Thermophob
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Making Madeline MC's mother would need two things:So you're implying that it's natural for a 9 year old to give birth. Got it...
Let's look at this realistically: She knew nothing of his existence for 25 years, yet she gave birth to him? How the hell does THAT logic work?
"Oh, I just conveniently forgot about you, because you weren't important enough to be included for the holidays".
1) Significant rewrite of story, not just a "new patch".
2) Replacement of MC's or Madeline's models. He looks like a guy in his mid thirties, and she looks like a woman in her mid forties. Without this point 1 would look grotesque and silly.