VN Ren'Py Completed Mesmerized - An Intoxicated Story [v1.00.1] [The Dark Moonshine]

[Trasher2018]

The artstyle is not that great. Looks like The Sims models or something like that - but the added distortion or painting filter makes it even worse.
The facial expressions are terrifying sometimes...


The choices do not much - they just unlock some more "lewd" scenes, but dont change the progress or how she reacts to the MC.

I really like the kink - there are way to few intoxication games - a lot of games have some kind of addiction in it, but get rid of it ... :/. But I wished there would be more branching - that we could influence how she develops (more/less drinking > chance for her to fall back into her habits and starts drinking without our influence ... so much potential!).

Edit: Oh - and for what do we have the incest patch? There was no incest in the game at all - she is still just the neighbor.

Maybe a follow up game could have better images and more flexibility ...

The current game is fun - mostly because of the intox fetish stuff, but not very erotic or visually pleasing.

 

[Deleted member 3208170]

Hallo.

My feedback. I like the Story. It's good to see a Mind control game again in which the Male character is in control and uses it accordingly. I don't get why so much booze is needed, but nevertheless I always liked Mind Control and that's a good story for that.

Now the elephant in the Room. The Art style. The Idea to take a filter over it to give the pictures an impressionistic look is fine. Some Expression a too surreal.
But that's tolerable.
My Problem: I have some sort of Motion Sickness. If a game has too much Motion Blur, My eyes starting to cry. Witcher 2 Motion Blur as an Example, unbearable. Had to turn it off.
Heads up to the Artist, he has manged to get this reaction with simple renders. This was stressful for my eyes. It is not as worse than Witcher 2 Motion blur. But I had to squid my Eyes a few Times.

Don't get me wrong. Never had thought I could get that from pictures, but 3 out of 5 for the game now.
Consider turning down the Pictures with motion in it.

 

[Bloodguard]

So, is the neighbor the only Love Interest? What is the Ipatch for then? Will there be some family loving at some point?
I like the art style, I'm always down to try new things. Any music or sexy sounds planned?

 

[Chimp :D]

Ill just stick this here... The FamilyFunPatch isn't for the neighbor, it's for the people you actually live with that aren't your "parents" without the patch.

 

[Kronos405]

Looks interesting time to put it on the backlog of games I need to play.

 

[Bloodguard]

Ill just stick this here... The FamilyFunPatch isn't for the neighbor, it's for the people you actually live with that aren't your "parents" without the patch.

But there are no lewd scenes with them yet right? So, it's for future content?

 

[Chimp :D]

But there are no lewd scenes with them yet right? So, it's for future content?

Yeah it's pretty much just for the dialogue you have with them right now. E.g changing landlords to parents.

 

[The.xx]

The artstyle is not that great. Looks like The Sims models or something like that - but the added distortion or painting filter makes it even worse.
The facial expressions are terrifying sometimes...
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The choices do not much - they just unlock some more "lewd" scenes, but dont change the progress or how she reacts to the MC.

I really like the kink - there are way to few intoxication games - a lot of games have some kind of addiction in it, but get rid of it ... :/. But I wished there would be more branching - that we could influence how she develops (more/less drinking > chance for her to fall back into her habits and starts drinking without our influence ... so much potential!).

Edit: Oh - and for what do we have the incest patch? There was no incest in the game at all - she is still just the neighbor.

Maybe a follow up game could have better images and more flexibility ...

The current game is fun - mostly because of the intox fetish stuff, but not very erotic or visually pleasing.

Fair criticism. The game seems to be a linear novel with "Influence Tests" as its only mechanic.

That said, I don't think it's bad to keep a smaller scope so it can be finished in a reasonable time frame. They could always choose to do a more ambitious sequel once they get some feedback for their first game (not to mention more experience with the engine and its limitations).

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

So, is the neighbor the only Love Interest? What is the Ipatch for then? Will there be some family loving at some point?
I like the art style, I'm always down to try new things. Any music or sexy sounds planned?

No, she isn't the only love interest, we'll have the sister and mother in the next updates, so the patch is ready to cover patreon issues

We haven't planned sexy sounds but could be an idea! I put it in the to-do-list!

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

But there are no lewd scenes with them yet right? So, it's for future content?

Exactly!

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[Vrijgeest]

I will join the others and comment about the artwork. Not impressed at all. The story is ok but a bit too much on the drink side.

 

[Chimp :D]

I dont really get the hate about the artwork, I personally find it great... Better than the same daz3d and honey select 1 and 2 models you find on every other game.

 

[Vrijgeest]

I dont really get the hate about the artwork, I personally find it great... Better than the same daz3d and honey select 1 and 2 models you find on every other game.

It is not hate but more not liked. There is no catering for taste; it is the detail.

 

[sharpys]

Christ. Lay off the vodka. You're gonna pop a few livers before the summer is done

 

[druber]

this was actually pretty good. i guess its intentional that some pictures look like it got pausesd between 2 frames then? the amount of drinking straight vodka is ridiculous

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

this was actually pretty good. i guess its intentional that some pictures look like it got pausesd between 2 frames then? the amount of drinking straight vodka is ridiculous

Yes, it's intentional, some people like it, some people don't, we're thinking about it.
Thanks for the compliments!

 

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[supersomeone]

Are the spying on the parents scenes in the game yet or is that coming later?

 

[artepp]

Really enjoyed what's here so far. The art style is different, but still pleasing. As some have noted, the facial expressions are a bit over the top sometimes, but drunk people are often over the top, right?

Looking forward to what comes next.

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Are the spying on the parents scenes in the game yet or is that coming later?

They are coming later, in the next update or the following one (depending on my laziness )