Finally got around to playing through the versions of this game. Well done!
A few minor quibbles. I found a fuckton of errata, mostly involving punctuation [missing apostrophes, clauses which should be sentences and vice versa]. Minor stuff, since the writing is otherwise quite good.
One thing that does bother me though, if a character is described in the text as beautiful or handsome, I expect that to be the case. To me, Stephanie looks homely in some renders, and lovely in others. I wish she were lovely more consistently. As for the MC... Let's put it this way, Rock Handsy is only mildly less attractive.
In fact, Rock could be the MC's fatter brother.
However, having said that, I really like this game. The developer has a great sense of humor, and is able to convey it in the game. There is plenty of eroticism, with the promise of great sex scenes to come. We've already been provided with a couple of beauts. I also love the interplay, banter and teasing that goes on between the MC and several of the NPCs throughout.
Looking forward to the next release, which I hope will show Amanda and Jennifer modeling their new swimsuits. Let them challenge Sarah for most skin exposure!
A word about walkthroughs. I always welcome them, but found I didn't need one in this game yet. Where I think one might prove useful in the future, would be to avoid a bad scene where one lady dumps the MC because he screwed someone else. I say this since I am following a harem-style route in this game, where I always choose the option that furthers the MC's progress with each woman. Perhaps just a note of warning could be provided where there are those critical choices. It might encourage me to take a save there, in case I wanted to choose differently in the future.
