 

[Hysni]

Put a spice in this game let MC call her Mom Incest = Wincest

 

[homejorz]

alot of images missing, but interesting. super hot milf too

 

[baklol]

ADDED TO list if not abandoned

 

[Bacara]

The title suggests it's just a female protag game, but it has a multiple protag tag with male and female it's a bit misleading.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

I see Kermit has a cameo part

At home after the underboob view


Thnks fr shrng

 

[Enola Gay]

Nika from Summers Gone childhood?

 

[1879]

I like it a lot so far. Good luck.

 

[Effinpist]

The woman is stunning, the amount of missing renders is staggering. Maybe focus less on the number of renders of flowers and butterflies, and more on the actual characters instead when pushing out a demo to showcase the game.

 

[Albertant]

Great job my dude thanks a lot!!! that's the kind of game we're looking for after the loss of truebond

 

[akiyamask]

Amazing Work

 

[mad_hungarian]

Great start, take your time. Very good art! Outstanding!!!