VN Ren'Py Mila AI [v1.5.3public] [aDDont]

[LanceKelz]

Ngl i barely interest in Ai works but this is really next level. also i hope in the next route (sugar daddy) idk if it will happend really wish Dev also add her nipple piercing it really so sexy on her

 

[Saerwen]

Ngl i barely interest in Ai works but this is really next level. also i hope in the next route (sugar daddy) idk if it will happend really wish Dev also add her nipple piercing it really so sexy on her

I didn't like an AI at the beginning but the dev clearly put his effort in making his game to not look like an AI. I like cartoonish style more than realistic one.

 

[aDDont]

Ngl i barely interest in Ai works but this is really next level. also i hope in the next route (sugar daddy) idk if it will happend really wish Dev also add her nipple piercing it really so sexy on her

Thank you! There are couple pieces in fan art thread with piercings and tattoos) Sugar daddy route will be later - for now I am working on NTS route)

 

[fxhnd]

We are waiting for the next update man.

 

[aDDont]

We are waiting for the next update man.

Should be this week) But I am struggling with my main job and kinda dragging my feet

 

[angel__666]

Probably this week)

You're the best! You deserve more credit for your work.

Among all other games and VN based on AI art, yours is by far the one with more branches, your writing are way better than others, and your release pace is great. I have seen other VN with a ridiculously simpler plot taking ages to release an simple update where absolutely nothing happens.

Kudos for you!

 

[aDDont]

You're the best! You deserve more credit for your work.

Among all other games and VN based on AI art, yours is by far the one with more branches, your writing are way better than others, and your release pace is great. I have seen other VN with a ridiculously simpler plot taking ages to release an simple update where absolutely nothing happens.

Kudos for you!

Thank you!

 

[Birdnman993]

completely nonsensical story to preamble a random fucking scene.

The whole Mila/fat dude storyline feels like the same randomness. Why is Mila attracted to a fat loser? If she pities him, why fuck him? She can literally bang any other dude as she does in the BBC route.

I really enjoyed the game so far, with the exception of the BBC route and parts of the fat dude route. But recently I get the feeling that aDDont loses focus and jumps randomly between routes which in turn leads to inconsistencies that disturb the sotrytelling.

Please focus on one route. Bring it to a chapter ending before jumping to the next. The loyal route feels like it ends midsentence for now.

I don't care so much that he's a loser, but rather that he's stupider than Richard Waterson or Homer Simpson. A beautiful little girl offers you free sex with no strings attached, and the fat slob gets indignant that she's playing with his feelings (Damn you, I want to kill you), and then we embark on an absurd story to boost the self-esteem of this freak of nature (go fuck yourself). I didn't come here to be your fucking psychologist, I came to see Mila get fucked until her brain turns to mush.

 

[slavegal]

While I really like the idea, I implore you to set focus.
At the moment it seems like you are jumping between routes and especially the BBC route feels rushed at the end. I know you are aware and you yourself said it's inconsistent or incomplete.

But please, before adding yet another scenario please focus on the existing routes and give them some polishing. Especially Paul's character feels increasingly flat and unneccessary for the plot. And honestly, the connection between Mila and the fat dude feels like a cheap porn scene.

Like the meme:

Entering a random utility room...

She: Yeah, well, this is the electric box we have problems with.
He: ok
She: but why is there a stack of hay here?
He: Well, give me a BJ now.
She: ok

drops to her knees....

completely nonsensical story to preamble a random fucking scene.

The whole Mila/fat dude storyline feels like the same randomness. Why is Mila attracted to a fat loser? If she pities him, why fuck him? She can literally bang any other dude as she does in the BBC route.

I really enjoyed the game so far, with the exception of the BBC route and parts of the fat dude route. But recently I get the feeling that aDDont loses focus and jumps randomly between routes which in turn leads to inconsistencies that disturb the sotrytelling.

Please focus on one route. Bring it to a chapter ending before jumping to the next. The loyal route feels like it ends midsentence for now.

There is indeed something called "pity sex", I know a girl who is into ....let's say "chubby guys"...it's rare, but still exists

I think aDDont has done as you asked: NTR route --- it's the easiest but hottest, has been partially completed. This route meets the expectations of major players. On the other hand, the loyal path and Bob's path are much more challenging. aDDont perhaps needs to deal with the ethical and aesthetic issues before he can advance them. As you said, the foundation of those routes is pretty fragile, so they are not completely convincing. Like the "loyal path" that I hold questions with throughout, how can he make regular sex as hot as an interracial gangbang? Well, I think it's impossible, but aDDont might have an idea, or perhaps he needs more time to think?

 

[slavegal]

I don't care so much that he's a loser, but rather that he's stupider than Richard Waterson or Homer Simpson. A beautiful little girl offers you free sex with no strings attached, and the fat slob gets indignant that she's playing with his feelings (Damn you, I want to kill you), and then we embark on an absurd story to boost the self-esteem of this freak of nature (go fuck yourself). I didn't come here to be your fucking psychologist, I came to see Mila get fucked until her brain turns to mush.

Skip it; I regret to say that I do that all the time to the parts I don't like . I played Bob's path once, and skipped almost all dialogue

 

[Aspili]

There is indeed something called "pity sex", I know a girl who is into ....let's say "chubby guys"...it's rare, but still exists

I think aDDont has done as you asked: NTR route --- it's the easiest but hottest, has been partially completed. This route meets the expectations of major players. On the other hand, the loyal path and Bob's path are much more challenging. aDDont perhaps needs to deal with the ethical and aesthetic issues before he can advance them. As you said, the foundation of those routes is pretty fragile, so they are not completely convincing. Like the "loyal path" that I hold questions with throughout, how can he make regular sex as hot as an interracial gangbang? Well, I think it's impossible, but aDDont might have an idea, or perhaps he needs more time to think?

I agree that the NTR route is pretty far ahead. But especially towards the end it feels "rushed", if you get my meaning. It's nice to see Mila being ravished by an evergrowing number of men. But at some point that's becoming boring.
The whole dynamics between her and her secondary NPC loses complete focus up to the point that he is written off without further ado with a single dialog. Even the aftermath of it is just a filler between whatever fucksession will commence.
It feels like half way through the story aDDont lost the script. He talks about how otrmented he is by Milas conflicting emotions, and yet, the emotions simply don't show.

I think the loyal path needs serious work, I think it's pretty possible to make it work.
I think a lot of people confuse loyalty with vanilla boredom. That doesn't need to be the case.
Ever banged your chick in a back alley in plain view? Ever had an underwater BJ in a public pool? Cumwalk over the high street of your city? Sex in a changing closet of high frequent store? Letting your girl walk around with a remote vibrator up and you playing with the controls? You don't need to be the AP for all that shit. Hell, my wife wouldn't do that with any other than me.

The point is, people are so enmeshed with the cheating stuff (no matter how you want to call it, like some fancy japanese phrasing, it's plain old infidelity, plain and simple) that they can't see beyond that or boring stuff.

Anyway, I hope aDDont will have some ideas that makes this whole thing work. Because, honestly, this gangbang by big dicked dudes stuff becomes increasingly tiresome. A woman has three holes and you can only do so much with that.

Oh, and I disagree, by the way, with the NTR and hot assumption. It's not really that hot. It's basically a bored chick getting banged by some randos while getting provided by by her spouse. That isn't hot, that's Reddit.
The only difference between that path and the others is that it is the most advanced. By the time other paths catch up and get the same energy in storytelling (which isn't even too fancy in the first place) it might turn out to be the boring one.

We will see. But don't cofuse loyalty with boredmo only because people lack the fantasy to make it exciting without introducing ridiculous big dicks aqnd more and more dudes with no backstory for some repetivie slide show sex scenes.

A game needs playability. And that doesen't come from eye candy alone. Storytelling matters.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

That isn't hot, that's Reddit.

The sexual scenes might not be your kink or to your liking but I feel like everyone can agree that the art itself is super hot. Honestly I would just even love a regular non-sexual VN about slide of life Mila as long as it’s this style.

 

[dnylive]

The sexual scenes might not be your kink or to your liking but I feel like everyone can agree that the art itself is super hot. Honestly I would just even love a regular non-sexual VN about slide of life Mila as long as it’s this style.

Agreed, would also love to see how the romance between her and Paul started, so basically a prequel.
Would be boring for most of the folks here (nothing wrong with it) but i certainly would enjoy it.
Or make it a netori game where she has to steal him. Could also be interesting and would appealing to a broader audience maybe.

But anyway for now, let's enjoy the ride with what we currently have.

 

[Aspili]

The sexual scenes might not be your kink or to your liking but I feel like everyone can agree that the art itself is super hot. Honestly I would just even love a regular non-sexual VN about slide of life Mila as long as it’s this style.

You misunderstood me there. I am not saying the art work isn't pleasing. I say that for a GAME, not just a series of pictures, the story is thin. I mean let's be honest, those pictures are the blacked meme come to life. We can post the meme with five bolts and a nut, five weiners and a loaf of bread etc. It's the same thing. I don't say the artwork is bad or something. But for a game with a story to tell, there is none from a certain point onward. No plot twist, no change in perspective, no nothing.

I don't know how to explain it, but the pictures could be posted in the art work thread and nothing would change, so little story is being told. That is what I mean. Playing a game shouldn't be clicking through a series of slides with besically no story anymore.

The point is it began with a decently told story but it faded out. It's like building up a storyark that suddenly runs into some sort of endgame without any choises anymore and then gets dragged out for length. It's not about the style. It's about the story, that's not being told. A visual novel has visual in it, sure, but it also has novel in it.

No shade on aDDont, he can't manage all that alone. Compiling pictures and writing the story? No way. And I understand that he got burned and therefore will not let anyone near his baby anytime soon. But for christ's sake, story matters. Otherwise it's just a collection of pictures. Beautiful pictures, but still... don't lose the novel part of VN.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I feel like I disagree. Yes the NTR/BBC route is rushed, aDDont has acknowledged that a while ago, but it still has interesting potential, there is the introduction of Liz, and then the sub-routes that go from there like camgirl and sugar baby.

 

[Aspili]

No disagreement here. It has potential. But that's the danger. Games with potential are plentiful and commonplace. And most are either abendoned or became something like a dime a dozen. I don't think that Mila deserves that. The artwork is incredible. The beginning of the storyline, though rough around the edges has a shitton of potential. I would implore aDDont to either get someone to write at least the outline or organise the storytelling but I think with his latest experience he is done with that for the time being and I don't begrudge him that.

I just hope it will not end up like Milfy City et al.

 

[Saerwen]

I agree that the NTR route is pretty far ahead. But especially towards the end it feels "rushed", if you get my meaning. It's nice to see Mila being ravished by an evergrowing number of men. But at some point that's becoming boring.
The whole dynamics between her and her secondary NPC loses complete focus up to the point that he is written off without further ado with a single dialog. Even the aftermath of it is just a filler between whatever fucksession will commence.
It feels like half way through the story aDDont lost the script. He talks about how otrmented he is by Milas conflicting emotions, and yet, the emotions simply don't show.

I think the loyal path needs serious work, I think it's pretty possible to make it work.
I think a lot of people confuse loyalty with vanilla boredom. That doesn't need to be the case.
Ever banged your chick in a back alley in plain view? Ever had an underwater BJ in a public pool? Cumwalk over the high street of your city? Sex in a changing closet of high frequent store? Letting your girl walk around with a remote vibrator up and you playing with the controls? You don't need to be the AP for all that shit. Hell, my wife wouldn't do that with any other than me.

The point is, people are so enmeshed with the cheating stuff (no matter how you want to call it, like some fancy japanese phrasing, it's plain old infidelity, plain and simple) that they can't see beyond that or boring stuff.

Anyway, I hope aDDont will have some ideas that makes this whole thing work. Because, honestly, this gangbang by big dicked dudes stuff becomes increasingly tiresome. A woman has three holes and you can only do so much with that.

Oh, and I disagree, by the way, with the NTR and hot assumption. It's not really that hot. It's basically a bored chick getting banged by some randos while getting provided by by her spouse. That isn't hot, that's Reddit.
The only difference between that path and the others is that it is the most advanced. By the time other paths catch up and get the same energy in storytelling (which isn't even too fancy in the first place) it might turn out to be the boring one.

We will see. But don't cofuse loyalty with boredmo only because people lack the fantasy to make it exciting without introducing ridiculous big dicks aqnd more and more dudes with no backstory for some repetivie slide show sex scenes.

A game needs playability. And that doesen't come from eye candy alone. Storytelling matters.

If you can't get turned on by vanilla, your corruption is completed.

 

[slavegal]

I agree that the NTR route is pretty far ahead. But especially towards the end it feels "rushed", if you get my meaning. It's nice to see Mila being ravished by an evergrowing number of men. But at some point that's becoming boring.
The whole dynamics between her and her secondary NPC loses complete focus up to the point that he is written off without further ado with a single dialog. Even the aftermath of it is just a filler between whatever fucksession will commence.
It feels like half way through the story aDDont lost the script. He talks about how otrmented he is by Milas conflicting emotions, and yet, the emotions simply don't show.

I think the loyal path needs serious work, I think it's pretty possible to make it work.
I think a lot of people confuse loyalty with vanilla boredom. That doesn't need to be the case.
Ever banged your chick in a back alley in plain view? Ever had an underwater BJ in a public pool? Cumwalk over the high street of your city? Sex in a changing closet of high frequent store? Letting your girl walk around with a remote vibrator up and you playing with the controls? You don't need to be the AP for all that shit. Hell, my wife wouldn't do that with any other than me.

The point is, people are so enmeshed with the cheating stuff (no matter how you want to call it, like some fancy japanese phrasing, it's plain old infidelity, plain and simple) that they can't see beyond that or boring stuff.

Anyway, I hope aDDont will have some ideas that makes this whole thing work. Because, honestly, this gangbang by big dicked dudes stuff becomes increasingly tiresome. A woman has three holes and you can only do so much with that.

Oh, and I disagree, by the way, with the NTR and hot assumption. It's not really that hot. It's basically a bored chick getting banged by some randos while getting provided by by her spouse. That isn't hot, that's Reddit.
The only difference between that path and the others is that it is the most advanced. By the time other paths catch up and get the same energy in storytelling (which isn't even too fancy in the first place) it might turn out to be the boring one.

We will see. But don't cofuse loyalty with boredmo only because people lack the fantasy to make it exciting without introducing ridiculous big dicks aqnd more and more dudes with no backstory for some repetivie slide show sex scenes.

A game needs playability. And that doesen't come from eye candy alone. Storytelling matters.

I can't say I totally disagree with you. The NTR Route indeed get less exciting at last because seemingly Mila has reached the bottom of the corruption. But that's precisely why it ends there. I think it's a good call. Every storytelling contains certain stages, such as: problem rising, commencing, developing, climax, anticlimax, solution and ending. No story can hover at the peak and keep exciting forever. The story will get boring at a point, inevitably; it has nothing to do with the content or genre(NTR or not, gangbang or not). I am from another content creation industry, and I know the length of a story arc is subject to the budget, not the number of good ideas creators have. I don't know how aDDont manage his project, so I won't comment on it or call it "rush"; he is the one to decide the pace because he takes all risks.

Precisely as you said, we can do almost everything you can get for a"loyal path" in this game ourselves in reality. Why would we resort to a game to seek an inferior version of excitement? I am not saying it's unreasonable to have the loyal path in this game, but naturally, I won't expect it to be as hot as something that should forever remain a fantasy.

But of course, "kink" is highly diverse and individual; some may find those activities you mentioned are more exciting in-game, understandable. The only point I made was: I understand why aDDont paused some paths before every player is satisfied with them.

 

[Taryana]

Should be this week) But I am struggling with my main job and kinda dragging my feet

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[Aspili]

Precisely as you said, we can do almost everything you can get for a"loyal path" in this game ourselves in reality. Why would we resort to a game to seek an inferior version of excitement? I am not saying it's unreasonable to have the loyal path in this game, but naturally, I won't expect it to be as hot as something that should forever remain a fantasy.

You say that a fantasy like your wife/girlfriend doing a cum walk in public is easier to achieve than being cheated on or cheat?
If your kink is being cheated on I can refer you to several ex wives of colleagues of mine. They are seeking for a new husband after they burnt their name in our region.