I like the addition of a second character, but to me it seems silly to have an old fat guy - since I'm guessing a majority of those who would want to see her with the 'old ugly guy' trope would also go for the black guy trope. In other words, it's kinda redundant. Why not have an actual attractive guy for the ntrs path?
Anyway keep up the good work.
In my first draft the netorase path would split between three types of Paul's preferences (muscular, shota and "ugly bastard"). And Player gets to choose which one you like more. But after I made a draft for the Bob's path, I understood that there is too much work to handle for my first game, and I decided to delete two other variations (it's just a teasing phrases from MIla now).
If people will ask for it, I could add an option for what kind of netorase you as a player would like to see more. Also the first part of the game (before Bob's story) looks like it needs fixing - a lot of people found it boring, and after playing it couple times I can agree with this statement. When I made the draft I thought that sexting will be fun. Well, it is not.
Not with this amount of texting at least. It will be better if sexting would be a part of the story, where Mila live her daily life and try to hide it from Paul, because she is embarassed. She would secretly try things from chat, make selfies and push Paul in some of the ways you like the most. Something like that. But for now it's just a huge infodump.
Anyway, for me it looks like it will be better to finish this game somehow, and then start a new one with experience I already have. But I am not sure, maybe it will be better to make this game bigger and better bit by bit. I'll leave the decision to my patrons.
Thanks for your comments
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