Ren'Py Abandoned MILF Warrior [v0.1.5] [Cheesecake3D]

[kulkun890]

Fantastic

 

[RedPillBlues]

Game definitely has a great deep story. It might seem very slutty at first (that's how I want it), but after you finish the game you should be satisfied story-wise and what's to come. That's why I ask at the beginning of the game to finish the game first before rendering judgment.

So are any of the male cast going to be non-super mutants/goblins?

 

[teaven]

Is that Sara Jay? View attachment 1046684

Does this Sara Jay look alike do anal?

 

[DracoBorealis]

I love it the humor, music and even those... hmm... unique faces all adding to the game charm, Chapeau bas!

 

[Arkanaaa]

" Fast forward a few years, and all the mages are dead except one, who you'll meet at the beginning of the game. "


let me guess... the only one left is the pervert one, and he will use her as a prostitute walking cumbucket.


because it's more easy to implent sex content that way. i know what i m taking about, my mc is a woman and she aint a cumbucket and it's definitly more harder to make having sex without wasting hours of blablabla or forcing her to suck every fucking dick around.

But heh, that's what people want. a dumb girl who suck dick all around, guess thoses people watched too much porn video and thougth this is real life LOL

" guess thoses people watched too much porn video and thougth this is real life LOL"... so true ^^

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Noximilien]

Turns out the game uses quite a bit of Final Fantasy IX's soundtrack too

Also not a big fan of how oily/sweaty everyone looks

 

[Trapezio]

I'm IN

AND No, I won't take any criticism.

 

[Cheesecake3D]

Turns out the game uses quite a bit of Final Fantasy IX's soundtrack too

They are custom re-orchestrated versions, but yes. Also congrats on your first post on F95!

Also they are "sweaty" because it's medieval - there's no AC (at least in this town; steampunk towns have some). I would assume people sweat a lot back then.

 

[Helmeted Smith]

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Game definitely has a great deep story. It might seem very slutty at first (that's how I want it), but after you finish the game you should be satisfied story-wise and what's to come. That's why I ask at the beginning of the game to finish the game first before rendering judgment.

I think the twist at the end is good, and kind of caught me by surprise. It's something original, tho a bit inspired from the classics.
That moment at the end is definitely intended as emotional, but...
it does NOT work as well as it should have been, because it was not properly built up. We didn't connect with the two characters, so we don't feel anything for them.

We didn't see him struggle in his childhood because of what happened.
We did not see the milf suffering in the cold at night because she doesn't have a home.
We didn't see her being conflicted by the possibility of resorting to whorehood in order to survive.
We only see her being a happy, cum loving slut.

If you want your story to be emotional, you have to build it that way from the start.

It's perfectly fine to have a cum dumpster funny game, this one is pretty good at that, and it's definitely fun (10/10), but don't twist it around like it's something deeper. The only thing deep is a dick insi.... You cannot have a cum cake and then eat it too. It doesn't work that way. If we do not feel it, it doesn't exist.

It's a shame, really. So many possibilities around that moment, so much potential for internal conflict, build up and drama... damn.

Fun game, tho! As I said 10/10 at that

 

[Cheesecake3D]

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I think the twist at the end is good, and kind of caught me by surprise. It's something original, tho a bit inspired from the classics.
That moment at the end is definitely intended as emotional, but...
it doesn't work as well as it should have been, because it was not properly built up. We didn't connect with the two characters, so we don't feel anything for them.

We didn't see him struggle in his childhood because of what happened.
We did not see the milf suffering in the cold at night because she doesn't have a home.
We didn't see her being conflicted by the possibility of resorting to whorehood in order to survive.
We only see her being a happy, cum loving slut.

If you want your story to be emotional, you have to build it that way from the start.

It's perfectly fine to have a cum dumpster funny game, this one is pretty good at that, and it's definitely fun (10/10), but don't twist it around like it's something more deep. The only thing deep is a dick insi.... You cannot have a cum cake and then eat it too. It doesn't work that way. If we do not feel it, it doesn't exist.

It's a shame, really. So many possibilities around that moment, so much potential for internal conflict build up and drama... damn.

Fun game, tho! As I said 10/10 at that

I appreciate the constructive criticism, but as a developer, there's only so much you can do before the game takes 6 months for one update (this took 3-4 months). I do the script, 3D, rendering, modeling, and "now" the code all by myself. - pretty much at this point it's only me. There will be plenty more fleshing out to come though, I did want to keep some things secret for future versions; didn't want to reveal everything in 0.1. Future versions also won't take nearly as long since I have a good supply of models and environments already ported.

 

[DracoBorealis]

They are custom re-orchestrated versions, but yes. Also congrats on your first post on F95!

Also they are "sweaty" because it's medieval - there's no AC (at least in this town; steampunk). I would assume people sweat a lot back then.

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I think the twist at the end is good, and kind of caught me by surprise. It's something original, tho a bit inspired from the classics.
That moment at the end is definitely intended as emotional, but...
it doesn't work as well as it should have been, because it was not properly built up. We didn't connect with the two characters, so we don't feel anything for them.

We didn't see him struggle in his childhood because of what happened.
We did not see the milf suffering in the cold at night because she doesn't have a home.
We didn't see her being conflicted by the possibility of resorting to whorehood in order to survive.
We only see her being a happy, cum loving slut.

If you want your story to be emotional, you have to build it that way from the start.

It's perfectly fine to have a cum dumpster funny game, this one is pretty good at that, and it's definitely fun (10/10), but don't twist it around like it's something deeper. The only thing deep is a dick insi.... You cannot have a cum cake and then eat it too. It doesn't work that way. If we do not feel it, it doesn't exist.

It's a shame, really. So many possibilities around that moment, so much potential for internal conflict build up and drama... damn.

Fun game, tho! As I said 10/10 at that

Yes it could be bit more serious like Nights in Suburra or this old QSP game Servant girl but for o,1 demo its still very fun game, I am not sure though if people would be ready for more realistic game though and one need to be grateful for every genuine fun entertainment can get.

The woman got from being naked and homeless to having a steady well paying job she enjoys to do and owning her own house in 24 hours, I am not saying its bed thing to do as long as game is good in what it does though it just can't be much serious after such easy start.

Fun game, tho! As I said 10/10 at that

 

[Helmeted Smith]

I appreciate the criticism, but as a developer, there's only so much you can do before the game takes 6 months for one update (this took 3-4 months). I do the script, 3D, rendering, modeling, and "now" the code all by myself. There will be plenty more fleshing out to come though, I did want to keep some things secret for future versions; didn't want to reveal everything in 0.1. Future versions also won't take nearly as long since I have a good supply of models and environments already ported.

I can definitely understand.
I wish you luck in the development and I hope to see more in the future!

 

[mehidontknow]

Jesus christ I've never seen so much early criticism on what I think is a very great quality start

 

[6U1YA3V]

The mac links are only 8.6 MB?
Something wrong or am I missing some key installation steps for MAC?

 

[AntiVeraX]

I have to say, after abandoning the previous project I'm a bit hesitant to dive into the developer's second project. I guess I will give it a year or so to see if it will have constant updates before giving it any real attention and/or pledge.

 

[Cheesecake3D]

The mac links are only 8.6 MB?
Something wrong or am I missing some key installation steps for MAC?

Need to update the link, still trying to get ownership of the thread so it's easier for me to update things. I'll get the mac links fixed soon.

 

[pekoi36]

looking good, hope we have corruption in this game

 

[spike0000]

Well.. This author's last project was also promising to me too, but..

I hope this one going to be steady.

 

[shotaboy69]

We need more midget and old skinny pervs