Will do for sure. Honestly I don't like the haha crap either, but nothing really feels right to convey laughter. I think from version 2 on, I may just ensure I have a laugh expression(hopefully more attractive ones) rendered for everywhere a laugh is needed, and just pray it doesn't add up too much time. Since I just typed that sentence I feel like a damn moron, of course that's what I should do, unless I send all of them to a stand up show or something. Sometimes wrapping my mind around the fact that this is a text AND visual medium is all that's needed.Don't worry, it's a good first release. I'm usually not much into the father-daughter-stuff but it feels good here. Yeah, the renders are sub standard but I don't care. I'm looking forward for the next version.
Proofreading is indeed necessary for the incy content during the cafe scene, but the rest is pretty much fine.
Oh, and one more thing: Can you please stop with the "Haha" all the time? I know it's supposed to be laughing but it sounds like the character speaks it out loud. "Where the Heart is" did that a lot in the first versions too and it annoyed a lot of people. Now in the newer versions the dev just found his way around and it feels much more natural.