VN Ren'Py Completed Mesmerized - An Intoxicated Story [v1.00.1] [The Dark Moonshine]

[Stil996]

Does this game already have a sex scene between the protagonist and his mother?

A BJ option a few updates ago but no sex yet, looks like maybe the next update might be it.

I wonder about the game's pacing. We're 13 chapters in which mostly focused on one girl, plus a bit of your mother and sister. We have yet to finish one route and still need to even meet 4 other love interests. Introducing them, building your relationship with them etc. could mean we'd be looking at another 60-80 chapters or something to finish the game. Is that gonna work in 2 years?

Yeah I think a couple of years could be about right, but just because the progress with the principle LI is slow doesn't mean they all have to be (she is his obsession after all), we got action with sis without much setup, and I imagine there will be other lesser interests that will be fast too.

 

[JennyTreibel]

A BJ opinion a few updates ago but no sex yet, looks like maybe the next update might be it.

Yeah I think a couple of years could be about right, but just because the progress with the principle LI is slow doesn't mean they all have to be (she is his obsession after all), we got action with sis without much setup, and I imagine there will be other lesser interests that will be fast too.

I thought so, too, but rushing the other love interests like the sister isn't going to be much fun if you ask me. They should still get their fair share of focus and time for you to corrupt them. Even with just 10 Chapters for each of them this is gonna be 40 chapters, plus the remaining ones for the previous 3. And then there is going to be action with multiple girls, too. Not sure if that is going to be done in just 2 years.

 

[Stil996]

I thought so, too, but rushing the other love interests like the sister isn't going to be much fun if you ask me. They should still get their fair share of focus and time for you to corrupt them. Even with just 10 Chapters for each of them this is gonna be 40 chapters, plus the remaining ones for the previous 3. And then there is going to be action with multiple girls, too. Not sure if that is going to be done in just 2 years.

"Fair share" is a tough variable in this context, for example you have the MC learning curve that that slows progress on your primary but shouldn't be an issue for later girls, plus corrupted girls could help corrupt others, for example imagine Mrs Lovedays sister turning up for a visit, who is then taken on the town to get drunk and subsequently brought home for the MC to play with,

1. Strangers are easier to seduce than "friends",
2. Drunk Strangers are even easier
3. Drunk Strangers related to your sex slave... well.... threesome anyone??

I have to imagine most of the girls coming into the MC sights will be more distant than his neighbour and household so much fewer Taboos to impede a faster conquest. Though in saying thata I'm salivating over what other family members might visit. Most people seem focused on guardian incest, but I tend to like Aunts more, not sure why.

 

[voyeurkind]

Just finished the update, and I ended up with 21/20 influence points with Mrs. Loveday.

 

[snakeplisskin]

Just finished the update, and I ended up with 21/20 influence points with Mrs. Loveday.

Haha so did i

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Haha so did i

AARRGGG! WRONG AGAIN!
Not in my game! Somebody punish the developer!

Oh...what. I'm the developer...

--add it to the fix list and silently walks away--

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Does this game already have a sex scene between the protagonist and his mother?

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[incest lover m/s]

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well, it's already a good size and congratulations on the game

 

[2382dudubes]

Alway have to chuckle when i see how selectiv devs like only the 5 or 4 star ratings.

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That's common for devs who don't seek actual feedback but rather want to live in a bubble to stroke their ego.
I too memed on that behaviour:

typical review-meme

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[TNT3]

great game thanks

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

That's common for devs who don't seek actual feedback but rather want to live in a bubble to stroke their ego.
I too memed on that behaviour:

Let's talk about it, because I don't like to be made a fool.

There is only 1 vote with 1 star that starts with " the story is plain stupid " and I haven't liked it.

And there is only 1 vote with 2 stars and I have liked it.

What are we talking about?

 

[Stil996]

Let's talk about it, because I don't like to be made a fool.

There is only 1 vote with 1 star that starts with " the story is plain stupid " and I haven't liked it.

And there is only 1 vote with 2 stars and I have liked it.

What are we talking about?

you should feel ashamed of yourself, not "liking" an nonconstructive review!!, YOU MONSTER!!!

 

[Mograx]

Let's talk about it, because I don't like to be made a fool.

There is only 1 vote with 1 star that starts with " the story is plain stupid " and I haven't liked it.

And there is only 1 vote with 2 stars and I have liked it.

What are we talking about?

Personally, an issue I have with keeping me invested in the game as a lack of an overarching conflict. A foundational premise of adversity MC needs to overcome eventually. Not necessarily a constant obstacle to overcome, but a subtle, back of the mind perpetual reminder of some form of drama, or high stakes creating some form of risk. While I understand this doesn't seem to be shaping up to be that type of game, for some people, it's a necessary requirement to keep us invested.

See this? This is a legitimate issue I've brought up that has the potential for discussion, debate, and general thought provoking concepts that can be addressed, rebuked, agreed with, or denied with accompanying discussions and ideas.

Bitching about what reviews the dev likes and doesn't like does none of this. It's not only a waste of time, it offers nothing to gain for anyone involved in any way shape or form except to make pathetic people feel slightly less useless for a brief moment.

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Personally, an issue I have with keeping me invested in the game as a lack of an overarching conflict. A foundational premise of adversity MC needs to overcome eventually. Not necessarily a constant obstacle to overcome, but a subtle, back of the mind perpetual reminder of some form of drama, or high stakes creating some form of risk. While I understand this doesn't seem to be shaping up to be that type of game, for some people, it's a necessary requirement to keep us invested.

See this? This is a legitimate issue I've brought up that has the potential for discussion, debate, and general thought provoking concepts that can be addressed, rebuked, agreed with, or denied with accompanying discussions and ideas.

Bitching about what reviews the dev likes and doesn't like does none of this. It's not only a waste of time, it offers nothing to gain for anyone involved in any way shape or form except to make pathetic people feel slightly less useless for a brief moment.

This is an excellent point. I understand your notes and we can see if there is space to add additional "conflict" or obstacles.

In general, and we can understand if somebody doesn't like it, our writing style is grotesque: we want to have something that is bizarre and different from the standard, equal, date + incest simulation with a boring grinding minigame just to add hours of gameplay and buy a costume/jewel to unlock a blowjob.

Currently, we cannot tell that this approach is a success, we have almost 50 supporters, which is good but not enough to dedicate us to it full-time.

Maybe we fail, or maybe you love it, in any case, we are trying.

 

[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.13.1 + IC Patch
Size 250 MiB

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Updated Android port, as usual.

 

[ktemanuel]

translate in spanish link

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

translate in spanish link

Thank you man, great job!

It's ok if I add your translated patch to the main page (with instructions) or you prefer a redirect to your post?

 

[ktemanuel]

Thank you man, great job!

It's ok if I add your translated patch to the main page (with instructions) or you prefer a redirect to your post?

if you want to add the patch in the main page it would be an honor

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

if you want to add the patch in the main page it would be an honor

You're joking! It's my honor that you took the time to translate it!
Added to the main page.

Please warn me when (and if) you release a new version. Thanks again!

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Added Italian Translation, grazie mille ragazzi!