I found the beginning quite dull, didn't care about MC life, his problems, Amy and her problems, the childhood friend sister and her problems and etc, too much exposition, even more for a first version, DmD keeps things simple at the beginning with little exposition and start explaining it as versions goes by, Melody tries too hard to set everything as fast as possible
But things gets better when we start teaching melody, she is an interesting character at least, more than D that had only her absolute innocence going for her
MC seems to be exactly like MC from DmD, but without the moral dilemma of incest, this makes him a bit dull as well I think
I think the girls models are on average better than those in DmD (expected, as Mr Dots now has resources and experience to make better models), Melody looks better than D, Rebecca looks better than Jennifer, Amy and friend's sister looks good as well, the only weak one is bethanny but I think it's on purpose.