It's probably not fair to do a full review on a first release like this, so I'll just dump my impression here.
+The character designs are very strong, not just visually, but also personality-wise. This includes the stepdaughter and others who start out involved with other people (you bunch of babies).
+The art is great in general. The various backgrounds bring the world to life and increase immersion.
+Surprisingly fun premise and likeable MC.
+The minigames are not too offensive. Money isn't a massive problem so it's not super grindy in that regard.
-The real grind is walking around the map, rolling down the mouse wheel like crazy at all times because it partially skips the extremely tedious transitions. You also don't quite know where to click to navigate without hovering over the eyeball, which is yet another unnecessary step. Kind of undoes the positive effect of the great visuals. Sandboxes should be fun, not tiring.
-The scenes you can get are single loop gifs, without that much accompanying dialog. It's good animation, and the scenarios are good, but they're over quick and therefore feel too little for how long you spend getting to them.
-The settings are very limited compared to Ren'Py. Everything is very limited compared to Ren'Py.
-It won't get compressed versions later on due to being Unity, for when that becomes necessary as assets get added.
-Seriously, why isn't this Ren'Py, it has nothing Ren'Py doesn't but lacks many things it does. Why do devs do this?
-Bugs! And missing features (like a gallery), but hopefully these get added later on.